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Posted: 14 years ago
hi tishuu....
really sry 4 nt commenting earlier....
was caught up wid exams... it wl end ds week... n therafter will definitely try 2 comment regularly...
wl comment on d odr ff also once m done readng wid it...
i love d way u write....
n d story is awesome dear...
do cont soon.. n thnx a lot 4 d pms.. tc...
Edited by SaJan-SaJan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

My lamba choda response to Heena's comments.......People take a leaf out of her book - this is the kinda stuff I want to seee ' it really makes me WANT to update sooner!!!!

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Well Well Well meri jaan..........what do we have here? Hahaha well Ms. Parker ' not real name btw....erm I did have a moti si teacher but I never hated her.............she just chose to pick on me and my best friend(who happened to be a boy) at the wrong times .......i wouldnt mind soo much, because it was a joke and our class just laughed it off, but her rumours went round the staff room and then nearly made my life a little too much to handle....but she's good at heart ' I still do go to meet her sometimes.......
Hehehe...........maan is defo DREAMY!!
Omg omg omg thank u jeee for pasand-ing my utterly confusing aur uljhano se bhari hui HINGLISH!!!
Hahaha ermmmm Maan's sarcasmm ' oh dear do not get me started......n no we had to do drama in lower years and thenI chose to do it for GCSE and then onto Advanced Level for 2 years but no.....my major is Chemistry and Forensic Science. Kool Haina??
Who possibly can not love FOOD!!!!!!!! Kheer and Biryani have to by far be my favesssss
Hehehe u took the words out of my mouth..........JANNAT indeed
Hehe yes yes this is just the beginning meri jaan

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Awwww Im sorry for making you cry, but thank u soo much ' I take that as a compliment because it means that my dil ki awaaz touched your dil too. Yes yes it does turn out to be a second home haina.....particularly since we spend most of our day time there and learn our basics from there. Heheeh no problemo meri jaan ' ur drama is more than welcomed.........afterall i know EXACTLY what you mean....I miss D.P.S too..........at times ' thing is I see it everyday on my way to the train station and sooooo much has changed hehe.

Awwwwwwwwww u have a little baby brother!!!!!!! Hehehehe yes yes i know what you mean by him being your baby 4 lyf.....hehehe hope u dont fight too much...see i wouldnt know much because i am an only kid tooo... like our dear Geet....but difference is in this FF Geet is very clsoe to Pari and Meera, with me although I had someone like Meera.....she was from the very very distant side of the family and so I never knew her well .....so it was a tad bit difficult at times...particularly cos most of my friends would go off with their siblings at playtime. Hehehehe no you do not need to stop....i like hearing you share your life ki kahaani with me.....makes me feel lucky enuf to know you trust me to know......(and the other readers ofcourse).......

I wish I had a time machine tooo.......hehehehe I also giving you bohot saari Jhappiyan te hazoron pappiyun......... and together we shall go jhooming!!!!! Hehehe

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Hahahahaha thats not the point!!!!! You were meant to undergo the effects of the cliffhanger tooo!!!!!!! Hehehehehe ooooooooooo BRING IT ON!!!!!!

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Awwwwww.........welll needless to say......I kinda had to use my imagination here for the complications that arose when Pari was born........was I'm glad you liked it and it took you down memory lane once again.....you know I have a feeling you're gonna be doing a lot of those soon......as will the Geet....of my FF(the real life one) as she dictates the story to me....hehehe....

HAHA oh come on yaar....kuch zyaada maska nahi ho raha.......itna makhan mat lagao........main fisal jaooning!!!

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Hehehe thank you for liking Dev in this FF......ooooooooo welll I shall have to see about the request.....all I can say is...he's a bit of a brat....since Pari's birth, although he got equal attention from parents and other family members, Maan was a bit toppled towards Pari.........- saying no more

Hehehe trust me the rakhi thing in real life was more hilarious!!!!!!!!

Maan hai na toh isliye ulta hi chalna hota hai...........but not worry the FF is called Our Strange Journey for a reason.......rasta seedhe hote hue bhi...Maan usko ulta na kare ' yeh kaise ho sakta hai???

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I officially exclude from the Kanjoos Makhi choos Readers meri jaan.......because not only are you a late latif but you surely are one of my luvable jaanis too!!!! And yes yes......as you will find I is commenting back to you whilst I sit here in Uni ' over my lunch break....and tadap-ing with pain......as my fingers are numb cos of cold and my tummy just doesnt like me sitting anymore.....par kya karoon ' uni mein ghar ki tarha lait kar typing nahi kar sakti.......

Hehehehe hmmmmmm "Sadela Dev" ' Oh I luv u soo much!!!!!!!!!!!! Hmmm well screw toh hai uske paas....bas galat jaga pe laga diya hai.....usko theek kar na hai....

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OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoO OMG!!!!!!! U were serious about the Badla??? Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii omg omg omg what are you gonna do???....plz plz plz plz dnt kill me...........erm erm erm.........ok ok ok aapka hukum sar aankhon pe meri jaan.....naraaz mat hona plzzzzzzz........ermmm....welll I have a few parts 'oops parts nahi...instalments/steps written but i want a few more banked so that when i come round to next two weeks, I can just upload them fast!!!!! Cos I might not have time to write fresh during those weeks

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NOTE for everyone!!!! - Will Update tonight probably!!!!!!!!..............give me a few hours......
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

amazing updates.. do continue soon

Thanks Sweety!!!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

hi tishuu....

really sry 4 nt commenting earlier....
was caught up wid exams... it wl end ds week... n therafter will definitely try 2 comment regularly...
wl comment on d odr ff also once m done readng wid it...
i love d way u write....
n d story is awesome dear...
do cont soon.. n thnx a lot 4 d pms.. tc...

SaJan-SaJan!!!!!
awwwwww bless - well I hope you do well in your exams!!!!!!! work hard........ and don't woz about it.......i is not khaffa with you!!!
thanks for your lovely comment!!!!!! and you're welcome with the PMs
xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Helloessssssssssss meri jaanssssssss...😊 sorry sorry sorry - really sorry.....I hadnt updated this.....sooner or soon enuf!!!! Ok Ok...welll I hope this update makes up for it😳..............it's quite long and very awaited....😳..as I can tell from your comments after the previous one!!!!!!!⭐️
Special thanks to wintersunshine/Heena - whose comments just made me go crazy with laughter and actually FORCED me to write......hehe HINT: if you want long updates fast - comment like mad!!!!!😆
Ok so enuf of my bak bak.....here goes:
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Maan/Geet: WHAT???😲😲😲 (as we both looked from each other to the teacher, the rest of the class and then back at each other)

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The shock was clearly seen on our faces ' we were being made to go first...but we hadn't known what we were doing or how or ...... anything ' what's worse is....we hadn't even spoken a word to each other.... so pulling prompt improvisation wasn't going to work either. Oh babaji........help me....help us........*Geet looked towards Maan, who by now was pretty much in the same boat as herself as she saw him trying to reason with Parker*

Maan: Please...we just need a little more time, let someone else go first please, I promise, we'll be ready by the end of their performance ' please just.....try and understand.....please...

Parker: Sorry Maan, I have already given the whole class enough time to come up with a performance, if I give you any more time, it would be unfair to the others and I cannot afford to waste any more time on this...this was supposed to be a 10 minute starter ' it's now nearly 15 minutes to the end, I need to get you guys started. And anyways, don't worry, it's your first performance, no one will be perfect in this....just go out there and show us what you have......go on....let me sort the lighting for you....

Maan walked up to Geet and whispered......

Maan: I have absolutely no idea what I am......I mean...WE are about to do.......but it seems we'll just have to improvise.......just go along with what I do.........

This set Geet off 😡:Go along with what you do? Excuse me? Why do I have to go ahead with what you say? Why can't you just follow my improvisation.....- who are you to order me round.....hmm?? NO....we're going to do this the way I have it in my head....😕(though she had nothing in her head.....but still she wasn't going to let this arrogant person boss her around)😕......now listen ...I'm going to stand here an........

But Geet couldn't complete, as she was instantly silenced by his finger on her lips.....😲

Maan: sshhhh........you sure know how to speak *as a smile crept over his face and he took his finger away from her lips to tuck a curl behind her ear* Now listen......*as he took a step closer ' Geet didn't move.....she was lost in this moment....his touch on her lips had frozen her on the spot....she could still feel it, Maan smirked seeing the effect he had on her.....* Listen......you're going to follow my lead.....let me do the work...all you have to do.....is stand here *as he guided her to the centre of the stage, not breaking the eye-contact* and look at me ' ONLY.....just like you are now.....

Geet just nodded at everything Maan was saying.....she couldn't make sense of a single word.....she couldn't even hear anything he said.....she just saw his lips move😍....and his eyes😍......his ever so beautiful eyes were intoxicating her more and more😍😍 She didn't know what was going on😍😍😍.....she began to feel a little restless........but she didn't know how to address this feeling......

"Maan..." She whispered, as she moved her hand forward to reach his cheek......still not breaking the eye-lock

Maan understood her nervousness and instantly took hold of her hand as it reached for his cheek.....he placed it over his chest ' near his heart........

"Don't worry Geet......this is Real....everything is real.......I'm here- right in front of you......... you're here.....right before my eyes -just as I want......and between us ....is our lo... -he stopped right there -he daren't go any further......he couldn't say any further.....😕

Geet blushed a little at the thought of him nearly saying the L word.....she lowered her eyes.....just for a moment, when she felt his warm soft lips touch her cheek😲.....her eyes widened as she looked up at him....to say this was unexpected would probably have been an understatement.....😍

He looked at her change in facial expression....he smirked : if this doesn't assure you of how real this is....then...nothing will, as he bent down a little to meet her lips....Geet's eyes shut as a reflex...

Maan: I like it when you blush......

-Geet's cheek grew an even redder colour now......his talks were making it difficult for her to stand - she could feel her knees about to give way......she just couldn't wait any longer....... for his lips to touch hers.......😳

"Geet.....Geet ....look at me....." Maan said as he tapped Geet on the shoulder....

Geet opened her eyes......and her face dropped instantly (Tishuu's reaction:🤣🤣🤣) as she found him at least a million yards away from her!

She had been day dreaming.......... AGAIN........he still had that stern look on his face.....how could she even think of him in THAT way....her chain of thoughts was disturbed when she felt him poke at her shoulder.........she slapped his hand.. : Do you mind???😕

Maan noticed the change in attitude...... :have you even heard a word I have been saying??

Geet: hmmmm Geet nodded in positive, as she looked the other way -annoyed........ ANNOYED??? why am I annoyed?? What am I annoyed about?? What was I even thinking??

As geet wrestled amongst her thoughts as to if she was annoyed at the fact it was all a dream.......and how she hoped it was all real ' like he had said ......or the fact that she had dreamt of it in the first place....when she clearly wasn't meant to!!!!

The lights began to dim.....and some slow music could be heard faintly in the background. Parker ki daat deni chahiye.....she sure knew how to set a scene..........if Geet had known otherwise ' she would have thought........she really was here on the stage......improvising a love confession.......rather than in some Dream.....DREAM huh noo....Geet this is real....oh my god....geet panicked as she realised she hadn't heard a word Maan had spoken about......she didn't know what improvisation he had just described to her....she had been so lost in that... magical... dreamy moment......arghhh babaji ' what are you doing with me..............please babaji ' plzzz do something ' I can't perform...we haven't got anything to show back..... oh no I'm definitely going to fail now...as Geet began feeling a sheet of sweat appear on her forehead....

Geet remained where she was.....at the centre of the stage....whilst Maan stood near the curtain end on the right ' a spotlight appeared on him ' OMG he looked so divine, the spotlight was really working wonders.....he was shining like a diamond would on a ring no no he was...... glowing........-he was looking sooooo blissful. As he stepped towards me.....I turned towards him.....facing him....looking into his eyes ' no matter how much I resisted....but it just wasn't possible.....his eyes took such a great hold of me........for that instant I had forgotten where I was...... -I didn't realise when he came up to me. He knelt before me ' I must have been way too lost because I hadn't realised his actions until he grabbed my hands and pulled them towards himself ' his touch was magical ' so soft, cool yet still warm, ahhh I could feel it.....my knees were about to give way....except this was for real this time.........I heard a few whistles in the background, causing our eyelock to be disrupted momentarily.....he turned to look towards whoever it was but I guess that's the best thing about having the theatrical lights......we couldn't see the audience.....I let out a little blush.....even though I hoped it wasn't too obvious....he looked towards me and winked......I really hoped the moment just didn't pass.......-this was exactly like that dream....DREAM?? huh no Geet stop!! ' you can't think of him this way...no stop!!! Then it hit me ' where he was, where I was and what was going on...... Arghh.....I needed to get away from him ' his closeness was making me lose myself and I couldn't under any circumstances do this ' no no 'I sent a silent prayer to my babaji to help me!!!

And then it was as if babaji had heard me ' the bell went ' phew........*whoever said saved by the bell ' just got a new follower today*

With the bell ' the lights came back, I instantly got my hands out of his and dashed for my bag and literally sprinted out of my class to meet Pinky!! I had to tell her.............no wait....I can't.........she'll probably just think I'm crazy....no I can't.....but....she'll feel hurt if she found out from someone else....nono I'll have to tell her myself...but.....arghh...this really was my least of worries ' right now I just had to get away ........from HIM, his magical feel....his captivating eyes......argh nooo...not again.....I just had to GET AWAY!!!

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PRECAP: (as -afsha- requested so nicely)
Maan: So tell me..........
Geet: Tell you what??
Maan: You know........are you feeling nervous or excited??
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So...........how was it?????? hehehe 😍D😍R😍E😍A😍M😍Y😍 na???😳😳😳
Hehe HIT the LIKE button!!!!! and COMMENT like crazy - I'm still typing up the next bit......so may or may not update that toooo depending on how good I think it is...... xx
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update.... geet😆😆😆..... waiting for next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
tishuu...
ds really was 😍D😍R😍E😍A😍M😍Y😍...
oh, i wsh ds was true...
awesome update dear...
do cont soon.. thnx 4 d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanku Thanku Thanku
Ur fulfiling my requests o
Thanx a lottttttttt
Update was fab
Geet was dreaming in broad day light😆😆😆
She loosed herself in Maan paka
Bechara Maan was gng on blabbering n no one was listening😆😆😆
Babji listens to Geet very much
She was really saved by the bell
Paka if the one who rang the bell wuld be in front of her that tym she wuld hav hugged him/her😆😆
She really needs to get away frm Maan warna she'll becum mad😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey i jst read ur 13 steps plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
can u added me to ur pm list
it was amazing

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