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Posted: 14 years ago

Maan opens geet room

He turn on the lights

It is completely opposite of his room

He look at the pictures

She is a fat girl with spectacles………………………….

But yet she is badimaa 's daughter

She didn't work on their looks………………….

And he sees her books…………..

He remembers that night

That night

Before he is leaving for cannada

And geet came back after 3 months from simla…..

Everyone were busy in simran's wedding………………

And they are went to their kuldevi mandir………………………..

Maan and geet are alone………………….

Maan going to his room…………………

Geet Came into the room

He snaps at her.

Maan:What are u doing here…..

Geet:I Came here to call u for dinner

Maan:I donot want to do dinner with u

And why the hell u r talking to me

Look u r not a person exists in my life

And you are not a person..of my family

Ur a snatcher…..u snatched the two important people from my life ..

One is dadu and other is my mom………..

They love u more than me……………

And ur a orphan…….u have no existence

Geet:but maan…..i want to say..that I thought u will be friendly with me………..

Maan:ur the last person in my life want to see the face…………..ur existence will not taken by me………..

I hate u the core…………………………..

Geet:but maan……..i really like u………….actually

Maan:donot dare to say anything like that even I like servants not u………..u will be always my enemy of my life…………

If I got a chance………I will……………………throw you out of my house…………………….u listen to it…..it is u

At that time both surprise to find simran at the door

Simran:Shut up maan………grow up………………..

Why u always yell at her……………

What is the wrong….

Mom was right there is something serious problem with u

Look everyone loves geet………exceptu…..she always support u even you done any wrong……………………….

I know ur going for campaign …and ur dangerous………she just told to save u..as the race is extremely dangerous………………………..

That is why

Maan:No didi…….pls donot support her..other wise I will also……………………end m y relationship…with u

Simran:oh really……..

And geet tries to stop…

As he pushes her.

She falls…..on the chair……

And she gets hurt………

He pulls………………her………………….

And she screams out of pain…………

And simran……………………..stops and slaps maan.

And takes geet along with her………………………

Geet cries a lot……………..

And she decides that she is going back to simla…………

Geet looksa the scar…………

She is having at the shoulder……………….

No geet……….ur not the old geet……..used to cry………………………..

At the times………….

Ur strong………….

He treated u as a orphan……………………u r not dependent……………..

Ur independent.and also u need to create a special name tou

Ur not the old geet…….

Maan:I donot know after 3 yrs im meeting………..her

But I need to say sorry to her………………………………………

And she is busy In packing the bags…………………………….

In meantime…..

Are kal mere gudiya arahi hya…………..uskeliye……………..

Patahay poori simla…………..college ke topper hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Anne also coming………….

They both are very good friends……………………

Are dev………….and Vicky…………bacchii sab mil rahe hay,………..

Masti ……………

There im Vicky singh khurana……………..

With a mike in his hand……………………..his hand as mike

Maan looks at him……

Wahi Vicky……………….masti wala…………………..

Aaj iss ghar ka chirag………………the hot dangerous………….

MSK ji ka entry

And seeing angry maan he shuts his mouth

Udar tayeerea chal rahi hya……………….iss ghar ke sanskari…………aur bahut acchee beti ka………

Saath hi saath………..uss ke hot girl friend………………..

Jo pata nahii Australia mein rehkar ladki ban payee ya nahii………..

And pari snatches his head…………and says shut up..

And nan dini comes and says achaa kiya…mere chote devar ji bahut saitan hay

Are kali beta…………….

Uff.bhabhi iss liye kush hay………..kyonki……….kal inke parishani………..ka hal jo ara rahi hay………….

Nandini:kya'

Haa bachari//////////////bhabi hamesha apni bachhi ke liye parishaan hay………aur kal…….geet arahi hay…….aur who kali ko samalegee………………….phir apke tension katam………………….

Nandini smacks ……………Vicky….'s head…………….

Ragini thinks………

Kitne pyarii bachii………….hay

Maan wonders…..bachii…………..moti.pata nahii aur kitne moti hogi…..

And a girl come in…….saying hii………….

She is moti…………………

Maan sees her and thinks it is geet.

But she is pinky……………………………

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update plzz do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
i was waiting for them to meet.............................
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey superb Update....

Maan sees her and thinks it is geet.

But she is pinky''''''''''' is very nice...i can imagine maan... 😆 😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update plz cont soon i can't wait .
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Posted: 14 years ago

too good

after long time u updated

plz continue soon😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it
wen wil maaneet meet
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome..... waiting for maneet meeting....
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved ur ff.........dont like when maan is been so rude to her ...............i think its time for geet to prove herself............to show some attitude back to him.................he shud def feel sorry for his behavior,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,i hv added to my buddy list can u pl me for this ff update and any new maaneet ff u write,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thnks
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow geet is a topper. Luved ur concept will u plz add me to ur pm list.

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