Dk & Disha: Mere Jeevan Saathi - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
lol....guli there is no need 2 ask!!...every1 knows its me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

just jokin.....lol.....keep up da gr8 wrk btw.....luv it wen u rite a lot!!! i get sooooooooooo much 2 read!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: guli444




Yes i love doing this!!!! And i only do it for you guys!!! cuz i ❤️ u guyz!!!!!!!

And dont say ask who i love the most.... no comments!!!!😆

Aww......how sweet Guli!!!! 😆 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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fab parts gulli...i loved them..pls cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
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Fantastic gulli....great part... 😆
pls write soon... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: td_dhoom

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Fantastic gulli....great part... 😆
pls write soon... 😆



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Posted: 19 years ago
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finally caught up gulli!!!!..it won't be for too long though!!!😆😆😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
yep!! give me 30 mins!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Part 9

Disha comes home…

She is sad!!!!!

Dk is walking

S sees him!!!

DK is angry seeing him

S is happy seeing his state!!!!

S: I always wanted to see this day!!!!….. I am enjoying it so much!!!!!!!!

Dk is looking at him

He isnt saying anything!

Dk is like whatever….

He starts walking off..

S's phone rings…..

He picks it up

He's talking about Disha!!

Dk stops

And he listens

S: Disha!!… who cares!!!!!! I don't care anymore!!! After everything I did for her…. This is how she repays me!! Only becuz what I did to Dk!!! She left on her own!!!!…….i don't care where she is!!!!!!!! I mean where could she go!!!! And plus I know she will come crawling back to me!!! And she will ask for my forgiveness!!!!!!

He laughs!!

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is cooking

She cooks and sets it on the table!!

And she goes in her room

DK arrives home

He sees food

He looks around

He calls her out

He's like did you eat??

Disha: No u eat!

Dk; Why didn't u eat?

Disha: Becuz its ur money so ur food!!!

Dk is like whoa!!

Dk tells her to eat

Disha says no!!!

Dk: Disha!!

She stops!!

Dk: Why did you leave for me??

Disha is confused!!!!!!!

Dk: I heard S talking to someone today!!! And he said that….

Disha: No its not that!!

Dk: Disha??

Disha is quiet!!!!!!

Disha; Becuz he's not the same person who I thought he was!!!!!!! And I didn't like what he did to you!!!!

Dk: But why did you leave that??? Its my life!! It happened to me!! Why are you so concerned about it?

Disha looks at him!!!

Dk: This happened to me!!! You had a place to stay!!!!

Disha: Yeah I was living in ur house!!!!

Dk is shocked!!

Disha: But I didn't want to live in someone elses house!!!! W/o their permission!!!

Dk: But its too late now!!!! I will get everything back! I will be the same Dk Saigal again!! But you had a roof over ur head and he was taking care of u!!!

Disha: Oh yeah!! I stay w/ all of that and you are here!!!!

Dk: Why are you caring about me?? Care about urself!!!!!

Disha looks at him!!!…



The End!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
Part 10

Disha: I just regret everything I ever said to you!!!!

Dk: I don't care about that anymore!!

Disha: But I do!! I hurt you a lot! I know I did!!!!!

Dk:… Look… lets just stop talking about this!! … Come on and eat!!!

Disha: U go ahead!

Dk: If u don't eat then neither will I!!!!

Disha is shocked!!!!

Disha: Okay I will… but u eat 1st!!!! Then I will!!!

Dk: Oh no!! I am falling for that!!!!!

They both end up eating!!

He's eating

Disha looks at him!!!!!

While he is eating

Then she snaps out of it

She's thinking why was I looking at him!!!

She's like omg!!!!!
Next day

Dk goes to his little work!!!

Not that much!

Disha starts to look for something!!!!

She finds a job to

It's a small place where they make you sow things!!!!!!

Dk comes home..

He doesn't see Disha home

She comes in

Dk: Where were you?

Disha: I got a job!!!!

Dk: U what?

Disha; Yeah!!!….. well I have to make something too!!!!…

She goes in the kitchen!!!!!

Cooks

She is tired from today!!!

She puts it on the table!!

Goes in her room

Dk comes out……..

(remember they aint living fancy)

He calls disha!!!

She isnt coming

He goes to her room

Knocks and opens it

Finds her sleeping!!!!

Dk looks at her!!

He looks and looks

He snaps out of it

He's like why was I looking at her?

He's like omg!

He goes to her

And wakes her up

Cuz she has to eat something!!!!

Dk: Disha??? Wake up!!! U have to eat… u cant go to sleep like this!!!

But she is fast asleep!!!

Dk leaves the room

He eats!!!

Afterwards

He's on the couch!!

He's like how do I get everything back!!!

He's working in this small place!!

Next Morning

Disha wakes up

So does Dk!

They see each other

She gets ready and she leaves!!!

Dk leaves too

They walk together!!

Neither of them are saying anything

Then they split!!!

After the day………

Disha is walking home

S follows her

When she comes

DK isnt home!!

S calls her

Disha is shocked to see him!



The ENd!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 11

S: So u are staying here??

Disha's mad

Disha; Yes!! I am!!!!! Do u have a problem!!!!

S: I don't!!!

Disha: Look just leave okay!!!

S: Why now all the attitude!!!

Disha: Will you please just leave!!!!!!

Dk is coming home

He sees

He hides

And he listens!!

S: Look.. I know you wont come back w/ me!!! So here!!

Gives her cash!!!!

Disha: I don't need ur money!!!

S: Better think twice!!!!

Disha; I don't want it!!!

S: Look I am being a friend and helping you out!!

Disha: Some friend you are!!!!!!

S: Wats wrong w/ you?? Ever since…. What I did…this is how u have been acting!!

Disha: So!!!

S: For a second I was thinking that you started liking him!! But then how could you… he has nothing!! He's like you!!!!

Dk is shocked!!!!!

He closes his eyes!!

Disha: Go away!!!!!!!!!!!

She's getting mad!!!!

S: Omg!!! You have started liking him!!!!

Disha: Look.. I don't have time for ur nonsense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S; U like him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ………….

Disha is quiet!!

S: How could u like a man like him???? He's nothing!! Look at me and look at him!!! There's a difference!!!

Disha: He has a heart!!

S: I do too!!! And this heart is crazy about you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!

So is Dk!!!!

Disha: What??

S: Yes!! I have always liked you!

Disha; But I never looked at you like that!!!!

S: That was ur mistake!! Or else you wouldn't be seeing this day!!!!!!

Disha is mad!!

S: U like Dk now!! But later you will regret it and crawl back to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He laughs

And he leaves!!

Disha closes her eyes

She is crying

S leaves

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He goes in

Closes the door!!

Disha hears

She wipes her tears

Dk knows what she's doing!!!

She puts a happy face!!

Disha; Ur back??? I will make dinner!!!

Dk: Stop!!!!!

Disha stops!!!!!

Dk: Why were you crying???

Disha is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!



The End!

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