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Posted: 14 years ago
terrific update........loved maan today......but dont know what evil is he planning.....want to know who paid waiter.....its a mystery....anyways plzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazin n Nice update, wit cute nok jhok, i wondr who paid 4 geet to get drunk? M jst eager to knw wat wil happen next! Plz do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it...maaneet are rocking....pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

wonderful update...!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

luv Precap...cnt wait 4 next part...!!!!😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
Maneet dancing again..!!!!😃😃😃😃
who cn possibily cn harm Geet...!!!????😕😕😕
anyway Maan is here...so no fear...!! hahahaha😆😆😆😆
bt he is so possessive abt her later n now...!!!!😉😉😉😉😳😳
luv ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ it hu u going on....past main ja ker bhi past ka flash bk...hehehehe😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️luv it hu Maneet fight n car scene..."!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
cnt so soon......!!!!😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

loved it..... plz add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice story..please add me to ur buddy list
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey wen u gonna update😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oiyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u forgot to PM me.... 😡

As a matter of fact after part 4 u never PMed me 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Edited by swatichowdhury - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 6

Maan dragged Geet to his car whlist Geet put a finger on her lips saying shhhhhh to everyone who walked past her. He strapped her in the car. He then called Yash to inform him what happened.

Maan started the car.

'Drive fasttt raceeee raceee' Geet yelled. Maan looked at her annoyed. He was already concerned about who wanted to play with Geet's life by making her drunk and on top of that Geet was not in her senses and shouting her head off.

'Geet Chup chap betey raho'.(Sit quietly) Geet looked at him and nodded a no. Maan was irritated. Geet opened her window and stuck her head out.

'Helloooooooooooooooooooo Uncle ji, Hello Aunty Ji, Hellooooooooooooooooo' She yelled at anyone who was walking past. Maan grabbed her and pulled her back into the car.

'Geet kya kar rahi ho, Sit properly'. (what are u duin)

'Maan tum na bilkul boree ho' (your boring)

Geet then started singing kuch na kaho kuch bina kaho..

'GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET'

'Chila kyun rahein ho, main behri nahi ho samji Lallo' (why u shouting im not deaf)

'Lallo?' Geet turned to him as he was driving smiled. She pulled his cheeks and said 'ha lallo, your sooo cute'

'Tum na kitne aache insaan ho aur main hamesha tumse larti ho, hamesha gussa karti ho aur tum mujhe ghar chorne ayi ho, I like you' ( your such a nice guy and I always fight with you angry at you and your dropping me home) Maan turned to stare at her hearing Geet positive thoughts about him.

'Geet'

'hmmm'

'kya hua tum chup kyun hogayi' (what happened why u quiet)

'kuch nahi, Main tumhe thank you kehna chati ti' (nothing wanted to say thanks)

'kyun,'

'kyun ki tum bohot bohot bohot ache ho' (because you're a very very nice guy) Maan continued driving and increased the speed.

'sunoooooo race mat karna.. mujhe teez gari se daar lagra ha hai'. (don't drive fast im scared of fast cars) Geet clenched Maan's arms and closed her eyes. Maan slowed the car down.

'tik hai Geet'

'Gariii rokoooo' (stop the car) Geet yelled. Maan stopped the car and Geet got out seeing a few guys drumming. Geet got out and started to dance.

'Geet andar chalo' (Get inside) Maan said viewing the guys who had stopped drumming coming towards her giving her lusty looks.

'nahii mujhe dance karna hai' (no I want to dance)

It started raining and Geet started playing with the rain and dancing. Maan started at her and thought how beautiful could someone be, how innocent can someone be. A new feeling arised in his heart. It was unknown to him. He then saw the men very close.

'apko bi dance karna hai' ( u wana dance 2) Geet said talking to the men.

'hiii off course janeman hume to tumhari saat dance karna hai'. (yh sweetheart I wana dance with u) The guys started dancing with her surrounding her. Maan saw that and thought he had to get her away as Geet is too innocent to know what is going on. One of the guys touched her

'oi mujhe haat mat lagana' (don't touch me) Geet turned and yelled at the guy. The guy touched her again and pulled her duppata off and thew it. The duppata landed on Maan. The guy grabbed Geet hands, Geet tried to pry his hand off.

'MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN' Maan came and beat those guys up and covered Geet with her duppata and took her to the car. For some reason his heart told him he had to protect her. He started driving again with Geet in the car who was shivering when they were stopped by police who told them they could not go any further as there was a landslide ahead. Maan then had no choice but to take Geet to his house. He saw that Geet was shivering and if she didn't get changed soon she would get a fever. Geet broke the silence in the car

'Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan tumhe pata hai jab main choti ti na, mere parents teez gari chala rahey teh aur main aur mere behen nazi gari main teh aur accident hogaya ta aur mama papa tare bangaye.'(do u knw that wen I was smaal my parents were driving gast and me and my sister were in the car and an accident happened and mum and dad became stars)

'Geet I;m sorry'

'its okay Maan, mujhe daar lag raha hai ke agar main kisi ke pass ou to wo mujhe chor ke chala jayenge jaise mere parents' (im scared that if someone comes close to me they will leave me like my parents)

'Geet tumne to kaha ta na tumhari behen aur masima aur dost hai tumhari saat wo log tumhe chor ke nahi jaoungey' (Geet you said that your sister ur aunt and friends are with you, they wont leave u)

'aur tum, Tum mujhe kabhie chorke nahi jaoungey na' (and you, u won't leave me will u?) Geet looked at him with a question in her eyes.

Maan turned to stare at her but Geet had already fallen asleep. No Geet I will never leave you.

He took her to his house. He lifted her up and brought her in. By the time Maan reached the guest room Geet was shivering badly in her sleep. Now what do I do? How do I change her clothes. He lay her down and went to his room and brought a white kurta. He closed his eyes and changed her clothes feeling her bare skin underneath. His senses were awakening feeling her skin and he wanted his body to feel her. Geet was shivering badly. After Maan had changed her he hugged her and rubbed her back to keep her warm. He slept on the other side of the bed and kept her close to him in his embrace. He kissed her forehead.

'Tum mujhe kabhie chorke nahi jaoungey na' (u wont leave me will u) Geet repeated in her sleep.

'Kabhie nahi Geet tum aaram se sojao'.( Never, Geet go to sleep) Maan after feeling that Geet shivering had stopped got up to go to his room when he realised that Geet's hand was holding his tightly. He looked at her and smiled. He tried to open his hand but it was too tight. He then gave up and sat against the bed headboard putting the pillow up to support his back and grabbed another duvet which was under the bed and covered himself. He thought to himself that this girl was a mystery on one hand she acts so tough with the world on the other hand she is delicate and has so many fears and pain in her life.

Geet was on the right hand side of the bed sleeping soundly holding Maan's hand under one duvet whlist Maan fell asleep staring at Geet resting his back against the headboard under another duvet. His heart feelings were now being clouded.

PRECAP: The morning after the drunk effect! Geet waking up with Maan next to her!!1 what will happen!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update! Was waitin 4 u to update! Lovd n enjoyd readin. Do cont soon. BTW when do u usualy update?

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