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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG..what does the precap mean??? 😲

Anyways...nice update Di!
Loved their morning fight..that Maaneet 😆

Thank You!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it... hahaha...

Such a light hearted FF... its so much fun reading this one!!!

Continue soon!

Love

Mina
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update thanks
Loved the part were she says did u rape me
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww dat was awesmmmm
geet wakin up askin maan questions hahah was soo funiii especially nanga panga and then wen maan was chnaging and geet was peeping gosh she cudnt resist
awwww shes gona blame maan omgg i dunt want this to happen
i cnt wait 4 more
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just finished reading the recently updated part, and wow you have done an amazing job. Truly a different story indeed...love their lil nhok jhoks, and their interactions; ahhh only if life were really like that :$

you're truly amazing, keep up the great work :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 34

both could not say how they were feeling, uncomfartable still warm
so far yet so close. definitly some thing new what geet felt
she looked at him unsure of why she was looking at him like this,
what was it so different about him today, she shivered a bit was it
because of the cold air or her thoughts. maan removed his shirt &
asked her to wear it. she wore it above her top & tied a knot at the bottom
geet was now concious to look at his bare body, she tried to think different
they were walking into the house, prem dragged mukti pushed her infront of geet
prem - geet ise kuch samjavoo
mukti hugged geet & started to cry out loud
geet looked confused & looked at maan & then prem
geet - what happened
mukti - isne ...ummm!!! crying out loud
prem - meri galti nahi thi, I was just trying to help
geet - kya huwa koi batayegha bhi
mukti kept crying, they walked into the farm house
geet made her sit in the couch & maan got her some water to drink
geet shouted at prem - what happened
prem - we got stuck in rain last night
geet looked at maan, he was quite
geet - umm
prem - she was totally drenched & fainted
geet gasped & looked at maan, he looked away
prem - we stayed back in old garage type of place, she was shivering
so I changed her dress &...
mukti - & he raped me
prem - I did'nt force u, u were the one who hugged me first
geet was pink & looked down
mukti - main hosh main nahi thi tum to hosh main the na
she ran into the room upstairs
prem - geet main kya kar sakta hoon?
geet cleared her throat looking at maan, he was dumb stuck
geet - how could u she is not ur type and all right then what is all this
it a good gesture u were taking care of her, but how could u?
maan noded in concern with geet
prem - yaar how do u expect me to control myself, she was umm
& usne hi mujhe hug kiya & moved closer
geet - lekin phir bhi
prem looked at maan - tumhi batavoo, can u control ur self if a girl is advancing
in that condition.
maan lookd confused & did'nt know what to say
geet narrowed her eyebrows looked at maan waiting for an answere
prem - nahi na
geet was shocked, maan noded a no looking at geet like maine kuch nahi kaha
she did'nt want to accept that
prem - agar kuch nahi kiya to bhi use bura lagta
geet in anger tone - woh kyun
maan cleared his throat - its ok, I think u should go & speak to her
geet - nahi wait tell me use bura kyun lagta
prem - simple she would have felt that she is not attractive enough, imagine
yaar ek ladka ek ladhki ko use haal main deehkta aur kuch na kare!!! thats defenit
an insult to that girl right.
maan closed his eyes knowing geets reaction now
she got angry & walked into another room
prem looked at maan - ise kya huwa
maan - tum nahi samjho ge
prem - BTW hi I am Prem
maan - hi I am ...before he could complete
prem - tumhe kaun nahi jantha
maan was glad some one in her aquantance would accept him as Maan Singh Khurana
but his thoughts were short lived
prem - bachan right
maan weak smile - right & hugged him, I still feel u should go & talk to mukti
prem rubbed his head & went to mukti's room

maan ran behind geet, he sneaked into the room

geet - don't even come inside
maan - meri baat to suno
geet she picked up what ever came on her way & started throwing at him
he tried catching few & then shouted GEET STOP IT
that added up to her anger. how could u do this to me
maan - what did I do now
geet - itne bole mat bano..continued throwing hair brush, flower wase
maan - geet deehko lag jayeghi
geet cried out louder..ummm....u insulted me...umm..she looked at her self
in the mirror & broke the mirror punching it & hurting her self
& still getting wild at the thought not sure what was it bothering her
maan - ENOUGH turned & locked the door and walked towards her in anger
geet took the cream bottle & threw at him, he bend down & before she could pick up
any thing else, he held her both hands, she put up a fight trying to kick him
he pinned her to the wall holding her hands above her shoulder
geet - chodo mujhe, what are u doing now struggling to let go his grip
maan - this what u want me to do???
moved closer pressing himself on her, she was intimidated & tried moving away
he held her in place. his breath caressed her neck, jaw line & lips
geet mumered babji yeh kya kar rahen hain, mera matlab yeh to nahi tha
geet turned her face in disgust & tear rolled down her eyes in fear & anger
he eased his grip - daro mat main tumhare marzi ke khilaf tumhe kuch nahi karonga
she hugged him & weeped - sorry
maan patting her head holding her in his arms- jantha hoon tumhe, soch ne se pehle
bolthi ho phir sochthi rahti ho
geet - aap bahut bure ho
maan - kyun
geet - humesha mujhe shant kar lete ho
maan smiled
geet innocently curious - aap ko sach much kuch nahi feel huwa mujhe deehk kar
maan blushed and wondered what to reply
geet - tell me the truth
maan - actually I was more worried for u, tum respond hi nahi kar rahi thi,
main bahut dar gaya tha
geet - really
maan - umm !!she hugs him closer. they remained closer for few mins feeling the warmth
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then realizing she was going over board, she wanted to pull out, he could read her discomfort
maan smiled & wickedly said - waise mujhe tumhare rape karne kya zaroorat hain
geet snapped back moving out of the hug to meet his eyes - kyun
maan - main tumhara BF... mera to haaq bantha hain
she starts to wak him.. he holds her hand, she looks at him confused because he
never does that usually - lag jayaghi tumhe
he makes her sit on the bed & cleans her wound - itna gussa kyun karti ho
she smiled wickedly.. he continues to put medicin on them
maan - agle bar gussa aayee to mujhe mar dena, khud ko nahi
and kissed her dressed hands

precap
more of farm house
VM CREDIT ARluver12345 & AVIS Meyis

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lol...Geet...hahah Loved maaneet soooo cute!!! haha loved it..Awesome update continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Wow first to comment,
i am so glad,
loved the update!
Geet is so funny and Maan is so romantic and cary,
Prem was also so funny................
Please update really soon,
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
lolzzzzzz m sitting in library n reading this instead of studying.....rofl
very nice muskan😊👏
Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update di loved these parts soo much :
he eased his grip - daro mat main tumhare marzi ke khilaf tumhe kuch nahi karonga
she hugged him & weeped - sorry
maan patting her head holding her in his arms- jantha hoon tumhe, soch ne se pehle
bolthi ho phir sochthi rahti ho
geet - aap bahut bure ho
maan - kyun
geet - humesha mujhe shant kar lete ho
maan smiled
geet innocently curious - aap ko sach much kuch nahi feel huwa mujhe deehk kar
maan blushed and wondered what to reply
geet - tell me the truth
maan - actually I was more worried for u, tum respond hi nahi kar rahi thi,
main bahut dar gaya tha
geet - really
maan - umm !!she hugs him closer. they remained closer for few mins feeling the warmth

maan - agle bar gussa aayee to mujhe mar dena, khud ko nahi

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