#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 - Page 32

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dimpzz


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">oops...m really srry hun....i didn't understand tat
m really srry about tat </font>


why sorry..its ok.. :) :) :) as these things hardly matter..one and the same for me
tc..
getting to emotional..
:) :) tc love ya
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh geet is totallllllllyyyyyyyyyy talliiiiiiiiii
wonder wt maan would do 2 get her out of d partyyyyyy
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dear....we knw no can take their eyes if Geet was in sari esp Maan... and Geet drunk....mmmm so some hotty hot scene is waiting i think ...I hate NT... wat abt Jay's girl frnd...i want a girl for him since u paired Deveera i want some cool girl for him yar
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Posted: 14 years ago
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-Edited-

rofl rofl rofl........geet talli ho gayi.....hahahahahahahahah
i can't stop laughing....i was literally imagining ke geet kaise bol rahi hogi.........
luv u yaar for giving us such a awesomely awesome update.....😃
Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Updating in half an hour
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 21

every one stares at geet
meera and dev try to move ahead
but maan says I will handle her myself
jyada chad gayi hai ise

and looks away
geet thinks he is looking at the girls dancing on dj gets super annoyed n jumps and says
oye ye na samajh ke maine ye dhoti
i mean maine ye saree pehani hai to me in nangi pungio ki tarah kamar nahi matka sakti
mere jalwe dekhega to 1 2 ka 4 and 4 2 ka 1
my name is lakhan ho jayega

ur name is lakhan from now
my name is sheela
sheela ki jawani

evry 1 was laughing and even maan couldnt stop himself from laughing..

he lifts geet up and takes her to a dark corner
and geet is tickling him under arm and saying meko neeche utar
nahi to gudgudi karungi aur tu neeche jayega
dhadaaamm se

maan says
geet agar gudgudi karogi to tum neeche jaogi

geet says wrong
ma kehati hai
pyar me uthoooo
and giro mattttttttttt
and tumhare pyar me geet handa uth ke dikahyegi
to kya hua
me abhi nahi uth sakti to kal uth jaungi
abi to world is going round and round and round

geet was blabering.. nonstop but her lines
*ma kehati hai
pyar me uthoooo and giro mattttttttttt
and tumhare pyar me geet handa uth ke dikahyegi*

*geet confessed!!!*
his eyes were wet
he took her to the ball
as she was insisting
his love was in his eyes and when their eyes met
they sparkled with love
maan opens her hairs
she looked amazing
they dint care about the world
and song starts
Jaane tu mera kya hai
Jaane tu mera kya tha

tu hi mera har pal
tu hi har lamha tha
Hai dosti hum ko yakeen tha
Dosti aur kuch bhi nahi tha
Fir ek din aaya naya sa
Ye dil lagta tuta tuta sa
Jaana dil jaana
Maine kyu na ye jaana
Hai pyar yahi hai
Ye jane tu ya jaane na
Jaana dil jaana
Maine kyu na ye jaana
Hai pyar yahi hai
Ye jane tu ya jaane na

Their dance was turning too too passionate
the moves
the turns
the falls
their body languages were freakingly awesome
their eyes never lost contact
lips so close
as if they will touch any second
geets hand on maans exposed chest and maan's hands on her waist
song ends
still they dint care
they moved to one side
warden had already gone
now the real party of spoiled college youth began
drugs and lust on its peak
4 bandars and 3 bandarias left the party
maan and geet still lost in one other..
geet took his hand and took him to the basket ball court
she was stil out of mindyou know what..maan its love spot of college
maan held her tight..
He was scared
if she falls
others dint bother to follow as they could guess what next
geet was still not norml
behaving like crazy
they stood at basket ball court
geet cupped his face in to her hands
sat on the bench
then on his lap
both their eyes shone

geet said meko karate ate hai
maan says gigglingoh really
meko kyu bata rahi ho fir

geet saysMe teko warn kar rahi hu..kahi tu galat signal na pakad le
maan says ok baba..me dur gaya tujhse..happy now
geet says maan hum secret bf gf hai..

maan says me samajha nahi
geet saysmatlb teko dekh ke my heart goes shalalalalala in the morning
shalalalala in the sun shine
and meko dekh ke tujhe be sam to sam feel hota hai

maan looked shocked at the word sam
geet said arae sam to sam means same to same
maan took sigh of relief..
Geet continues to me teko kabhi bhi ilu ilu nahi bolungi
tu be mujhe mat bolna ok. .
Or i will cry
but tu ab pehale jaisa behave karna..
Ok..
And ab bhul ja

maan innocently says yes boss
geet says i want to kiss your lips
maan shocked..

Precap will they kiss..

friends i hope you liked this part.. Thanks for your support
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
friends i guess you liked this part..am sorry..i dont pm most of the time... But i come online from phone.. :( :( :( so my phone doesnt let me pm 20 at a time..i dunn knoe what crap is in my phone..so it becomes too lengthy for me to pm 50 people..i am not saying i wont pm at all..but am trying my best..and if i dont..do check in next 24 hours as.. Will surely update in 24 hours.. I hope you understand..thanks. for support and cooperation.. :) ..love ya all
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
No PM's to me😭😭
I know I haven't been commenting lately but I do click the like button always. I haven't received PM's for the last 5-6 updates😭😭😭
I like your reading your story a lot.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow
loved ilu ilu part
ahem kiss 😳
waiting for next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update... y rnt u PMing...precap seems interesting...ahem ahem...

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