#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!tat wz amazing!
loved it laodzz!
loved d way he wz looking at her during d prayer
n then she ate his jhootha n he did d same
n then after d exam
they kissed!
loved it soo much
n when she said it wz an aciident...it did hurt him alot....but she still has to realise she is falling for him....can't wait till she comes to noe tat she has fallen for him!
hayyyyeee!
n soo sweet of maan...he composed himslef n behaved normally!
really gud going!
loved d update loadzzzz!
update soon hun!

love
Navpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
really loveeeee ur ff.
Maan is sooo caring.
Geet is sweet.
Continue soonnn.
can u plzzz add me in ur pm list?



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Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
so geet started feeling for maan and OOOLALALA she recognizes his touch ahems ahems plz make her fall in love wid maan soon and another passionat night shared by em ,dis time geet fully conscious bout it plz plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey hey awesome fan fiction.. I have been reading it since u started but i didnt know if u PM ur readers or not because u said u didnt. So if you have started to PM then please add me to ur list! Keep up the great work! I am loving it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 10

Result was announced..
geet topped
geet was too happy..
all 7 friends sneaked into boys room..and were having party..
they were having fun..
geet was happy so obviously maan was also happy...
they were laughing and all..
geet was sitting on maan's lap..
on his bed..
both wrapped in one bed sheet..
maan purposely moved his cold hands arround geet's waist and started tickling..
geet started laughing madly..
and they both landed on floor...
Maan and geet were having same slice of pizza..
from one side geet and other side maan..
when they came to last bite..
their nose banged..
geet said..aaa...
maan got scared and asked..shona dard ho raha hai..
am sorry..

and geet bursted out laughing...
and started teasing him and imitating him..
the way he says geet geet geet..when he gets tensed:..every one laughed and after sm time left..
only maan and geet were in room..
geet ate the last bite..
before geet could taste it..
maan suddenly smuched her lips and took the bite..
geet got shocked geet said ye kya tha..
maan brought her close..
geet closed her eyes...
he kissed her neck...
and said what do you feel..
she said please let me go...
i dont love you

maan said maine to pucha hi nahi ke you love me or love me not...
geet fell short of the words....
maan made her sit.
closed the door of the room..
came back..
held geet tightly..
geet said maan dont come near me..
dekho.i beg you..
please try to understand..
I cant name these feelings
they have no place in my life.

maan held her close..
their lips touched..
geet was speaking..
maan dint bother..
he licked her lips..said pizza is amazing..
geet bewildered..maan please let me go..
love is nothing in my life..

maan dint bother to give a damn to these lines..
he licked her gums....
floor of her mouth..
invited her tongue in his mouth forcibly...
geet pulled back..
she said maan let me go...
maan pulled her more close..whats wrong in it..
i love you
you love me...
dont you trust me..


geet had no answer..
she said..lets be friends first..
then love..

he laid her on his bed..
geet was crying..
she couldnot bear it any more..
she pushed him back..
slapped him tight..
maan come to your senses...
what the hell you doing..
i am your best friend..
i just started to feel for you..
and you did this to me..

maan was shocked at the slap..
9 1 ever slaped him..
he began to palpitate..
he was sweating badly..
his face was red..
geet sensed something is amiss

he said hesitatingly.. please bring me some...
black gold[coccaine].

she was shocked..maan you take drugs..
maan who was losing his control..as it was time for his dose said..just shut up you ***** just get me..
geet was shocked..
he abused her..
he kept on abusing her..
geet cried..
she hugged him. Maan no..
i wont leave you..

he pushed her roughly..go away from me..
i am not worth you.
its my dark world..
i am the king of these herrings..

geet hugged him again.
She dint want to let him go like this..
.maan held her cheeks in his hands pressed them hard..
took her with him..
and said..when i am me..
dont come near me..
i will destroy you..
just go away...

he pushed her away..
took an injection..
and pricked it in his arm..
geet shocked..
she was crying madly and said if its that good let me too take..
maan pushed her and said stay away from me.
.got it.
or i will destroy you too..
like i destroyed her..

Geet ran away crying..
All his words were ringing in her ears
a hand pulled her..
and before she could realize..
a hankey went on her nose and she fainted..
jay adi and dev came..
and saw maan abusing drugs..
adi took the needle..
and destroyed it..
dev and jay hugged him..
maan pushed them..
but they hugged him..
they said bhai hamari kasam hai..
control yourself write now..

maan closed his fist..
jay asked where is bhabi..
maan vaguely replied..i threw her out..
she knows about me..

they said ye tune theek nai kiya yar..
Tu uski masumiyat bhi nai sambhal paya..
us pe kya beetegi..
ye socha..
bohat bdi bdi bate karta tha..
use dard nai dunga.
Ye wo aise waise
.and what did you do...
tu bohat pachtayega..

maan realizzed what he did to geet...
he abused her with all those names..even then
she hugged him and tried to stop him..

he cried sitting in the corner of the room..
they tried to console him..
he dint listen..
how will he face her..
geet his geet
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
friends i hope you liked this part..if you like it..do hit the like button..and please do comment..am not getting response..😔
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my god!!! he takes drugs?????? .😲.........some one kidnapped geet ??? maans frnds seems to be aware of his drug habits..then why cant they help him get out of it though proper medical care....now who kidnapped geet??? if maan is in this condition then who ll save her???😕...
Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

oh my god!!! he takes drugs?????? .😲.........some one kidnapped geet ??? maans frnds seems to be aware of his drug habits..then why cant they help him get out of it though proper medical care....now who kidnapped geet??? if maan is in this condition then who ll save her???😕...why do u always leave us in suspence ??

omg so many questions one time...relax relax relax..hmmm..your questions will get answers in next part buddy..its coming very very soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi
nice update but maan destroyed whom ?and i hope he does'nt take drugs.ilike maan in nice picture not bad.i liked geet hugged him .so nice of her.
add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Maan takes drugs ....no plz y wat is the matter.... whom does he destroy...Geet was kidnapped...OMG wat is happening...

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