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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok guys I is back..............hehehehhehe
hmmmmmmmm so I've been writing like mad in my notebook.....and erm...yhhh so theres a few updates coming tonight - see I love u all thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiissssssssss much!!!!!
U should love me too na......yes yes go on....HIT the like button and of course drop me ur comments plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
i want at least 5 comments (yes yes I'm being nyc) before I update again tonight!!!!!
Btw.............this update is dedicated tooooooooooooooooo................................
hmm lets think..........
erm Geet aka SapphireFlames - who refuses to go sleep even though shes got a high temperature and a test in school tomorrow - tauba tauba -kids these days😆
Shamima aka -shamima- for giving me wonderful comments😊
Afsha aka -afsha- for her lamba choda comments tooo😃
Chicklet aka maankigeet4ever - I hope you like the super long update broken in pieces😉
Roops aka rsroopali for being the nagging master😳
Lekha aka -Destiny- for helping me in nagging Mina👏
oooo and of course Mina aka mrininali - plzzzzzzzzzzzzz dnt end ur FFs.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😭
ok so update is below
Enjoy xx
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Recap:

Maan: Shut up Geet ..............I didn't say Shut up to you!

Geet who by now was totally numb by Maan's actions and the feeling of his long slick fingers and warm palm on the surface of her lips wasn't heping her in coming back to her senses....she was taken aback by his action -needless to say...so was Maan.......as he instantly took his hand away as he saw Geet's eyes widen with shock

Maan: Woh....Sorry *As he turned himself away from Geet and looked here and there, unable to face Geet*

Geet: ENOUGH!!!

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Geet: ENOUGH!!!

Maan didn't know what to do, the echo's of Geet's unusual outburst was the only thing that could be heard -everything else seemed to have quietened down except the sounds of Geet's echoing voice. He deemed it unusual because Geet, being the loving and sensitive person she was, never used to shout or scream, except if in excitement but other than that - NEVER!

No matter how angry she got or no matter how bad things got......except of course.... when.....things really DID get out of her hands all those years ago..............but Maan didn't want to think of that, things were different now. Though how different, he just didn't know - she was the same Geet Handa, who never took no as an answer and who has never seen the stop button when it comes to talking- he was the same Maan Singh Khurana who very much loved his family and was always the school top gainer in exams and was never into these stupid ideas of wooing the over rated make-up dependent girls, everything was the same.....well apart from the fact they were no longer "friends" but they were neither "enemies"....in fact they were .........nothing now (or so they think....)

Maan turned completely away from Geet now, his back facing her, as he stood there confused and ashamed for having been so dazed out.

Maan: Geet I'm sorry,....I ..I shouldn't have...well I didn't..I mean...what I'm trying to say...is..well..actually.....but you too didn't listen.......and just ...just kept on.. yap... - but Maan was interrupted by a sound, it seemed as if......as if Geet was....crying???

"OMG...no no what have I done now?" Maan's guilt was increasing, he was already feeling bad as it is about having shouted at her - whether it was by accident or not, but now he had also made her cry and this is not what he wanted. As it is things were getting difficult what with him having forgotton her planner, and then him having sat here talking to himself whilst God knows how long Geet must have been standing here feeling ignored and waiting for him.......and then to top it off she had the misunderstanding that I was saying shut up to her....oh gosh...things don't seem to want to get better at all.......and as if that was not enough...now this...he'd manage to make her cry.....this is certainly not what Maan had wanted.....ever....ok no that's a lie....because after what had happened all those years ago...all he ever wanted was to see her cry...and he'd vowed to make it difficult for her to go a day without crying ........but now.....now all of a sudden this was exactly NOT what he was bargaining for.......Maan laughed at his plight.

However Maan's self thought didn't last long as he was suddenly brought back to the sharp reality - Geet's sobs seemed to be increasing by the second. Maan couldn't take it anymore and turned around to face his worst nightmare - Geet's tears, but when he did, what he saw was heartbreaking........................

Geet was standing there with her back towards Maan and from her movement of her shoulders it seemd as if she was crying alot. Her face was hidden in her hands and her sobs seemed to have quietened down but from her shaking posture it was evident she was still crying.

Maan's heart sank watching Geet cry like this, he was feeling helpless.....it was tearing him from W*Hin, he didn't know why - its not as if they even share any sort of erm....."relation" if that was suitable to describe this strange thing they had between them. (Tishuu confused at Maan's words....) Maan wasn't liking this one bit - but he didn't know what to do, whilst on the other hand it seemed as if Geet was nowehere near calming down.

Within seconds, Maan was in Geet's arms (wait what??....uffff....)

GEET was in MAAN's arms (...uff...Maan ne tishuu ko bhi confuse kardiya hai....)
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So kaisa laga??? Acha na??? nai😲 hai hai.........erm erm erm..........
Ok I'll be back⭐️
Tata...... 😃
Btw not PMing anyone at the moment⭐️
P.S facebook = Trisha Tishuu (plz message me your username tooo whilst adding...otherwise you'll have to face my embarrassing email asking "who are you?"😆)
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Posted: 14 years ago

"Within seconds, Maan was in Geet's arms (wait what??....uffff....)"

ROFL! 🤣


"GEET was in MAAN's arms (...uff...Maan ne tishuu ko bhi confuse kardiya hai....)" Now this sounds better. 😆

and whatever happened those years ago?? i mean why did Maan want to see her cry? did i miss something?
PS: thanks for the dedication.
yes yes! i'm being nice. dont say thanks now for the comment. its ok ok.! 😆

PPS: I dont go to school. i go to the UNI! 🤢
and the test is not a school/UNI test but my coaching test since tomorrow is a SUNDAY. 😆

PPPS: Well written. 😳
Edited by SapphireFlames - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ufff school - uni tomaytoe - tomartoo same thing...and omg omg omg....I completely forgot it was Sunday tomoz........oh crap - seeeeee this is what happens when you work ur back side trying to update.........hehehehe
Yes yes I thank u very much!!!!!!! hehehehehe.......
Thank gosh I got no chappals at me - My umbrella is not fixed yet and the one I'm using at the moment doesnt protect me 😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
last 2 lines rocked d whole update luved ittttttttt
awesomeeeeeeeeee
n yaaa ur welcome frm this nagging master for being thankful n
i thought geet will pull maans hair or scold or slap him bt u didnt even let geet do 1 of those things instead made her cry
bt 1 gud thing tht maan was in geets arms i mean geet was in maans arms
tishuu ur confusing us soooooooo much
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rsroopali

last 2 lines rocked d whole update luved ittttttttt

awesomeeeeeeeeee
n yaaa ur welcome frm this nagging master for being thankful n
i thought geet will pull maans hair or scold or slap him bt u didnt even let geet do 1 of those things instead made her cry
bt 1 gud thing tht maan was in geets arms i mean geet was in maans arms
tishuu ur confusing us soooooooo much

muahahahahahaahahahahahah yes yes yes Tishuu ka aim saafal hua - confuse the world - woooooooooooooooooooooo😆😆😆😆😆😆
yes yes the line cracked me up toooo - I wrote it and then stared at it for a good 15 mins before realising what I wrote...hahahah then I thought might as well include it - 😛😛😛
ooo my nagging master u are sooo adorable - but keep it for Mina - she needs it more!!! chek the facebook page for her latest "deal"
hehehehehe ok ok ok update coming now!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Helloesssssssssss ok so I'm back but guess what - I can't continue my update tonight......... I had another two after this one but I can't do it today...........you're gonna have to wait a tad bit more I guess - sowwiiiiiii😕
Acha so I said 5 comments - hmmmmm I got 2 comments.........and replied to them...thats 4 and this is my 5th - but thats cheating na........ I wanted 5 different comments 😭
plzzzzzzzzzzzz comment yaar - hw else am I meant to update without my petrol to run my car????
acha acha ab bas no more paka-ing you with my Geet style non-stop bak bak
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Recap:

Within seconds, Maan was in Geet's arms (wait what??....uffff....)

GEET was in MAAN's arms (...uff...Maan ne Tishuu ko bhi confuse kardiya hai....)

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So....within seconds, Geet was in Maan's arms, Maan crushed her to himself with all his might - hoping to take away all the pain and sorrows she was going through because of him ( well technically he had no sudh budh to realise what he was doing whilst I, Tishuu thought I'd clarify things on his behalf [;P])

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Geet had just broken down after seeing Maan in such a state. The look on his face was enough for anyone to break down into tears as a reult of peals and peals of............ laughter (Yes you guessed it right - Geet was l.a.u.g.h.i.n.g at Maan's haal whilst Poor Maan was suffering at the thought of causing her distress)

Poor Geet (No chappals please at me being nice to her) couldn't contain herself anymore, especially after Maan had began his "sorry" speech - that was the height of it and she had to turn herself away from him in order to try and get some control over her hysterics.

Geet had just about managd to contain herself and control her laughter so she could put poor MAan out of his misery when she was suddenly swung around and pulled and the next thing she knew, Geet was up against a hard surface.

It took a while for everything to settle into Geet and before she realised what she was up against - but the moment she did realise she found herself already clinging on as if for life.

Maan pulled her further into his embrace as he sense her pull on his shirt. Geet too reciprocated, by getting closer into the embrace. Both didn't know what was happening or rather chose not to think about it because it would only complicate the issue and make things awkward and right now - both wanted to just live this moment and hold on - needless to say - both's minds had stopped functioning - if it were then they wouldn't be hugging each other rather pulilng out each other's hair or throwing things at each other - anything but hugging (Tishuu notes this down in her Diary of " Things Maaneet need to thank me for later in life") it shows that for once their heart was in control today - after soo many days.....just for today...just for each other....only today!!!!

Both stood like this for God know's how long - neither was ready to let go - both were feeling at peace - after what seemed like soo long - neither had EVER thought they could EVER feel such peace and tranquillity that too in company of each other - in fact no one would belive it - certainly not after the type of history they shared. This was the exact reason why they wanted to experience it to the fullest. This type of thing NEVER happened with these two - it was like a whole new concept, a whole new experience for them and knowing them it wouldn't ever happen again (little do they know, this was just the beginning muahahahahahahahahhhaahhahaha)

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Both were so engrossed in their little cuddle with delighted smiles on their with Maan holding onto Geet with all his might as if trying to get her to mould inot him and Geet allowing herself to be pulled in and literally holding onto the short so much that Tishuu feels, if they were to examine they would find his shirt to have holes by her intense grip - or the shirt may just wrip any second now.....

Take a brief moment of silence for these two - who don't even know how magical they look - well they certainly looked appealing because what follows will crack you all - well I hope it does....😆

It had just been a couple of minutes since both were hugging(yes I know it's a short time span but think about it guys....can you imagine how long standing in a hug for a few minutes (not seconds) would feel - try it....) but to them it flet like a few seonds of bliss (-ahhhh dreamy) ut oh Tishuu getting off topic here again

When both felt a tingling session near their legs! At first it seemed like perhaps a nerves thing, or perhaps the blood rushing - what with their hearts beating at colossal speed....

However this rather "tingling" sensation was beginning to get a little out of control........in fact too persistant for anyone's liking...... it was acting like a baadha(barrier) for them to continue enjoying their hug, but somewhere both were still very much not in reality as both simultaneously;

Geet: Stop it na Maan (more like a semi moan.....yet still very much dazed out)

Maan: What are you doing Geet? (annoyed at the interruption but still dazed out too)

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Ok.................so guess karo wat's coming up next............????
P.S facebook = Trisha Tishuu (plz message me your username tooo whilst adding...otherwise you'll have to face my embarrassing email asking "who are you?"😆)


Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Cockraoch..my Guess..hehe...ktna mazaa ayega na..hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'm just guess maybe ahem ahem or passionate kiss both parts stunning wow MSK saying sorry that for change pls cont soonnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome updates

Loved them both

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
Haha Omd tishu you never fail to make me laugh with this ff I mean a confused bechara maan and a pagal geet poor maan he thought that she was crying but nope the madam was laughing to tears seeing maans plight but maan the bechara who is confused abou his own feelings to geet grabbed her in a blissfull hug haye which he thought would comfort her too right it stopped her from laughing and enjoy their cute little hug how dreamy to right tishu and now I think maybe a dog I mean they are in a park skmeonething has come to interrupt their long session of being in each other arms wonder what it is anyways another great update and do wonder why maan wanted to make her living bad in the past I mean I thought they were frendw looks like a lot happened so can't wait to read more 😊

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