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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Muskan,Congrats for your New thread and UPDATE SOON PLS!!!! and keep writing fabulously..!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congratulation for new thread. sorry was not able to comment . but read each part. thank u so much for pm. pls update soon, i am excited for maaneet's new life. and yes both other ff's truly magical and pyaar ka ehsaas are also very good.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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a happy and prosperous new year to you and your family.

hoping you had a fabulous Diwali too.

my personal and most selfish new year wish is that your writing grows from strength to strength, and you keep blessing your readers with awesome updates day in, day out.

congratz on your new thread........for Madhoshi.
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hey conrats for the new thread.

n update soon

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congratulation for the new thread..............😃
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congrats for the new thread yaar... wen the next update ll be ???
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~madhoshi~
part 54

they reached khurana mansion, meera welcomed them with a aarthi
they took the emprints of her hand on the wall & she slipped
the rice pot with her right leg inward & walked on the red kumkum water
they sat in the hall & daadi made them have some sweets
geet was feeling shy & quitely looking down all the while
baby~papa ke saat rahenge👏
geet~chup kar
maan lifted his eyebrows looked at her talking to the baby and adored
it was his whole life, his whole world,
uski sari khusyian mano unhe main samati thi
for some reason he maintained a stirn looked. geet was getting tensed
she feared if he repented marrying her
maan - have you eaten any thing from morning
geet noded no
baby~phir se mujhe bhooka raka😡
maan shouted - what do you keep doing
baby~giggling😛

Geet kept quite
daadi - let her change first & u also go & change
meera took her to maans room in the mansion & geet changed to simpler suit
maan went to the outhouse.
geet sat on the bed feeling uncertain of every thing, she was getting mixed
feelings she was excited that they were finally in a inseparable relation
and wondered how maan was going to accept her into his life.

maan changed & sat on his love chair streching his leg
kaise kaho tuje, apna banaane ko ji chahata hai
kitna yeh haal-e-Dil sunaane ko ji chahata hai
khus naseeb hoon main ki tu mili mujhe
saath tera nibhaane ko ji chahata hai
aab to aise lagta hain ki mano, chut gaya hai nata har dard se mera
ab to muskurane ko ji chahata hai

geet came and stood near him.
maan - umm
geet - woh daadi was looking for u
they walked to the mansion
daadi, dev & meera waited for them on the dinning table
maan made geet sit on the chair next to him & served her
daadi - these are some sprouts, is good for you
geet was overwhelmed with their love & affection
baby~mujhe sprouts kahana hain
maans eyes wandered around her making sure she was comfartable
after the lunch maan - tum chahe to todi dare rest karlo
dev & meera smiled & looked away
geet went to the room & restlessly waited for him. she wanted to know how he was
feeling about all this... she waited endlessly and dossed off.

daadi - nakul, maan ka samaan outhouse se shift kardena
maan - that is not required I will stay there only
daadi - phir geet
maan just walked away


latter in the evening meera came & woke geet
daadi had arranged for some beauticians to help geet dress up
they dresssed her up in a rich heavy red saree & khandani jewels, that daadi had given to her
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rrkNH4nab4Y[/YOUTUBE]
they tied up her hair in a bun & put flowers around them
meera - thats not fair daadi
geet looked confused
daadi - kya huwa
meera - mujhe bhi aise hi jewels chahiya
daadi - yeh to khandan ki badi bahu ko hi miliga
meera made a baby face
geet - isme kya hain, aap rakhlo... & started to remove them
meera - nahi geet, I was just kidding
daadi made her drink some juice
maan walked in - challen and stood at the door admiring her
daadi & meera looked at each other & slowly walked out leaving them alone
maan walked towards her. she looked down knoting her pallo
he wore a black high neck suit with red shirt..the rich red shade same as her saree
maan came closer, her heart was beating very fast, she could hear it thud in her
ears, she shivered in his closeness. his hand slowly moved to her hair
and removed the flowers. geet was unsure on his intentions, fluttered her eye lashes
he the removed all the pins & untied her hair. he bend down to pick the hair brush
geet closed her eyes & slipped her hand around his waist. he brushed her hair
and let few starnds in front.


maan - challen
geet - mujhe aap se kuch pochna hain
maan - abhi nahi, now we are getting late
they drove in his car to the venue
the whole place was dazzling with sliver shade & decorated with white & red roses
the theme, she narrated to maan. she looked around every one was dressed in
shade of white. she looked at maan & did'nt know what to expect from him
she knew she loved him, but his acts made her feel love was too inadequate word
to express what she started to feel for him.
aaj dil mano un par nisaar hua jaye re,
nahi hua ab tak woh aaj hua jaye re,
pyaar bhara aankhon mein sharab ki atrah,
kaise woh chupayee yeh benaqaab hua jaye re.
nazare churati, kuch sharmati, aapne daman main khusiyan samet thi

maan looked at her restlessness & tried to meet her eyes, she looked away
avoiding his gaze
uski nazaron ne dekha kuch is tarah se,
mehkhane mein ho woh behake is tarah se,
na karti khata nazarein na lutata chain,
dil apna gava kar yun baithe jannat mili ho aise.

maan introduced her to all the guests & walked closely to her
pinky, sasha, tasha & adi congratulated them
sasha hugged geet - am really happy for you
maan looked at her, she still looked uncomfartable
geet heard few people speak about maans success & how he could get married to any
one then why geet, small town girl. love is blind I heard now I believe they giggled
geets insecurity began to ponder, kanhi unhe aise to nahi lagta ki maine unse shaadi
paise ke liya ki hogi, woh mera bare main galat to nahi sochte honge
baby~mama😳
geet~umm
baby~aap galat galat mat socho na😕
geet~mujhe bahut dar lagraha hain
Khata kar baithe hai hum, woh kahan gunhagar hai
kaise jane hum !! shayad unhe hamse bhi bepanah pyar hai

precap
tanhayee tanhayee!!!
VM credit THEseema1994
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey muskaan lovely update...
i m so happy for maneet!!!!
wat is this bt??!! maan going to stay in out house!!!!!!😕 nd geet in mansion!!!!😲
i want Geet-Maan to live together..
hope they sort out every thing...
update soon............
can't wait 4 the nxt update...
Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oye hoyeeeeee shaadi ho gayi....!!!!! 😳😳😳😳😳 aur yeh kya???? maan will stay in the outhouse and geet in the mansion??????? 😲😲😲😲😲 geet ko bhi outhouse mein shift karo ...!!!!!!

and now she's getting all insecure with like a 1000..... thousands....!!!! awwww...... hope they get some time to talk and clear all the confusions ...!!!!

lovely update muski,....

soumya


P.S. see i commented on other page, too.... not just the first page...... 😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Happy diwali!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome part
loved the part
continue it

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