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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#861

tat was an awesome update kaheela...very touching past of tina..n s our abhay is a sweet guardian angel...madam sherry was good to turn out tat way to help poor girls..really it was such an update..no words to say..abhiya were cute in the stinky store room..and so is this james going to be the soulmate for tina..at their 1st meet itself they got lost in each other..update soon kaheela..very nice...
luv,
ramani.

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#862

awesome update..........feeling so sad to hear tina's story..............so, james and tina r attracted towards each other.................abhay n piya romance is so cute

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SimplyAparajita

@SimplyAparajita

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#863

Omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg... Kaheela.... Its mindblowing yaar......: standingovation to your imagination..... Abhay is such a sweetheart.... I love him more now........ And james! Ouch... Whats that which is between him and tina...i am shell shocked by listening to her story... I was literally crying and abusing those loser mcp with all the sware words i knew..:.... And is something wrong between chand and abhay.. I mean are you planning something like new entry or a forthcoming danger..... As abhay sounds so busy and he never was this way..... And abhiya store room scene omg.:). I am still in my dreamland.... How beautifully you show us vivid and picturesque romance of abhiya... I could seriously feel the magic and chemistry and that spark of love between them... And yes tina is so good and abhay is to supergood.. Pia is so lucky to have them:) i love the bonding between trio. ..:) waiting for pia to open up to abhay and tina about her life... After all even pia has faced alot in life but atleast not as much as tina.... And yes i guess pia has started to displace maithli from abhay's heart but i am scared i hope no blunder happens...

And last scene tina with spoon in her mouth...🤣.... What was she doing...omg planning to break her teeth....use bolo.. Vampire wale 2 teeth Permanent hai milk teeth nahi... That they will come again..,🤣.... I have a doubt yar... I mean how do vampire brush teeth... Means normal ones can be brushed but how do they brush their fangs..🤣. I guess in morning while brushing they take their fangs out and brush them too and then hide them... 🤣And if they dont brush their white white colgate bubblegum fangs then omg.🤣.. Such unhygenic creatures... 🤣Haha... Awesome update.. Enjoyed it... It was all perfect... See i am rating it "* * * * *" 5 stars complete and yes here i go " 'O' " a full moon with stars..[after all its about vamps which are incomplete without full moon].. Continue soon

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 14 years ago

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Payal <a href="http://www.glitter-graphics.com"><i

@lighteningbuzz

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#864

Re: 31st Update

Very emotional update! Tina's story was very emotional and full of pain. Gosh, I love Abhay! He is such a true definition of a knight in shining armour! I love him for how he turned Tina's life around and helped her out. This is what you call an guardian angel. I have immense respect for the character of Abhay in your updates more than ever now.

I love Abhay in your updates!

Looks like there's going to be a love story between James and Tina. Awwww finally she will get love in her life!! She truly deserves that happiness now!

Edited by lighteningbuzz - 14 years ago

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#865

@ Sapphire_238, Tahani01, Shrevian, Ridwana1234, RB81, Nidhsara

thanks you allot for liking it😳, glad you enjoyed it 😊

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: SimplyAparajita
Omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg... Kaheela.... Its mindblowing yaar......: standingovation to your imagination..... Abhay is such a sweetheart.... I love him more now........ And james! Ouch... Whats that which is between him and tina...i am shell shocked by listening to her story... I was literally crying and abusing those loser mcp with all the sware words i knew..:.... And is something wrong between chand and abhay.. I mean are you planning something like new entry or a forthcoming danger..... As abhay sounds so busy and he never was this way..... And abhiya store room scene omg.:). I am still in my dreamland.... How beautifully you show us vivid and picturesque romance of abhiya... I could seriously feel the magic and chemistry and that spark of love between them... And yes tina is so good and abhay is to supergood.. Pia is so lucky to have them:) i love the bonding between trio. ..:) waiting for pia to open up to abhay and tina about her life... After all even pia has faced alot in life but atleast not as much as tina.... And yes i guess pia has started to displace maithli from abhay's heart but i am scared i hope no blunder happens...

And last scene tina with spoon in her mouth...🤣.... What was she doing...omg planning to break her teeth....use bolo.. Vampire wale 2 teeth Permanent hai milk teeth nahi... That they will come again..,🤣.... I have a doubt yar... I mean how do vampire brush teeth... Means normal ones can be brushed but how do they brush their fangs..🤣. I guess in morning while brushing they take their fangs out and brush them too and then hide them... 🤣And if they dont brush their white white colgate bubblegum fangs then omg.🤣.. Such unhygenic creatures... 🤣Haha... Awesome update.. Enjoyed it... It was all perfect... See i am rating it "* * * * *" 5 stars complete and yes here i go " 'O' " a full moon with stars..[after all its about vamps which are incomplete without full moon].. Continue soon

awww thanks you so much Aparajita😳, you are way too sweet😳😳

@ brown keep reading to find out😉

@ purple i am glad you could imagine it, that feels good😃 i mean when a reader can really imagine the scene that means allot to the writer😳

@ red Piya has a problem in telling them about her dad because she doesn't think about him anymore she feels he has abandoned her long time when she needed him the most thats why she tries to make him of no importance, beside she cares about her sisters allot so she doesn't want her truth to affect their future!

@ black🤣 aree yaar she was eating Gulab jamun😆

@ pink🤣🤣 i think they brush twice once with their normal teeth and then they turn into vampire and then brush again😆 that will be double of tooth paste waste but hey they got to be clean na😉

and i give 5 stars for your sense of humor and for your sweetness too😃

Edited by ka7eela - 14 years ago

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#867

Originally posted by: lighteningbuzz
Re: 31st Update

Very emotional update! Tina's story was very emotional and full of pain. Gosh, I love Abhay! He is such a true definition of a knight in shining armour! I love him for how he turned Tina's life around and helped her out. This is what you call an guardian angel. I have immense respect for the character of Abhay in your updates more than ever now.

I love Abhay in your updates!

Looks like there's going to be a love story between James and Tina. Awwww finally she will get love in her life!! She truly deserves that happiness now!

Payal my sweetest sis 🤗 thanks allot hun😳

Abhay is my kind of guy too😍 i think he is like every girl's dream boy😆..too bad guys like him don't exist or do they?😉

but i sure hope so😳

Tina had a very painful past and she really deserve to be happy again

i am glad you liked this update 😊

thanks for the cute emoticons😳

Edited by ka7eela - 14 years ago

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-SnowKid-

@-SnowKid-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#868

awesomeeeeeeeee update.........nw m fan of ur wittin..........
keep up d good work.........
update asap...........thnx for d pm.......

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#869

Awesome Part.. Seems Abhiya's Date plan is postpone.. Tina's life story was great.. n d new couple making is Tina-James dat's nice.. Ur a Awesome Writer Dear.. Hats off 2 u... M waiting as usual for d next part wit more suprises... Thanx for d pm.. Tkcr.. Lolzz..

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Antara

@Antara106

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#870

ahhh!!! what an update dear.... I JUST LOVED IT!!.... aww, Tina's story was really sad.... I really felt bad for her.... And hey, I absolutely loved n admired he exchange between ABHIYA.... Fabulous dear..... And those lines u used to describe humanity n ethics..... It's like coming from someone who is really matured.... WOW kaheela, u r absolutely amazing..... really yaar, u write amazing..... and here I am, short of words, to describe what I am feeling now.....

Great work as usual Kaheela, keep writing okay.... n loveeee you..... will check out your next update of the other FF as soon as I can....... update soon.............