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@maloo19

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

wow this part was really awesum......😍..👍🏼...

love the way u have written that how mn reactions are are always so similar

but the best part was that even nature want them to be together n love them like we do 😍

hmm aur love the convo of mayu shirt n watch 😍

that was so ur style😆

loved it

n plz i have a request as we know mjht is ending 😭

that mean no mayur😭

so plz plz dont stop writting ff on them plz plz

because now only ff are the sourse so we can cherish our beloved mayur

marium🤗

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#112

thank u so much guys...🤗

PART 5:

S..hi..

G..oh HII..

S...so how are u?.

G..fine..ap kaise ho?..

S...good.. how is college going..

G..nice..ap dobara miley hi nahi..

S..hmmm...tum bhi tu nazr nahi ayi..

G...haan bus hamre department thore door hai na...

S..bhabhi kaisi hain?..tumhre sath nahi hain?

G..thek hai..wo main us se larr k ayi hon..jiju kaise hain?

S..thek hai wo bhi..per larr k ku ayi ho..

G..bht tang kiya hua hai us ne mujhe..

S..waise mayank ne bhi mera koi haal nai chora hai...pagalo wali harketen karta hai..

G..jiju bhi..ab unhon ne kia kiya?..

S..yaar main ne kaha k bhabhi se mil lo...kisi ko kaun sa pata chalne wala hai?.per nahi..sunta hi nahi..

G..nupur bhi yehi kehti hia..pat nahi dono itni imandar kahan se ikhatey ho gaye hain..

S..exactly..agr dono main se koi ik thora naughty hota na tu dosre ko mana leta milne k liye..lekin yahan tu dono hi...

G..bikul..itney ik jaise hain k bus..aur dimagh hamara kharab kiya hua hai..

S...subha bhi keh raha tha k shiyed wo chuti pe hai...nazar nahi ayi mujhe..

G..really?..nupur bhi yehi keh rahi thi..shaiyed wo chuti pe hain...haad hai wasie..

S & G...BY GOD!!...

they both looked at each other..and started laughing...

S..waise hum bhi bht sath sath boltey hain..

G..*laughing*..acha main ab chalti hon, nahi tu nupur porey clg main meri gumshudgi ki announcment karwa de gi..

S..dont tell me!..mayank bhi asiey hi karta hai...pora clg sar pe utha leta hai..

G..wow..phir asia kartey hain k dono ko hamien dhondhney detey hain..shiayed ik dosre se takra jayen..

S..hey nice..aur hum pe koi blame bhi nahi kar saken gey..

G..haan...thek hai..

S..tum free ho..

G..haan main tu 2 baje tak free hon..

S...great main bhi..chalo phir bahir chaltey hain mujhe zara samne central libray e kush notes lene hain.....clg main tu hamiedn dhoondh len gey wo dono..

G..Umm..bahir..

S..dont worry...ik baje k baad clg ke gates khol jate hian...hum cahley jate hain.then we will return at 2..2 baje meri class hai..

G..umm..thek hai...mujhe bhi central libray main kaam hai..i just hope wo dono mil jayen..

S..fingers crossed..lets go..

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N..kahan cahli gayi hai..phn bhi off hai...

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M..kamal hai..achank hi gayb ho jata hai..

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N..mil tu jaye zara.

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M..sahi maza chakon ga...

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Mayank and nupur were coming from oppoiste directions, rambling about samrat and gunjan.They were walking towards each other , but they were unaware that their partner was coming from front...they both were constsntly trying to call gunjan and samrat..

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"wow!...they are coming close."😍.😍.said the bird to the tree trunk...

yes they are..wow!.🤪🤪.replied the tree trunk excitedly..

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They were coming close and close...unaware of each other's presence..

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tree trunk & bird..".5, 4, 3 ,2 ,1 ..HERE WE GO!..."
🥳🥳🥳

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M & N..OUCH!!....

they both had collided into each other...nupur's mobile fell and mayank's papers flew..they dint look at each other...

M & N..cant you...

STILL....they looked at each other..

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bird and tree trunk..."finalyy...YAY!!!!!"

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They both didnt expect to collide into each other like this...seeing each other after so long...
a strange feeling of relief was felt by both of them...but then they both got nervous...

mayank bent down to pick her mobile and she collected his papers...he handed her phn and she
handed him his papers..

M & N..SORRY...

they both spoke together...

Nupur lowered her eyes and a gentle smile spread on her face and same was with mayank, he lowered his eyes and also smiled..

M & N..ITS ok..

this time nupur broke into little giggle...and mayank saw her laughing..her eyes became narrow and
and had a twinkle in her eyes...and she lifted her head and mayank was staring at her..she got nervous again and mayank turned his face sideways..

N..gunjan ko dekha hai. M..samrat ko dekha hai?..

Again together...This time mayank broke into a giggle..and nupur noticed him...he had slight dimples
and his face became lightened...and mayank noticed that nupur was straing at him..nupur looked side ways..

M..gunjan bhi nahi mil rahi..?

N..haan..wo main kab se dhoond rahi hon..pata nahi kahan chali gayi hai..

M..smarta bhi mil nahi raha...

N..main ne tu pora clg dhoond liya hai..

M..main ne bhi..almost every place...

N..same here.libary, cafe, computer lab, grounds..her jaga..

M..gunajn bhair bhi tu ja sakti hia..1 baj gaya hai...

N..wo merey bagier kahan jayen gi?..

M..hmmm..samrat bhi mujhe bataye bagier tu nahi jaye ga...

They both gain looked at each other and suddenly realised that they were talking too much...

N..phn bhi ff hai us ka..

M..samrat ka bhi...

N..i hope wo thek hai..

There was a gentle expression of worry on her face..an mayank relaised how sensitive she was although he himself was worried that samrat was ok..

M..its ok..she will be fine...us k ghr pe pocho..?..

N..main ne bhi pocha hai..ghr pe nahi hai...aur aunti bhi pereshan ho gayi thin..tu main ne kaha k mil gayi hai muhje...

M..main ne bhi yehi kiya hai...same acting...

N...lekin gaye kahan dono?..i am really worried...

Nupur had started pressing her fingrs very hard with each other.and her eyes started brimming with tears..

M..tum ro ku rahi ho..

N..ummm nahi main..

M..come sit...

He gently placed his hand on her shoulder and made her sit on the bench..

N.. pehla kabhi nahi kiya us ne..ik sms tu kar sakti thi...

M...i understand...samrat ne bhi nahi kiya kabhi..per hum mill k dhoond len gey unhain...

She looked at him..he had gentle reassuring smile on his face..although nupur could see the worry in his eys..

N..agr nahi mili tu..usey kuch ho gaya tu.

M..nahi plz..think positive..hum...

N..haan per..

suddenly nupur's words stopped...she looked striaght and was stunned...mayank also looked in the direction where he was looking and he was agian speechless..

SAMRAT AND GUNJAN WERE COMING TOGETHER..THEY BOTH WERE HOLDING HANDS AND TALKING TO EACH OTHER...AND LAUGHING
AND GIGGLING..

mayank and nupur couldnt believe what they were seeing...

M & N..WHAT ON EARTH IS THIS?..

Edited by -Mehak - 15 years ago

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#113

Hey Di, as usual fabulous update - I think I need to increase my vocabulary; everytime I can't go with these same set of words ...

Coming to the update - Samrat and Gunjan were complaining about Mayank and Nupur being so similar but they themselves are SO similar ... and wow they said BY GOD!!

Mayank and Nupur are so close to their friends and are really sensitive - I loved this aspect so much ...

Hmm - this time it's tree trunk and bird : where do you get these hatke ideas from?

And the way they were stealing glances and staring at each other - it was so heavenly ... I simply adored their conversation and the way Mayank made her sit when her tears started flowing - they are already getting connected ...

And Samrat and Gunajn hand-in-hand OH!! They are surely in a BIG TROUBLE, God save them!!!

Spectacular update 👏

Edited by -jaee- - 15 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#114

Congrats jaee
me 2nd to comment

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"finalyy...YAY!!!!!"

yeeeeeeeeeeee so finally mayur ki talked to each other.
hmmmmm they both think in the same way- akhir in dono ki coice jo itna milti hai
again i loved ur style- bird-tree convo
good update mehak
now ur update make me happy becoz mjht is gonna to end which is one part of my life.sighhhhh
mehak i want a totally mayurish an only mayurish update.
plz dear try to update asap
take care

Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#115

I was waiting for ur pm impatiently!!
Awesome part!!!!!👏
SAJAN part was also nice...I love ur imagination...bird talking to tree!!
Want to read next part as soon as possible....Plzz cont soon..😊

Edited by jes_jade - 15 years ago

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#116

Aww so the love birds finally met huh??😊😊

Great...now waiting to read what happens next....sajan will get happier when they see mayur sitting together...😊😊

Now i am eager to see how mayur meet next😊

Great part😊

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#117

amazing part

just loved it

love ur imagining of the tree n all

its so new and fresh

😊

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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#118

wow awesum ab samrat n gunjan ki class hoge yayyyyy 😆
loved it
thnx alot n luv u

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#119

OMG! Mehak that was awesomeee :D:D LOL. They finally met..and he consoling her..and wow SG together..how cuteee..n den MN at the end..lol..awesome!! Continue soon! :D:D

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#120

yupii finally mayur talked
sajan part was also sweet
loved tree and bird convo
mayu made nupur sit and they talked so sweet part
cant wait more when next day will come

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