ANJAANA RISHTA.. Maneet FF.. Thread 1 - Page 59

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Posted: 14 years ago
I dont like it Maannnn,,,,i just loved it...thank God that was in dream...me faint*.... u r going awesome,Mann..... 1of yr best "jhata".... I'm lovin' it... cant wait for the next...plz jaida intezer maat karaoo.. love u!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aweeeeesooom plzz pm me na plzz !!!! i love dis :L
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeeeeeee ur ff.
Continue soonnnn.
Can u plzzzz add me in ur pm list?




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love_lavnya

Hey AAmana,

When u update dear ???????????????????/

plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss udpate soon

i m waitng 😳 waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳waitng 😳

pls update yaar
love u


manpreet m also waiting
pls update yaar
Edited by iluvmaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy awsome updates!!.. :)
just wondering wht will happen as taani's dairy have all the moments and feeling of her.. lol..
and hate to know that the kissing scene was a dream..
can you plz add me in your pm list.. :)
thank you
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting 4 ur update😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
hav any idea of updating😲😲😭😭😭😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
started writing it....will try to update within 3 hrs...Fingers crossed😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting for the next update.. plz pm when updated...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey manpreet............this ff is just awesome.....and i regret that i started reading this so late........but pls do pm me next time......i just loved it
pls dont forget to pm me

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Posted: 14 years ago
Mobile update, so plz ignore the mistakes n won't b able to color the dialogues this time *SORRY* so plz bear with me... n this part is very small, actually i wrote the long update but stupid, idiot, bloody net disconnected n whatever i wrote it went away.. :((... will update the rest part tom for sure... i have everything in my mind but right now m soooo fed up :( with this thing.... n my finger is paining

Recap :-

Geet: i need some rest... u guys enjoy....
Taani: mai chalu tere saath
Geet: nahi nahi....
Taani: r u sure?
Geet: yup & leaves

Part 19 :-

geet goes into the room n falls on bed...

Next morning

she woke up around 8 with a heavy head, finds taani in deep sleep... she gets up n freshens up quickly...
around 8:30, geet wakes taani up...
Geet: taani jaldi uth..office nahi jaana kya??
Taani in sleep: ummmmm
Geet: uth na...
Taani yawning: tu itni jaldi kaise uth gayi??
Geet: pata nahi.. acha listen mai NT ke ghar ja rahi hun, uski dress wapis karni hai.. tu uth ja.. maine tere aur anu ke liye breakfast order kar diya hai.. kha lena.. tell him that i'll be here in the evening..
Taani: tab tak wo akele rahega??
Geet: nahi, uske kaafi friends hai... dont worry
Taani:hmm.. bye
Geet: bye & left

9:30am...geet reached Khurana's Mansion & enters
maan looked her... geet ingores him
everyone was sitting on dining n having breakfast
Naintara gets up & hugs her: arey geet aap yahan itni subah subah??
Geet: yeh tumhari dress deni thi.. gave it to her
Naintara: geeeeeeet aap yeh hume baad mein de sakti thi...
Geet: meri raat ki flight hai
maan looked at her curiously
Daadi: good morning beta
Geet hugs her: good morning daadi maa
Dev: hey my sweet n sexy SIL (sis-in-law)..
maan glare a shot to dev, he din't notice but geet did...
Geet smiles: hi BIL
geet looked at maan every now n then but tried her best to avoid eye contact
Daadi tells her to have breakfast.. she joined them..
suddenly the doorbell rings.. nakul opens the door n a girl came inside running n hugs maan tightly, maan smiles n hugs her back... geet looked at both of them, she obviously dint like that girl...
Maan: hey chuhiya..
everyone giggles, geet rolls her eyes
Girl: MK.. don't call me chuhiya
Maan: kyun chuhiya ko chuhiya nahi toh haathi bolu kya??
Girl playfully hits on his arm: SASHA naam hai mera..
Maan: but u look like chuhiya to me... see again u hav lost a lot of weight... now i think i should call u chinti(ant)
Sasha: MK shut up.. n u know i hate that word
Maan: so what.. Chuhiya chuhiya chuhiya
Daadi: tum dono baad mein lad lena
sasha makes a face
geet smirks... maan saw her smirking...
Maan deliberately: Sasha darling, ok m sorry..
hearing darling word, geets eyes poped out.. sasha dint notice her yet
maan smiles inwardly.. maan himself dint knew that why he did so
but he wanted geet to feel jealous...
Maan: anyways baby whr have u been..?? no call or nothing
daadi shocked hearing first darling n now baby word from maan's mouth... geet twists her lips... NT n dev looked at him in shock... sasha checked her forehead...
Sasha: MK fever toh nahi hai, fir kyun aisi baatein kar rahe ho..
Maan: kaisi honey..?
sasha was taken aback, she was dead sure, something was fishy in his mind otherwise maan would never said such lovely words to her, actually not to any girl...
Sasha: whats going on in ur head??
Maan: means??
Sasha: darling..baby..honey??? kya chakkar hai???
Maan: kyun mai nahi bol sakta..??
maan held her from her waist n took her to his room
dev sat there dumbstuck.. Nt was about to faint.. daadi was in shock.. geet was fuming in anger
maan n sasha enters his room.. maan frees her instantly.. sasha noticed his weird behaviour
Sasha: MK r u ok?? whats wrong with u??
maan kept quiet, din't know whether he shud tell her or not
Sasha shook him: MK
Maan: chuhiya.. can i tell u something.. will u help me..??
Sasha: ofcourse
maan narrates her every single thing, from the day geet n maan met till today.. n tells his feelings to her.. sasha got that maan is falling for her but he is confused n moreover he's scared to fall in love again
she tells him that she'll help him for sure


Dining table
NT: yeh veerji ko achanak se kya ho gaya??
Dev: pata nahi..
Daadi: i hope everything is fine with him
Geet: yeh ladki kon thi??
NT: veerji ki friend hai..
Geet: friend ya ..........??
Daadi somehow understood maans intentions n smiles inward: beta hume toh friend hi pata hai, ab aage toh maan hi jaane..
NT: nahi geet, they are very gud friends.. they share a very friendly bond.. sasha veerji ka mumbai wala business sambhalti hai aur veerji ne kabhi sasha ko chuhiya ke alawa kuch nahi bulaya par aaj pata nahi unhe kya hua!!
Dev: i'm in a shock state.. i need some fresh air
geet sat there fuming.. she din't like that stupid sasha hugging HER MSK...
maan n sasha came downstairs
sasha hugs daadi
Sasha: daadi kaise ho???
Daadi: hum theek hai.. aap bataiye..?
Sasha: mai bhi...
she meets NT .. NT introduces her to geet, sasha saw her n was taken a back. said "hi" to geet with a weak smile, geet was fuming, she just nodes her head .. sasha finds her gesture weird
Sasha: ohh mai apna handbag toh MK ke room mein bhool gayi.. excuse me i'll get that
Maan: wait i'll get it
this adds up to geets anger
maan enters in his room.. picks her bag n adruptly it falls on floor... n a diary falls out from her bag... maan picks it up, he was about to put it in her bag when he get a glimpse of a photos, he curiously took it out to see.. n stood rooted...
it was geet, anu n taani's photo... geet was hugging anu tightly... he deliberately opens the diary to read... he opens the random page.. there it was written "GEET LOVES ANU A LOT" his temper was getting high n touching sky....
he speaks to himself "i was right..yeh geet ka BF hai..par taani inke saath???"
he shouts: SASHA
sasha heard his voice n runs to his room n enters
Maan: yeh diary...??
Sasha: MK
Maan: yeh diary tumhare paas kaise aayi
Sasha: woh
Maan: tum geet ko kaise jaanti ho?
Sasha: mai geet ko nahi jaanti hun.. i dont know if u remember or not, jab hum mere friend ke ghar gaye the, when u were in mumbai aur jab hum wapis jaa rahe the suddenly mere upar ek diary gir gayi thi parking lot mein... yeh woh diary hai.... maine kaha tha tumse ke hum wait karte hai jiski hogi woh le jayega but u were in hurry so i kept it in my bag coz i found its cover very interesting.. u know this diary has something special in it, story is different, kitni romantic hai...
maan gave a stirn look
Sasha made a baby face: sorry... n sorry bcoz ur GEET loves someone else...
maan din't believe to what he saw n what he heard
he loves her n he needs her

Precap: maan geet's lil cute nok jhok

Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago

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