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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#421

awesome update!!!
it was really cute n adorable...

do continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

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dhano_Tejank

@dhano_Tejank

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#422

👏wwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!

wat more to say ......just amazing👏

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#423

lovedddddddddddddddddd it osom and blosom i loved ur writing skills

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#424

mehak.it was just mindblowing!

the letters n all.......was all so cute........

just loved it!

hope 1st dec comes sooon! n d surprise mayu has for nupur........!!

gr8 goin........

all of ur ffz are aweome but this is extra awesome......😆😆😆😆

anyways thnx aton for d pm!

😛

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#425

it was just outstanding , amazing yaar kudos to u

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#426

thank u so so so so so soooooooooooooo much guys..🤗

@divya di..thank u so much di..i am really flattered..😳

@rosh.LOL..dear..i wish i would have experienced all this romance..😳

PART 17

nupur's eyes filled with tears..1st december...the day he confessed his love for her..and now he was returning
..she wasn't able to control her happiness...

N..hello gunjan..

G..haan nupur..

N..gunjan mayank kal a rahe hain..

G..kia?..tu bata rahi thi k next month..

N..nahi..wo jo aj letter diya na tu ne mujhe..us mian likha hai unhon ne k wo 1st december ko a rahen hain..pore teen saal k baad gunajn..i am so happy..main..

G..relax nupur..khushi main kuch ulta sedha mat kar lena...aunti ka pata hai na tujhe...just relax..aur jiju aye gey tu khud mil len gey tujh se
he understands the situation better..

N..lekin gunjan..

G..nupur plz

N..ok..thek hai

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Next morning was 1 st december..nupur got up and she started trying maynk's number..but it was switched off.

N..haad ho gai..teen saal main pehli baar phn karne lagi hon tu band hai..

Her mom entered her room, fully dressed ..

PB..nupur main tumhare susral ja rahi hon..shilpa g k sath tumhari shaddi ki shopping karni hai mujhe..

N.mom wo..

PB..tum se kuch poch nahi rahi hon..bus bata rahi hon...

But nupur was very very excited..although she wasnt asked for once about her wedding..she wasn't asked abt her choice in shopping for once, and she used to get very hurt, but today the case was different..
she was very happy on mayank's arrival and so didnt mind anything..

She opened the cupboard..took out the white dress she wore when maynk left at the farewell night.

N..aj yehi pehnti hon..aur ab tu koi problem bhi nahi hai..mom ghr pe nahi hain..main kahin bhi ja sakti hon.

She took a bath and changed into the white dre frock and churidaar.

applied kajal and very light make up...the same silvery bangles in one hand and the braclet in the other..and wore the dupata...and looked in the mirror for the final confirmation..

N..hmmm...achi tu lag rahi hon..bus gunajn se ik daafa..

She was about to hold her mobile when she stopped..

N..nahi..phir se mujhe dante gi..k main over excited ho rahi hon..samjhti nahi hai..samrat jata na 3 saal k liye tu main pochti...

She started to wait for mayank's call..she was sure that he would call her immedietely after reaching delhi..

Time was passing and it was almost noon..she started reading all the letters of mayank again..she read them about 5 times...

N..kahan chalen gaye hain...mumbai to delhi k flights tu sari land ho gai hain..kahin train ya bus se tu nahi a rahe..

She started taking rounds of the room..

N..lekin agr train ye bus se arahe hotey tu phn tu milta..phn bhi nahi mil raha..kahan chale gaye hain...

She went near the window and leaned agianst it..closed her eyes...they were getting a bit wet...

For 3 years she was being patient but now she was getting impatient..mostly bcz she dint knew where was mayank..

N..agr tu merey sath koi mazak kar rahe hi na tu ...

She closed her eyes again..this time tears were falling..

nupur..

She opened her eyes...she closed her fist..holding the curtain..her heart beat increased...and her lips started trembling..her mind had told her whose voice this was ..but she was afraid to accept..

Nupur..main a gaya hon..

The tears in her eyes started flowing with more intensity..her fists closed more tightly..she was waiting for this voice
since three years but now she didnt had the courage to face him..

meri taraf dekho gi nahi..

She was fearing his sight...she dint wanted to turn,.what if it was a dream..her heart was beating faster and faster..

thek hia..tu main chala jata hon..

N...Nahi..

Se turned and saw mayank...the same smile on his afce...the same affection in his eyes...standing in front of her..a few steps away..it was not her dream..it was real..he had returned...

she ran towards him but stopped right close to him..

Mayank expected her to hug him but she stood still in front of her..

Mayank's eyes were seeing nupur after so long..she was just the same ...the same fear in her eyes..the same innocence of her face..the same tremble of her hands...

Nupur took a step forward and gently placed her palm on mayank's cheek..she wanted to feel his touch..his presence..

Mayank held her hand on his cheek and kissed it..his eyes also got tears on feeling the touch of the girl he had loved
with so much devotion..

Mayank tightly held her hand and finally nuru realised it was not a dream...her lips broke into a smile and her eyes flowng with tears and she hugged him....

Tightly clucthing his collar and her chin on his shoulder..tears flowing constantly..

mayank embracing her with his arms,. tightning her in his strong arms..his hands lost in her open hair and her lips gently touhcing her shoulder...Mayank could hear the sobs of nupur.

M..ab aisey khare rahe gey kia...

He tried to seperate her but she refsued to leave him..more tighlty holding his collar..

M..nupur..

M..plz mujhe ehsaas hone dijiye k ap wapis a gaye ho..

Mayank again tighetnd the grip of his arms...

Finally after sometime nupur loosened her fists and gently moved away...tears frozen near her eyes smearing her kajal..

She lifted her head from his shoulder and mayank rubbed his thumb on the traces of her tears..and kissed her eye lash..just the way he kissed before leavig.....slowly moved his fingers in her hair to
settle all the flowing hair due to the hug..and nupur was staring at him with wide open eyes..

mayank held her from her waist..

M..kaisi ho nupur..

N..kaisi lag rahi hon..

mayank moved abit way...hand still on her wait...

M...hmmm..bikul jaisa chor kar gaya tha..

Nupur smiled...

M...sab se ziyada tumhari smile miss ki hai main ne..i swear..

Nupur blushed but something struck her mind..

N..ap yahan kaise?..

M..kia mtlb?..

She removed his hand from her waist..

N..mom a gai tu..ap jao yahan se main..

M..relax nupur..tumhari mom sham tak nahi ane walin..mian en hi un ko aur mom ko shoopping pe behja hai..dont worry..

N..huh?..mtlb ap subha se aye ho..

M...haan...

N..aur mujh se milne k liye ye plan kar arhe they?..

M..haan..

N..OMG..i dont belive this..ap ne mom ko

M..ab hum ye bekaar ki batien chor sakte hain..

He went to the sofa dn sat on it and nupue sat beside him, placing her head on his chest and he placed her arms around her.

N..mujhe samjh nahi a rahi k kaise kahon main kia feel kar rahi hon..i am..

M..its ok..rehne do..tum nahi keh sakti..

N..hmm..tu...merey liye kia laye ho ap?..

Mayank was silent..but then he spoke up..

M..nupur mujhe tum se kuch pochna hai..

N..hmmm..

He removed his arms and nupur lifted her head from his chest and he stood up..nad sat down on his kness on the floor...nupur was sitting on the sofa.

M..nupur hamari shaddi hum se poch kar fix nahi hoyi thi..but then destiny brought us close..made us fell in love..aur ab hamari shaddi ko bus ik hafta reh gaya hai..i dont know ..shiyed tumhain ajeeb lage..per mujhe kal ehsaas hua k main ne tu tum se kabhi pocha hi hai..i was considering everything on my own..it is ur right to be asked from u..

Nupur s' eyes were showing the level of surprise she was going through...

N..ap kia..

He held her hands tighly and looked into her eyes..

M..nupur bhushan ..will u marry me?..

nupur was speechless..she never imagined that the boy who knew
she was waiting for him for the past three years..who knew she could die for getting married to him was actually ASKING HER?..PROPOSING HER?..

she was felt so special..so honoured..no matter if anyone asks her choice in wedding shopping or not..her would be husbnd was asking
he the most important thing in this world...she was lost of words..

M..will u ?..

Her eyes got dry..all the tears had finished..she nodded..

N..yes..

her lips broke into a smile and mayank kissed her hands..took out a ring from his pocket, took off the ring she was wearing in
her ring finger and slipped his ring..

Nupru wasnt able to react..mayank moved forward and hugged her..and on the hug her tears agian started flowing...

M..thank u..

After a while he gently seperated her..

M..acha ab main chalta hon..

N..itni jaldi..

M..try to understand doll..

he kissed her forehead and he went away .

nupur ran to the widnow and saw him leaving..but this time he left to take her away forever..she kissed her ring..

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#427

great !!!!!!!!!!

amazing part ..........

it was so romantic ..............

emotion depiction was fantastic ............

great mehak kahne ki zaroorat nahi but u did it again ...............👏

Edited by ginny09 - 14 years ago

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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#428

mehak yr u always take my breathe away yr

to tell u honestly 2mrow is my final exam n i ws literally waiting for ur ff n mjse issi ff ka wait krne ki wajah se parha b nhi ja rha tha n now dat u hav updated i think ab to mai bus isi k bare mai sochti rahun ge nw hw m i gonna study??????????

plzzz ab dua krna dat i pass my exams wid a gud GP plzzz....

btw loved it asusual wow i jus love each n every characher u portray thru MAYANK hes da best guy ive ever known....

Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago