FF.manneet-**ANIMOSITY**Thread 2 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVED it dear.. Awesome update..
OMG! Hating this Vicky.. Ugh!
Plzz update soon..
Xoxo
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Posted: 14 years ago
Even vicky is hurting his brother thank you for
A awesome update continue soon please
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope theres an update tonight :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
UPDATE YAAR PLZZZZ ADD ME IN UR PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwww....so first i thought maan was sick then i thought vicky was sick..and geet falling for maan...so plz pm me the next time :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey it ws nice update....bt i didnt like vicky...he hs done a big mistake....bt i like geet's concern....vicky shud nt hv done it....i hate him....n i dnt wnt maan to forget geet...bt i also dnt wnt him to think tht it ws geet who hit him tht night....he must knw d truth tht its all done by vicky n brij n geet is innocent...n i wnt geet to go to maan bcs vicky told dr to gave him electric shocks so plz geet muct go to maan n take care of him....she knws maan loves her so much...i didnt like tht maan lost his memory....plz make him well in coming update...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE



I am so sorry hun. i wont PM u. :( awww is just the story track. i hop when you come back after few parts it will be OK! again. so sorry. is it really that bad? lol
xxx
loved ur POV. :D
xx

Hey darling...
Don't be sad or sorry yaar...
I tell you what..I am already checking for the next update...so much for my pledge of not reading the FF for some time! LMAO!!
I guess I was just a little too affected yesterday...I guess i would react like that more frequently these days...haha..that kind of paagalpan ka daora!!
So Please don't remove me from the PM list...lol...sorry for irritating you by telling you to remove and then add back...or actually,it's okay...I'll come on my own and read it..
is it really that bad? Yeah quite bad...but life isn't like a bed of roses so it's fine!
love you
Thanks for replying too
Edited by bluedreamz953 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi... loved d update...
m hating vicky.. hw cud he do dat.. m lovng get's concern....
plz plzz plzzz pm me...
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Posted: 14 years ago

i liked the part.

but their past isn't revealed completely now, n there r complications in the present track.

did maan really foget geet , i don't think so

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Posted: 14 years ago

**ANIMOSITY**

part 18

EID MUBARAK




Geet looked at him petrified.
Geet: what are you doing?
Maan: ... He was still walking close to her...
Geet closed her eyes as his lips were nearly touching her... He stops mere inches way...

Present...


Geet: is everything alright in India?
Birji: yes. Vicky kept maan under shock!
Geet: what?
Birji: yes!
Geet: for how long?
Birji: three weeks!
Geet looked at them in surprise...

Maan: can you leave me alone for a minute!
Vicky: yes bro!
Pari walks in with the files!
Maan: have you found everything?
Pari: yes sir!
Maan: where is she?
Pari: abroad!
Maan: book my ticket!
Pari: I already have sir!

Maan rushes out. He calls his security guards on it's way to keep an eye on Vicky.
Vicky on the other hand were extremely confused. He had no clue what was going on with his brother. He was afraid. He knew he could never outsmart his brother. But this time he have tried his best!

Dr walks in maans car.
Dr: you have to take this painkiller sir!
Maan: I want you to keep my brother under illusion that I have lost my memory! Everything about geet. Geet never existed in my life. Understood!
Dr: yes sir.
Maan: your money have been transferred.
Dr: thank you sir.

Maan sat in his car thinking how stupid his brother was. Maan sing Khurana is the owner if everything and he tried to put him in drug! Brain shock! He laughed at his idea. How stupid could anyone be! He waisted three weeks already! He just couldn't add up the fact that geet smacked him with something! That's not like geet! But he won't forgive her that easily! She wanted to stay way from him! She did. I Maan sing Khurana allowed her to stay way from me. No one had the gut to live there life without his permission and this strongly applies to Geet.
All maan could think was how stupid his brother is. He brings shame in Khurana family! How could he believe if he can pay his money to the Dr to make him ill! Well Maan sing Khurana could pay double the amount to make him fool!No one can or will out smart Maan sing Khurana.

Geet looked at them In shock...
Geet: he is not that fool that he can fall for Vicky!
Birji: don't worry we out smart him!
Geet: no! You don't understand!
Geet went in deep thought! She knew Maan well! Vicky could never outsmart him! Geet and heer were just lucky last time! Maan was madly in love with her! And he just had weird trust on heer! She couldn't think!
Geet: I have to leave!
Mam: what?
Geet: he will be here! Any moment now!
Dad: what do you mean?
Geet: you don't understand! It's maan sing Khurana! How can I explain this to you!
Dad: no! We don't understand! Where you going to go?
Geet: I don't know!
Mum: geet!
Geet started to rush round her flat! Gathering everything. She started to panic! Specially.. the state she left him in! God knows what he will do! How could she be so stupid believing Vicky would fool maan!
Mum: calm down! We will leave twomoro! Promise! Just calm down for now! Please!
Geet: no mum! You don't understand! Call Vicky! Is he still in bed! Call him!
Birji calls Vicky.... Geet snatches the phone...
Geet: where is he?
Vicky: he just went out to see a sight!
Geet: what?
Vicky: he lost his memory! I was informed by the doctor! He was acting weird when he woke up as well!
Geet: are you stupid? He is your brother! You suppose to know him beret then me! He is faking!
Vicky: I don't think he is!
Geet hangs up... Matter of second everything went upside down. Geet just couldn't believe he is maan sing khuranas brother!
Mum: just calm down we will leave twomoro!
Geet: no! I want to leave now!

Heer calls Maan...
Heer: hi juju!
Maan: yes! Have you found her address?
Heer: yes and you have a good news as well!
Maan confused (good news! And that's from geet! No chance! She hates him to the core!) what is it?
Heer: it's best to know from dis mouth!
Maan confused further! He takes the address and hangs up!

Geet was panicking! What if he comes here soon! She couldn't take the risk!
Everyone agreed to leave in that moment of time!

In airport...

Maan plane lands and geet just arrives to head towards India...

Geet was in shock! Her whole three weeks of calm evening were just about to end! God knows what will happen! Maan is insane! She have no idea what he is capable of!
Mum: don't worry! He won't find you!
Geet: I think you are right.
Geet hugs mum tight...

Geet looked round! They were just about to check off... Mum dad and Birji were all in... Just before geet could enter a hand slides on her waist... She looks at the hand. She knew well who it was. She take in deep breath as her heart started to cover in fear. She stood there frozen! Breathing hard! He slowly whispers I hope your holiday was perfect! Geets eyes widens! Maan takes her phone from her hand and her passport. Geet stood there frozen! Couldn't say a single word. She slowly looks at him! It was him! Maan! Her nightmare!
Maan took the sim off from her phone and poped a new one in. then Her and his passport in his pocket!
Maan: shall we go!
Geet was shocked! How on earth he found her in this busy airport and not that how the hell he knew she was in this country?????

Pari: everything is booked sir!
Maan: thanks!
Geet was still looking at Maan in shock... She just couldn't think!
Pari: good evening mam!
Geet looked at Maan with big eyes...
Maan: tell her family that geet is with her husband! And thanks for looking after her for past three weeks!
Pari: yes sir!
Geet still didn't say a word! maan kept a tight hold on geets waist... Not letting her go and walked out of the airport!
Maan: how was your vacation?
Geet looked at him in shock... Vacation? What he was talking about!
Maan still had a bandage round his head from the hit 3 weeks back!
Maan: it's healing! I still can't believe you have done that!
Geet more confused! Because she haven't!
Geet was petrified didn't say a single word!
Maan starts to drive. Geet next to him ad Pari hops in at the back!
Maan: have you told them?
Pari: yes sir! They were in a shock!
Geet looks out she her self was in shock!
Maan drops Pari to the hotel! He droves off with geet somewhere!

Geet still wasn't saying a word! She just couldn't belive how stupid Vicky was! Ugh! She learned a big lesson! Go with her own plan next time! Maybe kill her self! That seems like a best option! But then my child! She couldn't!

Maan looked at her! She was in deep thought! He kept quit for few second letting her think! She needs it! To answer his question of course! She have plenty things to explain!

They drove for an hour or two eventually arrived at a small banglow! They were in singapoor!

Maan parks the car and walks out coming to the other side... Taking geet out!
Geet: I want to go home!
Maan looks at her angrily and snaps "shut up!"
Geet jumps! She starts to be come more petrified! Specially now she have another living to protect! She had to be strong! And cant act like a cat in front of the lion! Maan slides his hand on her waist again and darts to walk towards the house. He hands the key to geet!
Geet refuges to take it!
Maan gives her another angry glare makes her hold the key and he helps her to open the door!
Maan picks her up! She was refusing to even go in to the house!
Maan: I hard there is a good news! I want to here it from you!
Geet gave her another glare. She knew what he ment! But he had no clue what heer was talking about! And Maan couldn't mention heers name because he knew well geet... Well his family would murder her! She is nothing to him! Long as they stay way from geet and create no problem! He won't create any problem for them!

Maan: what is it? He asked roughly!



Next: more in the lift'.


present: WHAT IS IT GEET? WHATS THE SURPRISE?



hay you all' :D LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS> HEHEH ok' now more' OMG do u think she will tell him???

xxxLIKE BUTTON

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago

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