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Posted: 14 years ago

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

manjari dear
kya bolon
have shortage of words now
have no words to tell how bweautifully u have written it
everything smooth n cuteeeeeeeeeee
sweeeeeeeeeeeettttttttttt ss dear
sajan scene was just fab yar
sajan roxxxxxxxxxxxxx
loved the way u have rejoined them
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Posted: 14 years ago
done danna dan doneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
i still cant beleive this ss ends up in my absence
ok just amazingggggggggggggggg ss
when it was started i told u its ur best one na
i still mean my words this was ur best story yar
the way to have potrayed it from starting to end
really u have beautifully handled every relation the scenes the past n present stories
the story was ordinary but ur writting style made it extra ordinary
hatss off for writting such ana amazing piece
n will love to read the second part
ok now the update
it was amazinggggggggg
firstly mayur reaction was worth reading
loved that scene completely
then sajan scene was a treat yar
was just.......................
n loved whenever sammy use to call after he is my son
n little sammy
awwwwwwwwww sweeeeeeeeeeeet na
it was a treat to read a story having two sammy's at sametime
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chilluppp

done danna dan doneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

i still cant beleive this ss ends up in my absence
ok just amazingggggggggggggggg ss
when it was started i told u its ur best one na
i still mean my words this was ur best story yar
the way to have potrayed it from starting to end
really u have beautifully handled every relation the scenes the past n present stories
the story was ordinary but ur writting style made it extra ordinary
hatss off for writting such ana amazing piece
n will love to read the second part
ok now the update
it was amazinggggggggg
firstly mayur reaction was worth reading
loved that scene completely
then sajan scene was a treat yar
was just.......................
n loved whenever sammy use to call after he is my son
n little sammy
awwwwwwwwww sweeeeeeeeeeeet na
it was a treat to read a story having two sammy's at sametime

Heyyy Sara!!
I Misseddd youu and your comments sooooooo muchh!!!
I was waitingg for youu to commentt!!!!
Reallyyy LOVVEEE YOUUU!!
main toh saare comments ka reply ek main hi kar rahin hun!
firstly thank youuuu sooooo much for praising my writing style..
and thanks for all the compliments!
Main kya kahun yaaaaar!
U made my day with ur lovely comments!
Thanks!
Love,
manjari
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️Hey Manji frst of all congrats on giving such a gr8 bend n wonderful end i loved it!!!!!! secondly for late comment actually was busy n did not had time for reading my pm's but anyway finally i read it n enjoyed to the core n ur idea of the sequal is superb !!!! keep up ur good work Manji 👍🏼👍🏼i m proud too have such good frn writer😉🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Manjari, IT IS GR8 that you have converted this SS into an FF........👏 and the narration part was sooooo good.

I liked the way you have put the samrat narrating the flashback episode and the re-union part was sooo romantic & emotional.

And I also appreciate you for taking care of mohit' characterisation also so well.

Good luck to your further updates.

Edited by lakshmi_SG - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

i am extremely sorry for the delay...thank you so much for the treat in the form of your ff.....i am one of those who actually lives on them eversince mjht got over.............this definitely your best infact i have seen a marked improvement in you as a writer after this ff........you were good but after this ff this gotten only better..it's not only restricted to this ff but the other's you write as well........i have started enjoying them too.....for me the star of this ff was adi.loved his characterization....i liked the way you dealt with the whole subject....well measured ......nothing ott overall a very good job…….now i am looking forward to the sequel as well...we've seen the mother son bond hoping to see the father son bond in the sequel & probably a sibling for adi too...........

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear i finally commented
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️Hey Manji frst of all congrats on giving such a gr8 bend n wonderful end i loved it!!!!!! secondly for late comment actually was busy n did not had time for reading my pm's but anyway finally i read it n enjoyed to the core n ur idea of the sequal is superb !!!! keep up ur good work Manji 👍🏼👍🏼i m proud too have such good frn writer😉🤗

hey adeen! was waiting 4 ur comment! and finally you commented!
thank youuu!
im glad u liked it! even im proud to have such a good writer friend! (u write really well!!👏)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Manjari, IT IS GR8 that you have converted this SS into an FF........👏 and the narration part was sooooo good.

I liked the way you have put the samrat narrating the flashback episode and the re-union part was sooo romantic & emotional.

And I also appreciate you for taking care of mohit' characterisation also so well.

Good luck to your further updates.

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Hii Lakshmi!
Thank youu soooooooooooo much! Im so glad u likedd it!
And I made a sequel... this SS is over!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ght_sajan

i am extremely sorry for the delay...thank you so much for the treat in the form of your ff.....i am one of those who actually lives on them eversince mjht got over.............this definitely your best infact i have seen a marked improvement in you as a writer after this ff........you were good but after this ff this gotten only better..it's not only restricted to this ff but the other's you write as well........i have started enjoying them too.....for me the star of this ff was adi.loved his characterization....i liked the way you dealt with the whole subject....well measured ......nothing ott overall a very good job''.now i am looking forward to the sequel as well...we've seen the mother son bond hoping to see the father son bond in the sequel & probably a sibling for adi too...........

Hey Sonu! thanks alot! Im so glad u liked it SS! Well.. I agree with you.. even I could make out the difference... This SS has helped me alot!
Thank You So Much! You comments really mean alot! thats why always wait for them! =))
and yes.. you will surely see dad-son bonding!

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