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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: ramahesh
awesome update...

happy new year yaar......

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes
great update!
con't soon

Originally posted by: chubzy
Intrestin update! Maaneet both r mad, cnt they talk nicely, always they hv somethng or othr to argue over

Originally posted by: ansah
awww we are back to basic.....
they are back to bickering.....

LOL......waiting for more

THANK YOU GUYS!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!
They won't be manneet if they don't fight right lol
Ansah maybe we are back to basics yet..hehehe
Will update soon!!!!

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
Loved da update
Do continue

Originally posted by: i rok
Nice update and happy new year

Originally posted by: sharmake11
excellent part pls cont soon i hope Maan tell her the true who he is

Originally posted by: Ameena4Eva
awhh loved ur update yaar soo gud
loved maaneet arguement
love maaneet
plzz update sooonxx!!!

THANK YOU GUYS
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!
I will update soon!!!!

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: trishap
nice part dear...................

Thanx so much!!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
will update soon!

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#854

HEY GUYS!!! Thanx so much for your lovely comments!!!! Enjoy this update!!! It is long (I hope) and as usual leave your comemnts!!! Lets see what happens to Vicky today 😆😆😆😆

Chapter 18
Geet's Greatest Revenge 😆😆

Both Maan and Geet ignored each other after their lunch.. Maan was still in shock and Geet was busy planning her revenge..thinking of a perfect way to get Vicky...After work Geet called Vicky...she calmed herself down before calling him..she was on a revenge mode on right now..and in her head she could see Vicky begging for mercy..she laughed at the image that displayed in her head... "Thanx to him I had to eat lunch with that Kaduos" She dialed Vickys number...
Geet: Hey Vicky (sounding normal)

Vicky: Hey Geet..Watsup?

Geet: Nothing much..just finished work

Vicky: hmm ok why did you call?

Geet: I can't call my friend if I wanted to talk to him just like that?

Vicky: haha I didn't mean it that way..I meant to say if something had happened?

Geet "you planned against me that's what happened": umm nothing happened..just wanted to know if you wanna hang out?

Vicky: umm yeah sure...what do you want to do?

Geet thinking: Idea...lets play tennis...

Vicky: Tennis hmmm ok

Geet "Gooooodddd hehe": yeah I figured that it's been a while since we played so why not

Vicky: Yeah it has been a while..where should we meet?

Geet: hmm let's meet in like half hour..I have to go home and change out of my work clothes and also pick up my tennis rackets and tennis balls..lets meet at Mill Pond Park..they have great tennis courts there

Vicky: Cool I will meet you there..by the way do you have extra tennis racket?

Geet "of course I do am gonna be using yours to beat you with hehe": hmm yeah I do

Vicky: Ok am gonna eat before I meet you at the park

Geet: Alright eat as much as you can tonight..you will be eating more later

Vicky: What did you say??

Geet "damn I said that out loud": I meant to say that after the park we will eat again "whew covered that up"

Vicky: hmm yeah you are right..ok than see you there

Geet: Alright bye

Vicky: Bye (hangs up the phone)

Geet to herself: I will get you Vicky and my little revenge too haha (sounding like the wicked witch of the west from the movie Wizard of Oz)

Geet quickly went home and changed her clothes...she went to the park but parked somewhere close to the tennis court so that it would be easier to escape (if needed) after her revenge...she left her car doors unlocked...She got a bucket full of tennis balls and waited for Vicky to arrive..after about ten minutes she saw Vicky parking his car...she gave a (evil) smile to Vicky and waved at him as he came closer to the tennis court..
Vicky: hey

Geet: When did you change your work clothes? (he was wearing tracking pants with sneakers and a regualr t-shirt)

Vicky: Ohh I decided to grab a bite at home and change clothes

Geet: Ohh ok..well are you ready?

Vicky: yeah..so we are playing regular tennis right? (looking at the bucket full of tennis balls)

Geet "riiigghhhttt (sarcastically)": Yeah I got extra tennis balls so that we don't have to keep collecting them again and again...

Vicky: Good idea gadhi...lets begin..I will serve first

Geet: Don't call me gadhi (standing up and going to her position) and no I will serve all the tennis balls..you just hit ok..I don't like the way you serve

Vicky (went to the other side of the tennis court): why shouldn't I call you gadhi? You call me gadha, stupid and what not..(taking his position as Geet grabs one of the tennis balls) fine you serve than..I don't think you will be able to handle my serves..need someone stronger for that (laughs)

Geet holds the ball in her right hand and looks at Vicky before serving...she throws the ball up in the air and hits it hard with the tennis racket hitting Vicky right on his shoulder..
Vicky: ooowwwwww what was that for?

Geet: For calling me weak and gadhi...

Vicky: Damn you Geet you should've told me in a nicer way..(still in pain)

Geet: I would've told you in a nicer way but I don't think you understand "nice" so I thought this would be a better way to tell you

Vicky: Alright Geet its on...I will make you lose

Geet: hmm lets see Gadhe

Vicky: Gadhi

Geet: Anyway how was your meeting during your lunch...

Vicky: hmm it was good the meeting was very boring though (Geet again grabs another tennis ball in her hand and hits in with her tennis racket..the ball hits Vicky in the stomach) "Geet! what the hell..can't you play right?"

Geet (acting innocent): sorry sorry sorry...I haven't played for a while that is why I am a little rusty..does it hurt? (trying to hide her smile)

Vicky: no it doesn't hurt..I just love to sit on the floor and hold my stomach and yell owww for no apparent reason (sarcastically)

Geet: alright alright jeez don't need to get any attitude..just asking as a caring friend that's all

Vicky (gets up): no problem..why don't you do a practice round before we begin playing..I don't want to get hit again

Geet: Alright whatever you say gadhe (She takes two or three shots while Vicky sits on the bench..rubbing his shoulder and stomach) ok I think I got the hang of it...let's begin

Vicky: Ok I hope so because I do wan't to live and see another day (walking back to his side of the court)

Geet mumbles: not if I can help it

Vicky: Did you say something?

Geet: no not at all..are you ready?

Vicky: yeah...

They both play for a while..Geet doesn't hit Vicky since she didn't want him to get suspicious of her "evil" plans...they both were having random conversations with each other while still playing the game..

Geet: So you know who I went to lunch with since you didn't come?

Vicky: no who?

Geet: With that kadhus client and a friend of yours Maan (hits the ball)

Vicky: ohh really...when did you guys become friend?

Geet: He was being nice to me and he heard me talking on the phone with you today

Vicky: See I told you he was nice

Geet: I don't know he was being way to nice..talk about creep-o-rama

Vicky: am sure he was being nice just like that (hits the ball back to Geet)

Geet: You sure?

Vicky: What do you mean? (hits the ball back to Geet)

Geet: I will show you (She hits the ball aiming at his knee)

Vicky: Geet what the hell was that..you know they hurt (sits on the floor)

Geet: This is what you get for planning against me (she grabs couple of balls in the hand and starts hitting it toward Vicky while he is still on the floor)

Vicky: Oowwwww Geet stop it..what is wrong with you?

Geet: You and that Mr. Kadhus planned against me (hits him with another ball that hits him on his leg)

Vicky: oowwww stop it Geet or else I will do something...what plan are you talking about?

Geet: You wanted to get revenge for what I did to you at my house with Cookie...

Vicky (gets up): What! Are you crazy or what! I forgot about that thing...even if I did wanted to get revenge why would I use my friend? It would be easy enough to get revenge myself without any help (smirked)

Geet (hits him with another tennis ball which hits him on his shoulder again): You are lying..I know you guys teamed up or else why would he be nice to me all of a sudden?

Vicky: Maybe if you had a brain YOU GADHI...maybe he was being nice on his own...I told you..you should give him a chance he is a nice person..I don't know how you even connected the dots in your head..

Geet (holds her racket in midair after hearing Vicky and holds her racket down): Ohh so you guys weren't planning on getting a revenge on me? hehe (does a nervous laugh)

Vicky: No but now I will...(he runs toward Geet...Geet throws her racket toward Vicky which he doges in time...she grabs the tennis ball bucket and starts throwing the tennis balls toward him... "that is it Geet..you are dead today!" He manages to catch some of the balls in his hand and starts throwing it toward Geet.. "aahh Vicky it hurts!" "Ohh really than let me throw some more to see how much"

She starts running around the tennis court screaming and yelling and throwing tennis balls toward Vicky as much as she can..."Vicky it was an innocent mistake" "Innocent? You hit me on my knee, shoulder, stomach, hands and feet..I won't let you go away that easily tonight!" He drops the ball from his hand and starts running toward Geet like a tornado..Geet sees this drops her bucket and runs toward the gate (while screaming) She opens the gate fast and locks it..Vicky runs into the gate "aahhh (screams)" "hahaha this is what you get! (starts doing a victory dance while Vicky watches her from inside the tennis court)" "Geet you are not escaping this easily" He starts climbing the gate...Geet sees this..she screams and runs straight to her car...locking the car when she gets in.. Vicky manages to jump from the gate and runs toward Geet's car..Geet sees Vicky coming toward her car..she starts her car and starts backing up...she gives a victory smile to Vicky and sticks her tongue out "Geet wait and watch..I won't leave you!" "haha yeah I will see what you do...good luck walking tonight haha" She drives off waving a goodbye to him...

Vicky stands there..he puts his hands on his knees and tries to catch his breath "Geet I will get my revenge" He starts walking toward his car..no..not walking...limping towards his car..."oww owww" He sits in his car with great difficulty and drives off to his home...
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Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago