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Posted: 14 years ago

***TREMBLE OF LOVE***

part 114


Maan was worried. geet completely broke. He was wondering what's wrong with her. She was fine this morning then why she was worried?
Geet still wasn't wiling to let him go...

It's 2 am... Geet gets up. Still petrified. Maan sits up straight way. Wondering what really have happened!!
Maan: Geet ka hua? Tum itni ro ku rahi ho? Did anyone have told you anything?
Geet: au me.... She started to cry again.... Our bacca...
Suddenly Maans heart was covers in pain again.... He was going through the same pain as geet... Maan holds her tight.... He thought this holiday have ended everything... But I guss sometime it did not!
Geet: that day... Someone pushed you.
Maan realized... That was true. Someone did push him but how did Geet know this?
Geet: someone pushed you on purpose! So.... So I ... Geet didn't have to say another word... He understood.... He made some few phone calls straight way. Geet sat on the bed... Looking at him.
Geet: ap pucenge nahi mujce kha Se ae muje pata chala....
Maan: Tum iski phikar mat Karo me shab Kuch pata kar longi.
Geet: apko bhi Dev aur uski patni Meera...
Maan dropped the phone instantly... Maan wasn't sure what she was talking about. It actually took him some time to digest geets word.
Geet: I was wondering round the mansion when I hard them confessing.
Maan looked at her in disbelieve. He couldn't say any other word. He knew well she was telling the truth. Geet never lies.
Geet: I couldn't believe my self. They knew that you loved me and that's why they helped Anu to arrange my and anus marriage.

Maan stood there frozen... Remembering what Dev told him about the girl anu loved.
Geet: but accidentally that night Anu had an accident and you married me.
Maan looked at her. He knew well she only loved him... But still anus name... Somewhere was hurting him and Geet could clearly see that on his face.
Geet: then they thought knowing me I would never ever fell for you... She starts to walk towards him..... And this will give you pain and will make you week.
Tears started to roll down....
Geet: but there plan failed again because I fell in love with you...
Geet hugs him tight while maan stood there frozen.
Geet: after that... They killed our baby... She cried louder... Maan holds his fist tight... They knew this will break you and you did....
Geet looks at Maans eyes....
Geet: itna par karti ho ape mujse ka Meri liye apeni andar Sab dard bhand karki rhaki.... Srefe mere liye... She cups his face...
Tears started to roll down Maans eyes...
Geet: you couldn't even cry out loud for death of are baby... Because of me.... Why do you love me this much?
Geet hugs maan tighter... While endless tears started roll down his eyes....
Geet: I love you.... I love you..... I love you....
She repeated over and over again... Countless time...
Maan rubes all the tears off... Kisses them way....
Maan: you don't have to worry about anything. I will take care of it. I won't let them go this easily.
Geet: ap mujce kue nahi batyea....
Maan: me tomahare akho me aso nahi dheksakta.
Geet hugs him tighter....

Few days have passed.... Maan haven't uttered a single word... All he was waiting for his confession....

Geet: suniye....
Maan kisses her forehead. "bolo..."
Geet takes his hand and puts it on her tummy....
Maan looks at her but confused...
Geet: I am expecting again.... She smiled...
Maan looks at her in surprised... He just couldn't believe his ears.... But this time he have to be extra careful....
Maan hugs her tight...
Maan: "I promise you I will never leave your sight now!... I will protect you and our baby in any cost...."
Geet smiled and kisses him full on lips....

Maan gets a phone call from the police and detective agent... They have gathered all the information and evidence....

Maan just couldn't believe his own brother would do such a thing. He wanted to kill him alive... Every time he sees him his blood boils like a hot lava. He can't stand the fake smile. He have to pay for hurting my wife and killing my child. He have to pay big time.

Maan tried his best to keep geet out of this... It's breakfast time... Everyone was present in the mansion.. Police and detective walks in.... Maan calls everyone in the main hall... Geet stood next to Dadi... Who was about to get shock of her life.

Dev and Meera confused and Anu stood there more confused then everyone els.

Maan looks at Dev in anger... Walks towards him and punches him hard... Dadi was shocked.
Dadi: maan! What is this? Why....
Maan: why don't you ask your grand son that Dadi.
Dadi confused...
Dadi: what is it Dev?
Dev: I don't know ...
Maan punches him again.
Maan: let me explain... Dev have killed my child.........….


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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazin! Geet expectin again, hurrey! Finaly truth wil b out.
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg omg
it was amazing
im so happy that she pregnant again
imn glad maan punch dev
he deserved it
do continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz wit more update
it was asimply amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg loved it...yay the truth is out...loved the update...Omg geet pregnant again...yay sooo happyy...cant wait for the net part
please update soon....pls pls pls

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Posted: 14 years ago

***TREMBLE OF LOVE***

part 115


Geet was in tears again... Dadima looked at Geet straight way.
Dev: bro that's not true.
Maan brings in the person who pushed him that day....
Dev was shocked... He wasn't sure how to speak now. Meera kept quit.
Maan: Is he the one?
Man: yes Sab....

Maan: what els Dev? Tell me you never knew Geet and Anu were about to get married?

Anu looked at him in surprised...
Anu: you knew!
Maan: yes he knew! He also knew I love Geet and that's why he was helping you.
Anu was disgusted...
Maan: could you tell me why you have done this?
Dev knew there was no way out. It's maan. He probably have all the evidence against him and Meera.
Merra: because you always ignored us in the property. Always gave us nothing. Transferring everything under geets name.
Dadi looked At his selfish family... Where did he go wrong....

Maan: firstly you have killed my child. Which I will never forgive you. The pain you put me and Geet through... There are no sympathy from us.... Geet started to cry.
Secondly... I transferred my property under geets name. Not your or anus. They are still there safe.
And thirdly... I feel disgust at my self... That once I used to call you my brother. Inspector take them way....

Dadi stood there shock. Geet holds her tight.... Everything seems to be messed up.... She fainted....


9 months later... Everything in khurana mansion was back to normal.... Geet and maan was in new world... With there twins which was due in less then 2 weeks....her tummy was huge. She could't see her feet any more. She had a skinny body with huge tummy... Maan used to laugh at her sometime but stopped when geet had a huge go at him.
Geets mood was high due to pregnancy... Always craved for weird stuff and poor maan had to do it. Otherwise his good night sleep would have been by by....

Geet walks to the dining room in a snail pace.
Anu just looked at her tummy and thanks god he wasn't the one who was becoming a father... He seems to calm down allot after he started to date heer... Geets sister. Geet was extremely happy for both. Anu was in new world with heer now days...

Heer pats her stomach...
Heer: both probably fights in there.
Geet: yes and makes me tirade.
Geet takes a sit...
Dadi: stop annoying her. Ae lo beta... Ae pi lo...
Geet: thanks Dadi.
Maan walks in... Sits next to Geet... Puts his ear on her tummy...
Maan: how is my child doing today?
Geet: bohot tank karti hi aj kal.
Heer: I feel sorry for you jiju... I mean they already fighting... I wonder what will happen later on....
Maan: MSK ki do beta hi... What els do you expect. Of course it will show some attitude.
Geet: like I have no contribution.
Maan: ha only shouting...
Geet: MAAN!
Maan: Se clear proof... This pregnancy really messing your hormones up.
Geet makes a baby face.
everyone laughs...

Suddenly Geet started to scream. Maan panicked...."Geet ka hua?"
Geet: I think its time...
She started her labour...
Maan called the ambulance....

Everyone was in panic as Geet have been in labour more then 7 hours now... Maan became extremely worried... Then suddenly he hard her scream louder.... Maan ran in... Holding the oxygen mask to ease the pain...
Geet holds Maans hand tight. He couldn't feel it after few second...

Both baby was born only 3 minute difference.... Midwife gives twines to maan... He holds it in his arm.... Small... There love...
Maan takes it to Geet... Who kisses them both.... And maan kisses geet.


2 years later ..............

Anu and heer is married... Expecting there first child.
Dev and Meera was in jail And Dadima have taken them out of khurana family but maan still kept there property safe.

Geet is ex gusted. All she does is run after both boys trying her best to feed them. Both drives her insane.
Maan walks in... Where is my rishab and abahi?????
Both jumps on Maans arm.
Geet fuming... Here take your son. I hVe enough. I hVe been trying all day to feed them.
Rishab: mama haven't made are favorite today.
Abahi: it's amazing. But I am not in a mood.
Maan: MSK don't tolerate this types of behavior.
Rishab: you becoming like mama.... papa. Abhai let's go to Dadi.

Both runs off.

Geet: all your fault.
Maan: how is that my faults?
Geet: both always on mischief! Like you.
Maan hugs her tight... "you promised a long night tonight..."
Geet looks at maan in surprise...
Geet: not to night. She sighed.... You do that every night...
Maan nibbles on her lips... What could I do if you seduce me every night...."
Geet kisses him tighter...
Geet: why am I madly in love with you? She smirks...
In one jerk maan picks her up....
Maan: because I am madly in love with you'.




THE END


hay you all'.. well at last it ended. Maan & Geets Tremble of love' I hope you all loved my FF' but now its time to say a goodbuy' where we will leave them with there twins to enjoy there life without any trouble' fare well'


thanks for all the love and support. I LOVE YOU ALL' I LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS'. LOVE YOU ALL'

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
AaaaaHHHHHHH finally Dev ki band baj gayye !!!!!😆
Aww, it so nice to reaf that Maan trusts Geet
Thanks for the update!
Awwesomee Ending!!!!!
Thanks for the lovely Story! 👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by TinkJia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for updating!
aww they had twins.. how cute!
dev and meera got what they deserved and its good Anu got a girl..Heer:)
great ending! but you need to start another FF now! LOL
keep up the great writing! love your FF's and am currently addicted to Animosity, Esoteric love, and heartbeats season 2!
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg i wen i seen the ending 😲 omg im so happy that she had twins
and at last anu is happy
it was a beautiful ff
it was fantastic
👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW...loved the update//
awww they had twins soooo cute
I am happy for anu at last he wasnt alone..lol
OMG u ended? why..
But loved the ending..
Awesome..
Thanks for all the PM an updates
Please keep writing ..
will miss TOL!

Thank you
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwww it ended. well it was gr8 while it lasted. hats off to u!!!!! cont other ff;s soon lol

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