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Posted: 14 years ago
nooooooo wat yaar i'm waiting for update aur mila kya note😔do send longggggggggg updates asap😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
update kab karogih yaar...left us for long tym wid the same precap..plz...continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz plz plz sweety update soon na kab karoge😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

***ANIMOSITY***

part 24


Geet opens the door. Everything was covered by White spread. There was weird noise... Weird atmosphere in the room. Something different. Like something odd about this room.
She wonders round before taking everything off to discover what's hidden under the white sheet.
There was some charm hanging from one side to another... From one corner of the winet forum

dow wind started to make howling noise. Geet jumped. She holds her tummy instantly. It wasn't good for the baby to get scared like this.

She slowly starts to take off the spread. One by one.... There. Was pictures... Gifts... Broken mirrors... Geet looked round in confuse... Then she found bed... Wardrobe. It's a bed room.
Some of the windows mirror was broken... Like no one ever came in this room to even repair.

Geet opens the wardrobe. Females cloths... Then another male... She gussed it's a couples room.

One of the worker walked in to the room again...

Worker: mam...
Geet nearly jumps... The creepy voice nearly made her jump.
Geet turns round one hand on her heart and another on her tummy.
Mam: maan Sab.
Geet: ok!

Geet: hello.
Maan: kha ho Tum?
Geet: on the corioder now why?
Maan: I am in the room. Come here quick.
Geet: ok!

Geet walks in to her room. Maan was looking furious. Geet straight way started to become scared. She wasn't sure what was bothering him.
Geet: why happen?
Maan looks at her furiously...
Geet starts to shake a bit. She haven't seen him this angry since after he knowing she was pregnant. She holds her stomach straight way. It was a reflex.
Maan walks towards her in anger and throughs bunch of letters to her.
Maan: what is this?
Geet looks at them in shock.
Geet: I... I...
Maan shoves her against the door. Holding her cheek in. Geet was shaking.
Maan: don't take my innocent behavior towards you as an advantage. That's only because of our baby. Nothing els.
Geet was really shaking now. Her leg was trembling. Like any moment now it would clasp.
Geet: what have I done?
Maan picks one of the letter up.
Maan: who you been weighting to? There was no name. So maan couldn't guss who she was writhing to. she never posted those letter. There was no date.
Geet takes one... They were 2 years old letter. Even she can't remember when she wrote them.
Geet: let go of me. You are hurting me.
Maan pushes her cheek tighter. Geet was straggling to even scream.
Maan: don't think I have forgiven you this easily. Don't even think about it. You are my. Only my.
He frees her. Pushing her towards the door.
Maan: what did you expect I won't find anything out.
Geet was In tears.
Maan holds her by hand and spines her round. With one hand he was holding her stomach and another across her neck.
Geet closed her eyes in fear. All she could think about is hope he doesn't push her or anything.
Maan: don't try to play game with me Geet. There are no chance of you winning. You had many example. Millions. Last 4 years... You have seen many... And you know MSK better then anyone so don't try.
Geet was holding her stomach tight.
Maan: there are many ways I can make your life hell. So remember that.
Maans hand was slowly traveling down to her blouse.
Maan: there are many ways.
Geet: wh...
Maan: shhh.... Don't even talk. Don't taste my anger. I will end up doing something that you will regret. Badly.

Maan pushes Geet to the bed. Softly. Knowing she is pregnant. Geet didn't say a single word. Just went along with him.

Maan makes her relax.
Geet just looked at him in fears. She was scared. Petrified.
Maan: I won't do anything that cause damages to our baby. So take that disgusting thought out of your brain.
Geet just looked at him. His voice of tone changed.
Maan relaxed next to her taking her in to his embrace. He made few phone calls regarding those letters.

Geet was terrified now.

Past...

Maan was fully better.
Both sat opposite of one another. Eating dinner.
Geet: when am I leaving?
Maan: who have told you you are leaving!
Geet looks at him straight way. "stop it!"
Maan leans back on his chair... Smirking...
Maan: go... Who have stopped you.
Geet: look! You!
Maan: bolo...
Geet gets frustrated and walks to the other room.
Maan flows... Pulling her by hand. Both looks at one another.
Geet: let go of me.
Maan: if you like it... How could I?


Next: Maan furious''.


PART 25

opps OH NO' OH NO' our OLD maan is back' what he will do' i am petrified' :D hay you all'. sorry for extream late update but i have found my story line and actually have the courage to type the ANIMOSITY. i was petrified my self ' there will be shock after shock' so be prepare.😈 my mum gave my evil mind bc muhahahahah

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loved all the comments. and now defo 1 update a day

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

so I am the first one

u r back
nice dear
keep going
pls don't stop
i am dead worried
what's in the room?
MSK's fears
his past or what
some girl left him or some female relative
was he betrayed by some one?
OMG something is their in the room some clue to help Geet know Maan better
She loves Maan was is afraid of his rughness his obssession
there has to be something to make Geet strong and sure about Maan
pls
pls
keep moving
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
i finally though maan was changing.. guess not
con't soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
i think maan was bcoming a bit gud 2wards geet bt no he is still d sameeee
i wonder wts more in tht room
update sooooooooonnnnnnn
eager 2 find out wts d secret of tht room
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Posted: 14 years ago
Woahhh!! I Thought He Would Change But Nahiiiii! He's The Same I Guess..
Anywayss Nice Chapter
Update Soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW U UPDATED.............WELLL WELL KEMAYA THAT WAS QUICK.....................😈
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome..... cant wait for more....... plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

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