It Was Always Love... [Sajan FF]

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Sadaf Rizwan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

hey awesome concept

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#62

Omg manjari

another one ur just amazing

and radhika dear love ur idea

sounds really good

so manjari continue soon

cant wait

dont forget to ad me to ur pm list

luv tanzeel

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wowow tht was awesome CS

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#64

Awesome concept
looks really interesting
can't wait for ur update
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

hiiii radhi dii awesomeeeeeeeee concept sis i loveeee it loveee da CS n aww how sweet manjari u r writing for her despite of ur 3 ff's aww hats off to u manjari jaan do continue soon n add me in ur pm list btw m der already in radhi di list n urs heheheh bt jst informing hehehe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

hey ...

nice concept...

i'm in too...😊

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii
Omg manjari
another one ur just amazing

and radhika dear love ur idea

sounds really good

so manjari continue soon

cant wait

dont forget to ad me to ur pm list

luv tanzeel

thx a lot yarrrr

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
Awesome concept
looks really interesting
can't wait for ur update
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

thx a lot...

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi
hey ...
nice concept...
i'm in too...😊

divya

thx a lot....

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hi frndz its me Radhika (Radhi) i know is ff ka character sketch manjari my besty ne likha tha but first part me likhugi i hope u dont mind....
i know me Manjari jitni acchi writer nahi hu or nahi mene pehle kabhi ff likha haiii its my first try i hope u all like it...
Manjari ek sath 4 ffs likh sakti hai or usne hi meri ye ff start karne me help ki thi thx a ton to manjari...

Part 1

Its a very beautiful morning.sun rays fall on a big mansion.
yes it is Bhushan Mansion.We can see a beautiful girl playing with 2 kids in d garden. A beautiful smile is playing on her face. A lady is calling her
Gunjannnnnnnnnn..................
(she turned yes she is our gunjan gunjan bhushan)
G:aayi mom chalo Rahul chalo Rashi mom bula rahi haii
(Rahul n Rashi are her cousins her chacha chachi's children)
Rahul:gunjan di plz thodi der or khelte haii na
Gunjan:nahi rahul mom bula rahi hai agar choti maa ko pata chal gaya to bahut daat padegi chalo.
Rahul:ok di
when gunhan Rashi n Rahul are goign
Rashi:wese di aaj to sam Bhaiya aane wale hai na???
as soon as she heard SAM she stoped
Rashi: bola na di aaj to samrat bhaiya aane wale haiii na??
Gunjan: ha aaj tumhare samrat bhaiya aane wale haiii???
Rahul:aur jab wo aayege to me uske sath bahut saari masti karuga aur...
Rashi:nahi rahul hum sab khelenge sam bhaiya ke sath
Rahul:ye girls bhi na.
Gunjan :Rahul..
Rahul:sry di.
they entered the home n gunjan saw that her mom was in the kitchen she went to the kitchen
Gunjan:gud morning mom
GM:gud morning beta kaha thi tu tuje pata hai na aaj samrat aane wala hai aur kitna saara kaam pada haii abhi us ki favousite deshes \banani hai uska room thik karna haii uska favourite khana sab banana hai aate hi bole ga mom mom mom muje bahut bhukh lagi haii waha na sab milta tha but apke hath ka khana nahi milta tha jaldi se khana de do.
G:ha ha wo to hai hi bhukkhad
Gm:gunjan
G:sry mom
GM:accha tuje pata hai na tuje kya karna haii???
G:yes mom sabse pehle us bandar ka room saaf karna hai fir uske liye uski favourite dish Gaajar ka Halwa banana hai kyunki us sahab jyade ko sirf mere hath ka hi gaajar ka halwa pasand haii.
GM:thik hai tu jaldi se ja uska room saaf karde warna wo firse tujse ladega aur fir jalde se gaajar ka halwa banade
muje abhi uske liye Rajma chawal banana haii
G:ok mom
she went frm there n she enterd in a room when she opend the door we can see a januable pic on the wall..
she entered n smiles on seeing the pic..
then she took a photo which is kept on side table n caresses the pic. n said
G:jante ho samrat jabse tum gaye ho sabko lagta hai ki ye room bandh haii is liye messy hoga but ye messy nahi haii kyunki jab bhi muje tumhari yaad aati thi me tumhare room me aati thi jab bhi raat ko nind nahi aati thi yahi aake so jaati thi mene tume bahut miss kiya samrat (a tear falls frm her eye n she close her eyes n see flash backs the scenes with her n samrat)jab bhi me is kamre me aati hu saari purani yaade taza ho jati hai muje aisa lagta hai ki tum yahi kahi ho mere aas paas tum to jante ho ki meri life me bahut kam friends haiii aur best friend ko tumhare alava koi nahi haii.
muje aaj bhi hamari saari baate yaad haii hamari dosti yaad hai jo world ki best friendship hai. jitna tum muje samajte ho mere bina bola utna to koi nahi samajta aur tum hi muje chhod ke chale gaye 1 saal ho gaya samrat tume gaye hua me aaj bhi tumhara intzar kar rahi hu pz jaldi se aa jao.
then she saw all pics in which she n samrat celebrates diwali holi new year birthday n all occasions then smiles.
then she went to the kitchen n made halwa 4 him...

after 2 hours everybody gunjan gunjan's mom (janvi bhushan) gunjan's dad(ravi bhusan) her chachi(Radha bhushan) chacha (Rajesh Bhushan) ,Rashi n Rahul are waiting 4 samrat..

Rahul: mom ye samrat bhaiya ab tak kyu nahi aye??
Radha: aa jayege beta flight late hogi??
GD's cell rang n he picked it up
GD: hello
n taked to the person n then cut the call n said
GD: wo samrat...
GM:kya samrat??? boliye na kaha hai wo ab tak kyu nahii aaya???
GD: samrat aaj nahi aane wala use kuch kaam hai is liye
every1 became sad even gunjan's dad become very sad.
coz he conseder samrat as his own son.Gunjan's mom started to cry n went from there...
Rahul:me sam bhaiya se kabhi baat nahi karuga unho ne mera promise tod diya??
Rashi: me bhi baat nahi karugi unhone hame promise kiya tha ki wo diwali pe aayege but wo nahi aaye..
both went from there
Radha:pata nahi aisa kya jaruri kaam tha ki wo nahi aa paya?/ ab to me bhi use baat nahi karugi
n she also went from there
Rajesh:agar aa gaya hota to diwali kuch aur hi hoti jaise pehle hua karti thi n went from there.
there were only Gunjan's dad n gunjan . dad came to gunjan n placed his hand on her shoulder beta wo aa jayega tum to janti ho na kaam ka koi bharosa nahii kab aa jaye aur fir baad me wo hamesha yahi to rehne wala haii she noded gunjan's dad also went frm there n then she rushed to her room loked the door n stated to cry
Gunjan: aur kitna intzar karvaoge samrat tum kyu nahi aaye??kya tume meri yaad bhi nahi aati waha?? kya tum muje jara bhi miss nahi karte ho??kya tum hamari dosti bhi bhul chuke ho samrat. muje kitna kuch batana hai tume kitna kuch share karna hai tumhare saath kitna kuch sunana hai tumse kyu samrat kyu?? kyu nahi aaye tum??kyu??? kyu?? kyu???????????
n cried loudly...

on the other hand gunjan's mother also crying n gunjan's dad consoled her..then she wiped her tear n said
GM:koi baat nahi 1 saal se intzar kar rahi hu kuch din aur sahi.wese mera bete meapni studies complete karli hai aur kaam kane laga hai to ise jyada khushi ki baat kya hogi mere liye
GD:ha aaj mene apne dost se kiya hua wada pura kar diya mene apne dost ko wada kiya tha ki uske bete ko har khushi duga. padha likha kar ek successful person banauga. use apne maa baap ki kami or family ki kami kabhi mehsoos nahi hone duga.

after sometimes a servent (Ramu kaka) screamed saab chor.. chor chor... n rushed into the home every1 came to hall
GD: kaha hai chor ramu kaka??
GM: kya chor??
Radha:abhi yaha chor??
Rajesh:hamare ghar me chor??
Rahul n Rashi: ye chor kya hota haii??
Ramu kaka: yaha haii chor..
ramukaka went out n took a person n said ye raha chor jo meri emli chura raha tha...
every1 socked to see the person n then smiles n Ramukaka also smiles
Rahul n Rashi screamed sam bhaiya.........................................
yes the person is non other than our samrat..
samrat smiles on seeing every1's expression n then her eyes went to a pair of eyes in which there are many questions wahi sawal jiske jawab usko dene haiii
Gunjan's mom came 2 him n twist his ear
samrat: mom ye kya kar rahi ho??
GM:oh to tu chor haii ab to is chor ko saja jarur milegi??
Samrat:aaahhhhhhh mom plzzzz
gunjan's mom left his ear
Gm:juth bolega mom se ki nahi ayega??
GD:ha beta tune to muje phone pe kaha tha ki tuje jaruri kaam haii aur tu aaj nai aa payega
Radha:ye sab kya hai sam tu yahi tha aur tune ophone kiya tha na??
Rajesh: matlab ye sab tumhara plan tha??
samrat: yes mera plan tha. agar me aisa nahi karta to aap logo ke chehre pe ye smile kaise dekhta.
Rahul: matlab apne prank khela humsab ke sath pata hai bhaiya jbadi maa kitni royi thi..
Samrat: sry mom
GM:its ok beta
then samrat huged every14 expect gunjan when he went 2 gunjan, gunjan ran from there n loked her in her room n started to cry
S:mom ye abhi bhi nahi badli na
GM: ha nahi badti ab ja aur use mana le warna aaj tera gaajar ka halwa gaya
S:ye to me janta hi tha ki chachmish ne mere liye halwa banaya hoga ab me jaldi se us maha rani ko manata hu warna aaj khane me halwa nahi dande milenge.
he went to her room n knoced the door
S:chashmish open the door dekho m sorry but me tum sab ko surprise dena chahtta tha
but no response he called her sumtimes but all in vain
then he return to hall
Gm:door nahi kholana
S:nahi
Gm:ab to tu gaya
S: nahi mom wo meri chashmish hai aur wo mujse jyada der tak naraz nahi reh sakti me use mana hi luga.
aur me use mana ke aata hu n went from ther n come out side of the house n took a stair n put it at window of her room n climed it n jumped into her room n saw she was crying n seeing her crying his heart skip a beat. he felt gulty for which he did for leaving her alone but he had to do itthen he took few steps n said
S:chashmish
gunjan looked at samrat n ran n hugged him tighly as never wanted to go him far away from her.samrat also hugged her back after a long year they hugged each other finally two best friends are together now.
Gunjan's pov:
samrat mera best friend jo mujse bhi jyada muje janta hai aaj wo finally yaha hai mere sath mere paas ab me use kabhi kahi bhi nahi jaane dugi 1 saal se me uska intzar kar rahi hu ek saal se jaise me har khushi se dur thi har khushi se anjan thi me rehti to sab ke sath thi but jaise ek ajnabee ban gayi thi 1 saal tak sayad me khud ko kho chuki thi kyunki jo muje janta tha wo to mere paas tha hi nahi mene bachpan se jiski sath apni zindgi bitayi wo mera dost wapaa aa gaya aaj me duniya ki sabse lucky girl hu jiske paas samrat jaisa pyara dost haiii.. aur ab me use apne se dur nahi hone dugi hum hamesha hi sath rahege ab do dost kabhi alag nahi hoge...

samrat's Pov
chashmish meri best friend jo muje mujse jyada janti hai. aaj ta muje kisi bhi baat ki kami mehsoos nahi hone di hamesha har halat me mera sath diya hai usne. chahe wo college or school ka prank ho hamesha mere liye taiyar rahi hai wo.
1 saal pehle me use chhod ke chala gaya tha kyunki papa ne kaha tha ki meri studies complete UK me karni haiii aur me papa ka kehna nahi taal sakta tha.1 saal se me bhi apni best friend se dur raha hu me to waha tha par mera sab kuch yahi m\tha meri maa mere da meri family aur meri chashmish.bahut miss kiya mene tume chashmish bahut but ab me vapas aa gaya hu hamesha ke liya ab hum friends kabhi alag nahi hoge me tumhe chhodke kahi nahi jauga.

after sometimes they broke the hug n looked at each other
then samrat woiped her tears.
S:so meri chashmish ne muje bahut miss kiya right??
G noded.
S:mene bhi apni chashmish ko bahut miss kiya.
G:juth bol rahe ho tum agar miss kiya hota to aisa nahi karte jaldi se mere paas aa jate.
S abhi bhi nahi badli ok m sorry but ab to smile kardo
gunjan smiled a bit
S:ye nahi meri wali smile
gunjan smiled widely ye hui na baat
G:so kaise ho???
S:bilkul thik tumhare samne khada hu.
G:wese waha kitni ladkiyo ko pataya??
S:let me count 1,2 10,25.....
Gunjan hit him on his shoulder
G:samrat tum bhi na
S: kya samrat tum bhi na sach bol raha hu
G:accha thik haii tum apni gf ko apne paas hi rakho aur tum fir se mere room me khidki se aaye
S:yes madam aap ne darwaja jo lock kar diya tha
G:samrat tum kabhi nahi sudhroge
S:ryt ab chale niche hamara intzar kar rahe hoge aur ha tumne muje maaf kar diya na ??
G:haa baba
S: u knw me janta tha meri chashmish mujse jyada der tak naraz nahi reh sakti thi
G: ab ho gaya ab chale...
S:ok madam chaliye..............

this is the first part i know thoda long hai but muje aaj hi sajan ko milana tha isliye i wrote it first time plz frndz dont hate me 4 dis n plz do cont n hit the like button if u like it if u like then i will contiue my storuy kyunki diiwali hai to dhamake to hone hi chahiye ye first part tha aage dekho hota hai kya???i hope u like it...😲 waiting 4 ur comment.....

Love
Radhi...

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago

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