3 musibats living together Version1 and 2(page 32) - Page 16

Originally posted by: shininggal2008

yeah sure dont worry wo din bi kabhi na kabhi aajayega 😆

kabhi na kabhi ka kya matlab, is sunday ko hi mill lo na😃

Originally posted by: Cutie_Chicka93

nakre dikha na bandh karo nd comee!

ok aaya but 1 shart hai, tell me what happened between u and moosa😃

Originally posted by: hunder

ok aaya but 1 shart hai, tell me what happened between u and moosa😃

nothing happened.. now come.. or else m never gona curse u out again.. nd m gona show u my nakres

Originally posted by: Cutie_Chicka93

nothing happened.. now come.. or else m never gona curse u out again.. nd m gona show u my nakres

oye hoye, mein to darr gaya😆😆😆..............chalo aayo wahan par

Originally posted by: hunder

haha mujhe kick karna itna aasan nahi, woh to bas sani and shin hi kar sakte hai😆

bhai trust me u do not wanna underestimate me when i get truly aggressive i can actually hurt ppl and not just pretend hit them. lolz

Originally posted by: shininggal2008

yeah sure dont worry wo din bi kabhi na kabhi aajayega 😆

haan i'll be waiting for that day

Originally posted by: SValeCalGal

Everyone if u liked it, then plz comment.

So .. if I got it correct, this was a one-time deal and you wrote for a very specific audience - right? Which means that whoever it was directed to was already familiar with the characters, plot, and objective and were 'tuned' in .. nevertheless, it has massive problems as a 'story' .. that said, I WILL commend you for making the effort to write a narrative (most of the little I have subjected myself to so far on this forum, is ASTONISHINGLY slipshod!) .. just as an exercise, why don't you see what you think of this:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1405584

listen it was a one time deal or not its non of ur business, ya i wrote it for selected audience and i don't mind writing for them again if i am in a mood.

i never said i am a good writer like u and neither do i want to, all i do is try to make my friends laugh and if i am able to do that then i don't care what others think about me.

as far as the link u have posted i don't have the time to read ur stuff as they are not my type

Originally posted by: shininggal2008

to maien kaha na kd.. tum sab wait karte raho 😛 🤣

just 1 week ok😉

Originally posted by: hnisha

😡 😡 😡 ek week ke andar andar likho ok.. 😛

nani warna PM attack ki option to hai hi na😆😆😆