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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

nice FF

read all the parts loved the flow of the story

really good

plz add me to ur PM list

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Posted: 14 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: dhrashtee
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absolutely loved the update.... so many people confused😆... m glad the readers were not😆.... plz cont soon... waiting eagerly to find out results of the game😉.... should have played truth or dare😆...... may be then the other people would know why maan always listens to geet.....lol.... cont soon😃

lolz......don't worry....even paasing the parcel is more like truth n dare......u never know......KYA HOGA AAGE😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mamon.moon
nice update, but still one confusion has not cleared to the family abt how maan obeying geet, bt I guess thts the fun part. cant wait to see the game, wht will maan do in the game? continue soon..........

lolzzzzzzzzzz........it will clear out soon..........😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: mrk_1
wow !!!! loved it .... awsome update yaar...i dreaming if the cusion is with maan wen the music stops and the other thinking of pulling his legs and asks him to propose to some one in the gang,,and he chooses geet !!!! 😍...everyone shocked and jst stand mesmerized........ i know am thinking tooooooooooo much.............wonder of it happenss........

u never know babez.......coz i liked ur idea..........😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Nice update
Both were thking they are imagineing😆😆

The whole confusion baap re

Maan was listening to Geet awesum

Loving it

Loved NT n Maan's relation

Waiting for the game eagerly

Update soon n longer part

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

next is coming up after 15mins,.......and a lil longer 1, so get ready😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: rituka7
r u gonna update now

yup.....within 10mins.......😛

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Posted: 14 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56
No body wants to know how they know each other.... Sad...... Right now m thinking abt everybodies reaction specially sameera.. Nd geet reaction over maan nd sameera..... Sister bani sautan....lolzz.... (me nd my filmy brain) god

hahahah rofl......Sister bani sautan🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: maansee
so finally update.................... thanks. .....................
but no break now onwards.................... we want regular updates plz ........................love the story line. ..................

babez i'm still busy with my exams......n i'll be held up with them till 13th dec......after that i'll be able to update regular......

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Posted: 14 years ago

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thanks a tonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn for ur lovely comments........luv u all............muaaahhhhhhh

n thanks a tonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn to all of u my lavey dovies who hit the click button......muuuaaaaahhhhhhhhhh

a big hug to all of u..............🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Recap :-

they all made their way to hall n sits in a circle on floor n were seated comfortably, close enough to each other, so that they can pass the cushion quickly (circle starts with maan-geet-dev-naintara-arjun-arohi-armaan-ridhimma)... nakul sets everything for game, he was the music-keeper, he'll gonna turn it on n off..

daadi sits on sofa, she'll keep an eye on each one of them, so that no one will cheat....

Part 14 :-

geet was really comfortable with all of them..... she enjoyed their company to the core...... she was seated comfortably next to maan, but she felt something different today, some other kind of feeling was there in her heart, which she never felt.... she controls herslf n tries to concentrate on others n game....
on the other hand, maan was loosing himself... he was continiously staring at geet by every passing second....
Maan thinks to himself "enough..! maan u can't let her effect u like this, stop staring at her...."
he faught with his feeling... but he can't help himself, so he decided to leave......
everyone was busy in chit-chatting with each other....
maan was about to stand up, suddenly geet holds his hand...
Geet: where are you going??
maan looked mesmerised by her one touch, he din't reply but sits back... no one noticed them but daadi did.....
daddi adored them... she was happy that maan is changing....

music starts....

Hansta hua nooraani chehra

maan passes cushion to geet......

Kaali zulfein rang sunehra

geet passes to dev.......

Teri jawaani tauba tauba re

dev passes to naintara n naintara throws on arjun

Dilrooba dilrooba

arjun to arohi

dilrooba dilrooba

arohi quickly throws on armaan

music stops........

Armaan: oh noooooo..!!
everyone hoots... all were damn excited....
Dev: Ahh.. sabse pehla shikaar armaan.... hahahahaaaaa😆
ridhimma giggles
Arjun: ridzy jo karwaana hai karwaale... yeh mauka dobara nahi milega....
Armaan: abey chup kar...
Arjun: hey ridzy ask him to wear his UGs over his clothes and complete a quick jog in the whole house, n even outside the mansion.....that will be a fun.....😆n winks
Daadi: arjunnnnnnnnn......
Arjun: sorry daadi...
Dev: dance karwaale ridzy....
ridzy nodes for a no......
Naintara: ridzy kiss
Ridhimma blushed: shut up guys.... aap sab log mujhe hi kyun bol rahe ho... aap log bhi kuch bhi karne ke liye bol sakte ho.....
Geet: armaan sing any song for ridzy....
ridhimma smiles.... everyone shouts.....yeah right geet.....
Maan thinks to himself "yeh pagal ho gayi hai kya, mujhe bhi aisa hi kuch karne ke liye bol diya toh....maan tu toh gaya.....nahi nahi Maan Singh Khurana koi bhi kaam kisi ke kehne pe nahi karta.....aur waise bhi MSK kabhi haarta nahi hai....
armaan thinks for a while....
Armaan: asmaniiiiiiiii rang hooo.........pyaaar ki boond hoo......roshni hoo dhup hooo chahaton ki gunj ho aanchal mein hain phanak chandni haathon mein woh chand hain gairon se bhi hain waastan apno mein pehchaan hain ........
taratarira3 tu zindagiii mera izhaar hain pyaar hi pyaar hain yaaron ki yaar hain tu zindagiii
tuhse main kya kahun tu hi mera sukun sang tere rahun tu zindagiiii....!!!
ridhimma turns red....she was blushing
everyone claps for him....armaan goes n sits with daadi.....

music starts..................
Hansta hua nooraani chehra

ridhimma passes cushion to maan....

Kaali zulfein rang sunehra

maan gives it to geet

Teri jawaani tauba tauba re

geet to dev

Dilrooba dilrooba, dilrooba dilrooba

dev to naintara

Pehle teri aankhon ne loot liya door se

naintara threw on arjun.............music stops........

Armaan burst out in laugh: bohot khush ho raha tha tu mere upar....le beta ab tu fas gaya....
Dev: ise toh kuch mast sa dena padega.....
Naintara: arohi tum bolo....
Arohi nodes for a no....
everyone hoots....biwi ho toh aisi...

{guys arohi is not shy types, she is just quiet as today is her first day in KM....well u all must be thinking, GEET KA BHI TOH PEHLA DIN HAI, so how come she is very open....lolzz u all know her, Geet is Geet Handa.....she can do anything}

Naintara: toh mere devar ji ko mai hi bolti hun kuch karne ke liye.....
she thinks for a while....
Naintara: Dance crazy with no music.......
Dev: wah biwi ho toh aisi....
arjun did exactly what he asked for.....he dance crazy without any music....everyone rolls on floor by laughing......Arjun goes n joins armaan n daadi

music starts......

Hansta hua nooraani chehra

arohi throws cushion on ridhimma

Kaali zulfein rang sunehra

ridhimma passes to maan

Teri jawaani tauba tauba re

maan gives to geet

Dilrooba dilrooba, dilrooba dilrooba

geet holds it for a sec n hugs that cushion....then quickly throws on dev

Pehle teri aankhon ne loot liya door se, pehle teri

dev passes to naintara....naintara to arohi

Pehle teri aankhon ne loot liya door se

arohi passes to ridhimma

music stops......

armaan whistles.......

Geet: wait wait wait...mai bolungi ab kuch......

Naintara: hmmmm
Geet: ridhimma, go outside and tell the first person you see that you hate them...
Maan speaks to himself "yeh pagal hai kya....?? kahan kahan se ideas dhoondti hai....hey bhagwaan plz mujhe isse bacha lena....." lolllzzzz for the first time he prayed something to god in his entire life.....
Naintara laughs: good one geet...
ridhimma went outside n tell the guard that she hates him....rofl
everyone laughs out loud...
ridhimma comes inside n sits on daadi left side...hugs her....

music starts...
Hansta hua nooraani chehra
Kaali zulfein rang sunehra

maan was looking lost in geet....everyone looks at him in surprise....he was damn lost...geet waves her hand in front of his face, suddenly maan throws the cushion on geet....

Teri jawaani tauba tauba re

geet quickly throw on dev n dev on naintara.....

Dilrooba dilrooba

naintara passes to arohi

music stops....

everyone shouts.....yeah arohi.....
Arohi: kya karna hoga mujhe.....
Armaan: yaar kitni shareef biwi hai teri...
Arjun: 2 din iske saath rehkar dekh, sab pata chal jayega kitni shareef hai...
arohi gave him a glare
Arjun to armaan: dekh...kaise dekh rahi hai
Naintara: arohi read out loud the last message arjun received...
arjun refused to give his cellphone, but arohi snatches it....
arohi reads it in mind n laughs....
Geet: hume sunana hai, khud nahi padna....
Arohi reads it out loud:
MUJHE APKI WO ADA
BAHUT PASAND HAI
JAB SARDI MEIN AAP
1 MUG
PAANI
KA

BATHROOM

MEIN
LEKAR
MIRROR
KE
SAAMNE
KHADE
HOTE
HO
AUR
FIR
MIRROR
PAR
PAANI
DAAL
KAR
JOR SE
CHILLATE HO
NAHA

liya........
geet fell on floor laughing....everyone laughs out loud....
Dev: tujhe yeh message kisne bheja?
Armaan: aur tune apne phone mein rakha bhi hua hai...GREAT...
Arjun: shut up guys

music starts....only 4 ppl left....maan, geet, dev n naintara

Hansta hua nooraani chehra

maan throws on geets face n smirks...

Kaali zulfein rang sunehra

geet fumed with anger n throws on dev

music stops.....

Dev throws on naintara: yeh naintara ke upar girna tha....
naintara rolls her eyes
Armaan: cheating....cheating
Dev: koi cheating nahi hai
Daadi: dev......
Dev to nakul: naintara tak cushion pahuchne ka wait nahi kar sakta tha.. mere upar music stop karna zaruri tha....
naintara giggles
Dev: haan bolo kya karna hoga....
Armaan: isne bhi bohot maze liye the na humse....
Arjun: haan....ek kaam karte hai Wrap him up in toilet paper and take a picture.....
Armaan laughs....
Daadi: arjun.....kaise kaise ideas aate hai aapke dimaag mein....
Maan:daadi yeh geet bhi toh kam nahi hai.... & shuts his mouth
daadi smiles inwardly
dev, arjun, armaan, ridhimma, arohi n naintara got shocked....maan finally spoke up something but what was that...
Geet: maine kya bola.... aur waise bhi mere ideas sabko pasand aaye, ek aap hi ho jo ajeeb ho...huh
Maan: GEET...
Geet: kya geet....
Armaan to arjun: yaar yeh maan ke liye ek dum sahi hai....pehli ladki dekhi hai jo maan ke saamne bol sakti hai, nahi actually pehla insaan.....
maan gave him a glare

Armaan: acha socho kya karwana hai dev se
Arjun: oye yaad aa gaya........dev bro, if you were a girl which guy in the room you would date....n yeah do propose him right now.....
Dev: u ass... no ways....anyways u all are my brothers n even if i were a girl tab bhi hote toh tum sab mere bhai.. so i don't have this option, propose karne wala....
Naintara: dev plz....maan lo hum sab friends hote toh...
Armaan: dev biwi ki permission bhi mil gayi..... & winks
Dev naughtily: tab toh obviously Maan bro....
maan looked at him in surprise
Dev: now i'm not gonna propose him...
Arjun: bro aap back out kar rahe ho...
Dev: shut up
Arjun: don't be a spoilsport bro....
Dev: no ways....tum log kuch aur bolo, yeh bakwas nahi....

Arjun: yaar aap apni saali ke shaan mein hi kuch bol do fir.....

Geet excitedly: haan JIJA JI.....n laughed

Dev: hmmmmm ok......

he thinks for a sec....

Dev:ROOP RANG MEIN GORI HO, CHAHE KAALI HO....KHUSH NASEEB WOH JIJA HAI JISKI SAALI HO....

geet lifts her invisible collars up...

Geet: aage

Dev: JISKI SAALI HAI WOH DED GUNA (1 n 1/2) SUKH PAAYE.....NAIN RAKHE SAALI PAR, BIWI SANG BATIYAAYE......

Arjun: bhabhi dekh rahe ho aap bro ko.....

Geet show her tounge to naintara.....

Dev: KEHET KAVI DEV, AMRIT SUKH RAS KI PYAALI....SAALI HOTI HAI PYAARE AADHI GHARWAALI......

everyone gave a round of applause to dev

but maan gave a stirn look to him....

Armaan: wah wah....wah wah......!!

Arjun: kya baat hai bro....dil khush kar diya.....

Arjun to arohi: arohi tumhari koi behen nahi hai na...??

arohi rolls her eyes

music starts......maan...geet n naintara are left
Hansta hua nooraani chehra

maan to geet

Kaali zulfein rang sunehra

geet to naintara

Teri jawaani tauba tauba re

naintara to maan

Dilrooba dilrooba, dilrooba dilrooba

maan to geet

Pehle teri aankhon ne loot liya door se, pehle teri

geet to naintara

Pehle teri aankhon ne loot liya door se (everyone looks at them curiously)

naintara to maan

O deewaane, o deewaane

maan to geet

Tu kya jaane, haan tu kya jaane

geet to naintara

music stops................
Naintara: ohhhhhhhhhhhhh

Dev: arohi tumne abhi tak kuch nahi bola...ab tum do kuch naintara ko....
Arohi: Say the alphabet back wards....

Ridhimma coughs: ahem......difficult hai yaar.....

Armaan: haan yaar sunne mein toh bacho wala lag raha hai, but seriously tough hai....

Arjun proudly: biwi kiski hai.....

naintara tries it many times but fails

she quit.....

music starts........now only MAAN n GEET

Hansta hua nooraani chehra

maan throws on geet....geet on maan (now they are throwing it fast, coz music will gonna stop any moment)

Kaali zulfein rang sunehra

maan smirks n throws on geets face....geet snapped back n throws on his face

Teri jawaani tauba tauba re