The New trainee AR FF part 9 pg 8

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sagarika ghosh

@ranv_rules

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: x.sunayna.x
Hey ! Amazing FF ! The concept it really cool & different !
You describe the whole lab/crime scene thing sooo well !! :)

Really want to know about the 'accident' !

Could you please add me to the PM list ?

Can't wait till the next update !

- Sunayna

hey sunayna
u have a really nice name
writing this ff is really tough and i am using my frnd help for the lab and crime scenes..hez ito forensics and stuff
i'll send u a buddy request
and have sent u a pm for the new update
thanks
sagarika

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Nice part frnd.
Thanx for the pm.

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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Hey!

Thanks for the PM :D

I'm hoping I'm still the first comment ! ( Nope im second :( )

Anyway, loved the update !

It all seems soooo realistic the way you describe everything ! I reckon you should get a job in forensics :)

I LOVE both Armaan and Riddhima's characters, and how Riddhima transitions between the Satan and the slightly more normal version !

I really really really want to know about the accident !

P.S if i were Armaan I'd be out of the body farm straight away !

Can't wait till the next part !

- Sunayna

Edited by x.sunayna.x - 14 years ago

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ankitajain94

@ankitajain94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

awesome

thnk for d pm

cont soon

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roshni mittal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

hey awsome parts dear

thnanx for the pm

love u

salina

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namita

@namita18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

hey

great parts yaar

i just loved it...

they are so interesting, specially the character of ridhima...

pls continue soon

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rasikdhara101

@rasikdhara101

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

LMFAOO ! awww hahaha you feel bad for armaan even though your writing it...aww haha so cute ! hmm anywyas...aww i didnt get a PM for this part =[ but its ok hahaha OMGG ...i lovedd thee part ! awww she was nicerr today ! =D andd ohh damn....armaan is fallingg after someone? ;] hjaha anyways....update sooon =]

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naureen

@Norz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

nice ff

just read all the parts

riddhima is harsh on armaan but i am loving this

plz pm me also

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z.e.p.h.y.r

@z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Hey i just caught up with this story! and i just love it!!

This is a very very interesting story.. it kept me glued throughout despite of the fact that imagining Riddhima or Armaan like that is quite difficult.. but hats off to your imagination and the detail that you put in the story.. Are you into forensics by any chance?.. if not, then i must say, excellent background research.. 👍🏼

and i dont know why but i keep imagining Beckett and Castle instead of Riddhima and Armaan when i read this.. their interactions are somewhat similar.. Riddhima's condescending behavior and Armaan's goofy responses remind me of them a lot! i think i am watching too much of Castle lately!! 😛

but i am certainly very interested and eager to read further and also find out about Riddhima's past which seems to be horrific.. and it'll be interesting to see how Armaan fits in the scheme of things.. cant wait for your next update! continue soon 😊

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@ammy-ridz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

hey,

I just returned from my long vacations yesterday..and when I came online..i stumbled across your fic the first thing. And I must say, I loved the concept and your way of writing it!

I especially love the thing that it is something very different, from what I read in AR fics. And your thorough and minute detailing about the forensic stuff just makes it more interesting and involving.

And yeah!..I must say the story does a complete justice to a few aspects of the professions of the protagonists involved in there.

Great work!

Continue soon....and plz add me to your PM list.

Thanx

sai.