#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice!
loved it so much!
d wau he took care of her n fighting against his parents for her
n his parents r so bad.....using their own son for popularity!
hate them!
n luv maneet
update soon!

love
Navpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 9
Next morning

Geet got dressed up in her uniform along with meera and pinkey..
geet was feeling aweful cauz..
some of her long hair were missing..
pinkey cleaned the stitched area with detol..
and applied cotton and tape on it..
meera made her wear a matching hat..
every one reported to dining room..
geet couldnt tie her hair
so she was the only one with open hair..
her brown hair were so shiney and long upto the end of her last vertebra..
and pinkey and meera teased her dabur parachute oil..
they all went in the hall..
every one closed their eyes..folded their hands and started the prayer..
maan was only open eyed..
gazing at geet..
her shining lips..
twinkling eyes..
they way she laugh..
how she talks..
the way she takes small small bites of bread..
as a baby..
suddenly a 4 year student came to his table..
whole dining hall was giggling..
even geet..
she said..maan prayer is over..
maan came out of his dream land..
his hands were still folded
..she said maan prayer over hue half an hour ho chuka hai
and sab baith bi chuke hai..
and khana khatam be kar chuke hai..
your highness
..now can you start your food..

maan was embarrassed..
he looked at geet..
she had her tongue out and her hands on her ears..
and making faces as kids make..
and teasing maan...
senior was scolding him and he was looking at geet..
maan started imitating geet..!!!!
he also started making faces at her..
senior thought he is making faces at her
..maan..
she screamed trying her best to control her laughter..now you will be punished..
go to first year gals table there is a place near geet handa..
maan made a crying face..he said..di i can sit on the floor and eat ..but not next to her..
senior rolled her eyes and said..maan its none of my business..
its a punishment just go..

maan made a puppy face at geet..
He wnt to her table..and was sitting..
Geet whispered maharaj ji padhariye..
meera giggled..
maan made a baby face
looking at his friends and said pass me the pourige..
geet passed...
He was serving..
geet took the bowl from his hand..
she said let me serve to my best friend now..
she poured whole bowl on his plate.
maan said arae yar ye kya kar rahi hai..
mujhe mujhe khana hai..barat ko nahi..

geet said dont speak senior will punish you again.
.and all the table gals giggled..

manisha was sitting on one side of maan..
and going all gagagaga upon him..and trying to play with his hair..
poor maan was feeling erghhh
senior came and saw maan plate over flooded..
she said..now as you have decided to eat this much and now finish it..
maan looked at geet and said..tum be na..
ab me kya karunga..
tumhe samajh nahi ata..

and in his heart continued..ye ladki bhi na mujhe pagal karke chhodegi..
every one left..
geet waited for him on the table..and said hurry up..
pehala lecture miss ho jayega..

maan said..formality and courtsey ke liye baithi ho to you may leave..
geet felt offended..
dev and adi and jay were waiting for maan
and meera and pinkey for geet outside the hall..
geet cupped maan's face..and said me apne sabse ache dost ke liye baithi hu
..and uske sath hi college jaungi..

Maan Felt happy..
she got up from her chair and lonke arround and sat on his lap..
no one was inside..
all friends were peeping inside..
maan suddenly felt a wave of desire to love her taking toll..
but he controlled.
geet took his spoon and started eating from his plate..
maan was shocked..
he said..ye kya kar rahi ho..
ye spoon mere muh me thi..
meri juthi hai..

geet murmered tum aur me alag hai kya..
and suddenly realizzed what she spoke..
and said mera matlb hai..
maan got the shock of his life..but still thought..let her be clear in her mind and said leave it..
and said in his heart..i guess she is feeling for me..
he ate her jutha too...
and eyelock..
they finished..
maan held her by waist..
geet dint object..
rather she dint even notice it..
she was getting use to his touch..
maan and geet came out..
7 of them left..
geet gave puchi to maan..
and maan too gave puchi[for maan it was chumi]to geet..
geet had her test today..
maan wished her good luck..
it was 3 hours paper..
maan attended his class..[he was rarely seen in class]but geet forced him to.
next was free period..
so he waited outside geets examination room.
Note:-Part 9 is continued on the same page.scroll down..to view..thanks for the support hun....:)
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 9 CONTINUED
he had already burnt 5 cigarretes while waiting...
all students were sleeping on the benches..
pinkey and meera busy copying geet's paper..
and outside..
naintara was busy line marofying maan and jay ..
maan in eyes said to jay..take this crap with you as soon as possible...
am getting irritated..

jay took naintara hand and said..lets come jaan..
naintara was super pleased..
jay made a vomiting face..
at the back of naintara..
maan adi and dev giggled..
suddenly meera and pinkey came out..
they said paper was tough..
and we have tapofyed geets paper of 40 marks..
rest all inside are sleeping..
and geet has already scribbled 40 pages and it seems she will write a book..
and we are hungry..
lets go guys..all 4 left

maan kept waiting..
he selfthought she is so naive..so intelligent..so good..so helping..so innocent..
how can i resist loving her when my every breath sings her name..

geet came crying and hugged maan..
maan said shona kya hua..
geet dint answer..
and kept on crying
and maan began to hyperventilate..
geet said mera 1 no. Ka reh gaya..
fitte muh us invigilator ka...
chudail ne paper cheen liya...

maan started laughing..
geet made an offended face..
and said hasne ki kya baat hai..
maan said mere yar 1 no. Ka karke ate hai..and you crying..
geet stamped her foot on floor showing her fake anger to maan
suddenly..
geet's leg slipped..
on the slippery floor..
and she landed on maan..
their chest pressed against each others..
their eyes met..
geet un kali ankho me dub gayi.
their lips almost touched..
no one was their in corridor..
Geet's hand went on his neck..
maan took her hands and kissed them..
geet touched his forehead..
His eyes
his lips with her finger..
placed her finger on her lips and then again on his lips..
their lips touched.and they kissed..
geet came to her senses..
she said maan am sorry..
i dint mean it..
whats happening to me..

maan's eyes were still closed..
please maan..
wo me..
it was accidental..

her last line pinched maan the most..
he composed himself and said..its ok sweetu..
lets go to canteen..

And they went..
Friends ..i am tired right now..will pm tomorrow..or may not be able to..i hope you liked this..please do comment guys..i some times feel as if i am just writing bla bla and no one seems interested...hehe..please do comment..whether you like it or not..good night..
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that was so so nice, msk angry young man looks hot, hai nice to see a comfortable frendship between geet and maan, and love the way he is lost for words at the end, thanks, waiting for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh loved it yaar...... do continue soon..pls pm the link,,
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it😊
Your updates are really sweet.
Sorry for not commenting for last 1-2 updates😭
Waise yeh wala update thoda short tha as compared to previous ones😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!awosme..i love it.
i love maan and geet friendship.
do continue plz.
thxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwwww luved maaneet romance
itsssss soooooooooo cute,sweet

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates... really loved it....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice parts

Loved the way Maan n Geet cared for each other
They were fab
Geet's last word hurted Maan but he shuld get she is naive yaar
She will get her feelings soon paka

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