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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: vaniabi

congrats for u r new FF........

it was very interesting.................
plz do continue n add me in ur PM list..............


thank you vaniabi! you are added to the list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: nan_10

interesting story like others... add me


you are added on the list! and am glad u like this fan fic as well!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: tinatartari

im here.plz add me in all ur pm lists n esp tis 1! very nice concept tat they wr intouch of each other via emails even b4 meeting😊bt i want a lil explanation in ur ff hw did they come 2 know abt the email addresses of each other?it wud b gr8 wen they ll meet.👏👏👏plz continue soon.


haha tinatari thank you so much! i will explain tht in the next part so hopefully you will like it how they met lol..and thank you so much!

Originally posted by: sona-rai

wowwwwww yar wat a start 👏send next part soon and thanks for pm me


thank you sona..i will pm u when i update it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mchopra

wow intereseting...cont soon..


thank you so much! i will update soon!

Originally posted by: priza

nice one...can u pls pm me?


Thank you priza! i will def. email you 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

hi... nice start...loved it...

m sure DelhisShark ia maan..
do cont soon n plz add me in ur pm list...
ps-if u ve odr maneet ff's dn plz pm d links.. thnx..


Thank you so much! you are added to the pm list for sure!

Originally posted by: maansi007

nice concept thanx for the pm continue soon would be waiting for ur next update nd do pm


Thank you so much Maansi! you are added to the list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: ansah

that was really nice.....so loved it

and do keep writing


Thank you ansah...i will update soon!

Originally posted by: shinseen

loved this update u come up with good stories

plzz add me to pm list


Thank you shinseen am glad u think so!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chubzy

Nice concept! Plz add me to ur list.



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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG GUYS: Thank you so much for the lovely comments!!! Am SO glad that you guys like this new fan fic so far! I hope I did justice to this as well like others! Love you guys 🤗

Chapter 2

Geet met Vicky down on the first floor for lunch. She was so busy since morning that she almost forgot about her lunch, good thing Vicky called to remind her. She and Vicky have known each other for about a year even though they don't work together in the same floor. She and Vicky only meet for lunch and for some reason they don't hang out after work unless there was a special occasions. At the end of the day, he goes his way and she goes her way. But whenever Geet needs help he is always there for her. He was a good friend to have.

Vicky is the type of person that doesn't share very easily and is usually very occupied with his work but he could be very mischievous when he wants to be. He himself was shocked that he got a friend like Geet is who is the way opposite of him. At first he was hesitant to even talk to her He always sees her everyday running after a elevator and trying to keep herself from falling with the amount of stuff she carries and wearing high heels doesn't help her either. He knows very little about her life and whenever he would ask her she always diverts the topic.

Geet with a big smile: Hey Vicky, have you decided what place to go to?
Vicky: hmm I was thinking we can go to our usual lunch spot
Geet: Alright sounds good..So hows everything with you
Vicky: you know same old stuff...work, home, and then work again..you?
Geet: hmm same I guess
Vicky: you seem very happy today what happend?
Geet: Nothing I received an email from my pen pal that I told you about
Vicky: you still keep in touch with him?
Geet: Of course why shouldn't I?
Vicky: well he is a stranger and for all you know he could be a killer or a physcopath
Geet laughed: Vicky you are so funny...well he could be anyone and I don't care..I like talking to him
Vicky: just when I thought you couldn't get any weirder...have you even seen him?
Geet: No I haven't seen him and he hasn't seen me either..you know sometimes I think that it is better to share problems with strangers
Vicky: how so?
Geet: Well for one thing me and him are strangers right
Vicky: right (looking at her)
Geet: so therefore we do not know each other personally, we can easily give each other advice and talk about anything without judging one another
Vicky: You know it is very hard to understand you (with a smile)
Geet: Yeah I have heard
Vicky: how do you even know if you have come across him at some point and didn't realize it? he could be sitting in front of you and not know about it. where is he from anyway?
Geet: Well judging from his ID he is from Delhi..I don't know if he currently lives there I never asked...
Vicky: You should ask him..what if he is here and keeps his eye on you?
Geet hits him on his arm: Are you trying to scare me? He is not like that...
Vicky: how do you know for sure? He could be anyone..what if he tracked you down?
Geet: Vicky stop it..there is no way he can do that and plus I don't have my name on my ID or anything
Vicky: Never be too sure just think about it (laughing)
Geet gave me him a glare: you know what I am going you can enjoy the rest of your lunch by yourself
Vicky: Alright Geet sorry and anyway you can't go.
Geet: Why can't I go?
Vicky: you didn't answer my question about about how you met him
Geet sighed: Alright but you have to promise that you won't laugh
Vicky smiled: God promise
Geet: Well we met online about a month ago at a online game site
Vicky spits his drink out hearing this and laughed: what!! you serious?
Geet: you promised that you won't laugh...
Vicky: Sorry can't help it...ahem anyway go on (trying to hold his laughter)
Geet: Anyway I was bored and decided to play some online pool game to pass some time..at first I won the game I was about to call it quits but he wouldn't give up so he challenged me until he wins...so long story short that is how we met
Vicky: You know what you both are weird (unable to control his laughter)
Geet: Whatever...he seems like a nice person to talk to and he seems sincere...
Vicky: Am sure (still laughing)
Geet hits him on his arm: stop laughing now...ohh shit I am late I have to get back..
Vicky: ohh damn I have a meeting that is going to start soon...let's go

Day passed by fast and as Geet was driving home she couldn't help but think about what Vicky said about this person. What if he is a phycopath and what if he keeps his eye on her? Can he do that? How?
Geet you are so stupid! How can he do that...he doesn't even know anything about you its all in your imagination but just to make sure I should ask him...


Note: I hope you guys liked it! Feel free to criticize the chapter! I will take everyone's comments into consideration!
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Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg.. m 1st 2 comment... ds feels nice...
anyways,lovely update.... loved d meetng(in an online game.)
loved d convo.. do cont soon... thnx a lot 4 d pm...
Edited by SaJan-SaJan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
great update pls cont soonnnn thanks pm

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