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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

nice part

con't soon

Maan in the next update plzz! lol

Originally posted by: Ameena4Eva

awsome superb update yaar loved it

awhh loved geet nd vickys fight
love maaneet
plzz update soonxx!!:):):)

Originally posted by: chubzy

Wat a nice way of revenge! Must try it hun!

Thank you everyone!!!
I will put Maaneet moemnet in the next part lol
Chubzy I have done this idea on my friend one lol
its fun!
Will update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

hilarious🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣revenge pls cont soon

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

Loved da update
Do continue
Poor vicky

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

poor vicky

had 2 eat tennis balls for no mistake of him

hilarious n funny part

but geet is tooo violent hahaha

Originally posted by: farheen9


Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Amazing..
Nice update
Love ittttttt

Thank you guys!!!!
I know poor vicky got involved with no fault of his lol
Am glad you guys could laugh lol
will udpate soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL...poor vickyyyyyy....thanks for the laugh love :)

thanx so mcuh!!
am gld u could enjoy 😆
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ

awesome part..... loved it

Originally posted by: mrk_1

awsome part yaar..loved it !

Originally posted by: vidu87

hey

superb part👏👏👏👏👏👏
luvd it
thnx 4 d PM
cont soon

Thank you ALL!!!!!
Am glad you guys liked the tennis idea and the revenge lol
wil update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ansah

that was awesome as always....awww poor vicky

waiting for V's revenge..LOL

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice update

Geet is so dead
Bechara Vicky avein hi pit gaya😆😆😆
Waiting for his revenge now😉

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Geet Shararati hai. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: tinatartari

rofl!!such a funny update!!man !!!i loved it!!plz update soon!!

THANK YOU EVERYONE!!!!!!
hehee what will Vicky do will be revealed lol
Will updaet soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: i rok

Niceeeeeeee update

THANK YOU EVERYONE!!!
Will udpate NOW lol
hehehe enjoy!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys thanx so much for ur lovely comments...I am so glad that you all had a good laugh while reading this update lol...I added Maaneet in here ...since everyone missed Maan in the last update 😆😆😆😆
Enjoy!!!!
Chapter 19
From: NyQueen
To: DelhisShark
I am really really really stupid!!! I made a big mistake I don't know what I should do now.. Remember you told me that I should be nice to my client?

Well I followed your advice, we even went out for lunch because my friend couldn't come and well over the lunch I started asking him why he is being nice lol....

I know I know you must be reading this and saying are you serious and are you this stupid? Before you say anything let me tell you I have my own reason for saying this and questioning my client "niceness" (if that is a word lol)...You might laugh reading my reason and well all the more reason for you to think that I am weird lol...

So I actually thought that my client and my friend have teamed up together to take a revenge on me...ohh did I tell you that they are friends and when my friend had brought my client to my house when I was sick..I got so mad at my friend that I made my dog attack him lol...(At that time I hated the client) So long story short I thought that they both are together and are planning something to get their revenge...

Tonight I made a big mistake with my friend..I won't go into details but ummm I don't know what to do and my friend won't spare me either now lolz...

Send

She closed her laptop and laid back on her bed...she looked over to her phone..she sat on her bed and thought about texting Vicky to see if he alright..."hey Vicky how are you...am sorry for what I did" She looked over at her text and was about to send it when she thought otherwise... "maybe I should wait until DelhisShark gets back to me and tell me what I should do..let me go to sleep and see what is going to happen tomorrow"
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Geet came to her work very early in the morning to avoid Vicky in the elevator...she stopped by the flower shop and ordered flowers for Vicky to be sent to his work with a note..
Note:
Hey Vicky!
I just wanted to say sorry for what I did to you last night...it really was an innocent mistake and you know how my mind works sometimes...I hope you forgive me and lets forget whatever happened last night....

Sorry 😭

Your best and only friend,
Geet

"hmmm that sounds just about right...hopefully he will soften up a little and forget about his little revenge" Geet went to her cabin and started going through her emails since her boss hadn't arrived yet...
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Maan POV:
After reading the email sent by Geet...yeh ladki bhi naa pata nahi kya kya chalta reheta hai iske dimag mein.......I wonder what she did to Vicky....bechara....how did he become friends with her...wait how did I become friends with her?? '.(he reread the email again) Wait does that mean that she is beginning to like the "client" I mean me...this should be fun....

From: DelhisShark
To: NyQueen
hmmm I won't ask you what it is that you actually did to your friend last night but I don't know what to tell you either lol. After reading your reasoning behind you questioning your client was somewhat justified. I am just amazed how you manage to connect everything together even if it has no correlation or connecting between two things lol. I will just hope that your friend is not too rough on you or do anything that embarrasses you but you should just stay strong and take whatever punishment your friend gives you

Let me ask you a question:
So do you like your client now? I mean forgetting everything from the past and what you did or what he did...

Sent

Geet POV:
Geet looked over her email..her mouth was hung open... "like my client?" Wait....how can even DehlisShark ask me that??? (sounding upset and angry)....I never thought about my client that way.............I mean yeah he is good looking and has a nice smile..........well whenever he manages to smile.......if he is not too busy being mad or yelling at me.......going out on the lunch with him was alright......I guess.....he seems like a nice person.........but........I don't know....in my heart I always had a soft spot for DelhisShark...even thought I never met him or seen him...he is so easy to talk to about anything.....I guess that is why I always defended him when Vicky talks bad about him.....maybe that is why I decided to meet him when he asked.....and felt so nervous at the cafe when I thought I would see him (She smiled) ugh this whole thing is such a mess...I asked him to help me with my friend situation and he even made me so confused....I guess I have to do everything by myself....

She saw Maan and Adi entering the office with Dev...she was looking at them when Maan turned looked toward her cabin...they both looked at each other...Geet puts her head down and starts working on her laptop....Maan saw that and he left following Adi and Dev... "Great I have to talk to Maan first and than I will handle Vicky" She received a text from Vicky just then

(212-990-3388)
From Vicky: Thanx for the flowers but am not going to be as sorry for what am going to do to you

To Vicky: What do you mean by that?

From Vicky: 😈
Geet just puts the phone down...Adi enters her cabin along with Maan
Adi: Good Morning Geet

Geet: Good Morning Adi and Maan sir (looks at Maan who just sits at the chair and checks his emails "she didn't reply me back yet") What are you guys doing here..I mean where is Dev sir?

Adi: Dev sir had to go home for emergency..he told us to go over the rest of the details with you

Geet: Ohh ok....Well before I begin..here this flower is for you and this is for you Maan Sir (Maan looks at her in shock and gives her a questioning look)..

Maan: Miss. Geet what is the occasion..why are you being so nice? (Geet knew that he was teasing her)

Geet: Well.....ummm......yeah.....today is a friendship day so...ummm..so I am giving everyone flowers...because...today is a friendship day...(she came up with lame excuse not knowing how to apologize to Maan)

Adi: Wow thank you Geet...I like it..

Maan: Really??? (He knew what Geet was doing but decided to have fun with her) I didn't see any flower on Tasha's desk or she wished us for friendship day...are you sure that today is a friendship day?

Geet: hehe yeah of course I know that today is a friendship day...that is why I am wishing you guys..what other reason would I have?

Maan: hmm just checking (he smiled) "I know you are trying to apologize to me..this flower will do for now"

Geet: umm lets begin than...(they all working on the details..before they know it is was lunch time...Dev had called in between to inform Geet that he won't be able to come to work for the whole day)

Tasha knocked on her cabin door: Ma'am Vicky is here outside

Geet: What? ummm I am busy right now...tell him I will call him later

Tasha: Actually ma'am he came here for Maan sir...

Maan: me?

Tasha: yes sir...

Maan: Well lets continue the meeting later than...it is lunch time right now...

Geet: umm ok..well you guys enjoy the lunch..I have some work to finish up here

Adi: I will stay here with you Geet...I am not hungry right now anyway

Geet smiled: sure

Vicky (came in Geet's cabin): Hey Maan how are you?

Maan: I am good Vicky...what are you doing here?

Vicky: Well I thought we should go out for lunch today? Are you free?

Maan: yeah sure...

Vicky: Hi Geet...what are you sitting here for? Let's go to lunch...

Geet (nervous): umm no Vicky I will stay here...I uhh have a lot of work to do

Vicky (goes behind her and closes her laptop): nonsense come on...you are coming to lunch with us..right Maan?

Maan: Yeah I don't mind besides we are almost done with what we had to do today..

Geet: No its fine..Adi is not hungry right now either..so we both will stay here...right Adi?

Adi: yeah I will stay with Geet

Maan: Adi you are coming too..

Adi: Geet you didn't give Vicky his friendship day flower

Vicky (looks at Geet smiling): Friendship day? I didn't know it was today? ohh that is why you gave me a bouquet of flowers today

Adi: We get a flower and Vicky gets a bouquet of flowers? Not fair

Vicky comes next to Geet: well she is my dearest friend right Geet (he gives her a (tight) side hug..Geet tried to get out of his hold...but he was too strong..Maan saw this and closes his fist in anger)

Geet "Babaji what kind of revenge will Vicky take..that too in front of my clients...I hope it is not embarrassing": yeah umm anyway you guys carry on...I will stay with Adi

Vicky: come on Geet..since today is friendship day lets all go out for lunch..

Adi: Yeah that sounds like a good idea

Maan: umm Vicky if Geet doesn't want to go than I will stay behind

Vicky: Maan don't start..we are going and that is final..right? (looks at Geet)

Geet: but

Vicky: No but Geet (Gives her evil smile) Lets go
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Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i luv u simi
OH MY...............................Vicky is sucha devil..............friendship day??? reallyy???? honestly???? is that the best the poor gal cud cum up with???? hehe.......ooooooooo i cant wait to seeee wat vicky does................... hehehe and this is really the time where maan is likely to slip up as maan cud be witness to the "payback" but DelhisShark wont....... so........hmmmm i just hope it doesnt lool
other than that ive een thinking...................i'd laugh if vicky's revenge is the thought of revenge lool
as in making Geet think vicky is upto something..... make her paranoid........ and do absolutely diddley squat!!!!! hehehe
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i cant waittttt anymore
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update----- can't w8 2 see wat vicky'z revenge is 😡 😛
Awwww Maan was getting jelous wen vicky was hugging Geet 😃 Xx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lool geet gives vicky a whole bunch of flowers , while maan only geets one flower. 😆
Maan gets a bit jealous when vicky hugs geet. me like that. I hope vicky does not take any revenge on geet as she has apologised for the mistake. 😊

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