SS Alone in Paradise(Maaneet)LAST CH pg128 14 feb - Page 72

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Posted: 14 years ago
gr888888888888 update yaar but this arjun😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveee the part!!
Maan is sooo sweetttt!!
But i don't like this arjun😡.
Continue soonn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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Posted: 14 years ago

Alone in Paradise 14


Dadi saw Geet trying the saree ...
Geet: dadi how i am looking?
Dadi: perfect.
Geet: dadi you know i never though in my life that i will wear a designer dress
Dadi: beta kismat
Geet: yes dadi kismat.
Dadi
Dadi: called Maan...
Maan: dadi is everything fine at home
Dadi: yes beta
Maan: then why you called ?
Dadi: beta what you think you will fool me?
Maan: dadi what i did?
Dadi: beta you send that gift
Maan: why would i?
Dadi: beta
Maan: you said kismat ..if she is in my kismat no one can take her away from me ....i am just trying my luck today.
Dadi: did you talk to Arjun?
Maan: yes he said he already know about her .
Dadi:beta then why you are taking risking ?
Maan: dadi i love to take risk
Dadi: but if you lose
Maan: dadi some one said "it is better to love & lost then ever love "
Dadi: she is looking for you.
Maan: let her just you don't tell her.
Dadi: i will not
Maan: so sweet of you...
Dadi: ok send driver at 8
Maan: why Arjun not coming?
Dadi: he just said reach hotel at 8:30
Maan: ok i will send....aur kuch
Dadi: Maan think once again.
Maan: dadi why you are so worried ?

Dadi: beta i am sacred when she will find out that you are that person ,how will she react?
Maan:dadi we will see .....now chill.....
Dadi: beta as you wish cut the call...she saw Geet talking to Pari & laughing.

Maan: open his laptop & started watching new year party video.

smiled

At home
Geet: Pari please find who is this guy?
Pari: how you are sure he is a Guy might be a girl?
Geet: how a girl?
Pari: your some old friend
Geet: who can she be?
Pari: you tell me where the flower boy stand i will try to find
Geet: he stand near Maan's office ..i first saw him when i was going for interview.
Pari: Yar Maan hoga
Geet: pagal ho why he will give me this when i am getting engaged to his friend
Pari: what to whom?
Geet: Arjun.
Pari: are you mad?
Geet: why you are shouting?
Pari: did Maan allowed you?
Geet: why he will stop ?
Pari: Geet you have selected a wrong guy?
Geet: why you are saying like that ? & after all what Maan did to me i really don't feel like trusting any one.
Pari what he did? he cared for you ...
Geet: he cared for me ..what happed at new year eve?
Pari: nothing
Geet: i slapped him for what he did ..& i am sure he will not send me flowers ...
Pari: you slapped him..when ?....shocked
Geet: day before yesterday..
Pari: why?
Geet: for.... paused
Pari: tell?
Geet: nothing
Pari: really Geet you ....
Geet: Pari i know he asked you to hide from me ..but those pictures
PAri: what pictures ?
Geet; nothing ....
Pari: Geet tell me ... what is bothering you? & why you said yes for Arjun....?
Geet: he propose me
Pari: what about Maan?
Geet: please stop it...
Pari: let me tell you, you are not able to see pure love...
Geet: what you want to say?
Pari: i just want to say open your eyes & see who is real & who is fake? i don't know what happen between you & him but that day.
Geet: hmmm ok i have to get ready
Pari: best of luck i hope he is right for you.
Geet: looked at Pari ..she was totally confused ....."ok let me go today then i will decide what to do?"
Pari : ok..
******
Geet got ready ...looked her self in mirror ....
Dadi: beta car is waiting for you...
Geet: thx dadi... she managed her Saree & went out
Dadi: took a deep ...
Geet: sit at back ."please drive fast i am already late."
Driver: hmmm....
Geet; just looked out she didnot noticed at Maan who was continually staring at her .
they reached hotel..
Geet: please you wait here i will be free in hour ....she quickly got out ..she was very nervous .walk inn.
Maan parked the car & followed her ...
Geet at reception: Arjun.
lady: you go in main hall..to your left..
Geet: ajeeb ha he really doesn't have manners ... receive karna kaleya tou hota ....
walked in.. the room was dark .....
Geet: any body there?
ARjun: yes he spotted light on her...
Geet: please close it ....
Arjun: why?
Geet: it is ...
suddenly the room was lighten.
Arjun: what the hell?
Geet: what?
Arjun: why you didn't wore the dress i gave you? he pull his arm
Geet: which dress...
Arjun: that black one... yuck you are so old fashion.... you are going to be my wife not my grandma..
Geet; leave my hand...
Arjun: oh miss Khurana you are very rich wearing diamonds..he run his finger on her neckline..
Geet; push him.. you are drunk.... leave me..& i am not Khurana.
Arjun: why don't you too drink..
Geet; i don't
Arjun: but you did at new year eve...& you did dance.. come dance with me
Geet; that was accident..try to move away.
Arjun: when you are not from Khurana family then who are you?
Geet: i am & orphan & i am Dadi's Maid ...
Arjun: what the hell is this .. he let her free...nt told me that you are Maan's cousin..i thought marrying with you for couple of months will make me rich.
Geet : looked at him
Arjun: oh..... that why he protect you.... gave a wicked laughter....
Geet: i should better leave..
Arjun: you can't leave until i want to.stop her way..
Geet: you can't stop me... she try to push him away...
Arjun: yesterday i was insulted because of you.my friend made fun of me...
Geet: try to free her self... she was crying
Arjun: pull her..her saree tore
Geet: pushed him hard.. he was so drank he fall on floor.. Geet managed to open the door.... she ran out ...

Maan who walked behind Geet.. when he saw Geet entering hall he walk back to car.....it was drizzling he was walking in parking lot.
Geet ran like crazy to car.."where is the car..driver driver..she shouted .."
Maan: turn back as he thought he heard Geet..
Geet; looked at him .. ran to him & hug...
Maan was shocked to see her like that .."what happen"
Geet: just take me home please...
Maan: relax ..hug her back
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Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb superb superb update.. loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago

loved it

thank god this arjun thing is over now


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Posted: 14 years ago

great update

arjun u are dead😆 maan isn't going to leave u now
maan geet hug 🤗 wowwwwwwwwww
loved it
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part..Geet find out about Arjun..I hope Next part Maan confess to Geet.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
finally Arjun track is solved
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful smbolises with hug day. and warm hug from me on the hug day for amazing update ab jaan mein jaan aaye.
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb part
Yayy arjun has finally showed his true colours
Awww Maan was following her cuz he wanted 2 protect her
Pari is a gud frend explaining 2 GEET wat is rite & wrong
Happy V--Day
Cont soon Xx...

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