~*Fan Fic-Tu Muskura*~ *LAST PART, PART 16 PG 93* - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey THANK YOU ALL for such loving and lovely comments eveyone that has requested i've added you to my PM list...i have no classes today at the Uni so i'll be uploading part 2 when I get home from work today!!!!!! i hope you guys like it!!!!!!!!


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THANKS AGAIN EVERY ONE!!!!❤️
Edited by Maaneet-Fan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was awesome update....loved it
great one....keep writing...
do add me 2 ur pm list thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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like the update... sounds good... plz add me to ur FF's PM list... and plz cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey, nice intro and nice start. 👍🏼 I like it! 😃 Add me to ur PM list plz... And plz make it a little longer next time. Thanx!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Just read part 1.
Sounds really very interesting!
Add me to the PM List. Have sent you the buddy request...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey...
Its a nice beginning to a fantastic FF... I wanna read it more... Please Update soon and add me to its pm list...
The entire concept is new and sounds interesting... Already loving it... :) :)
Felt sorry for Geet and Ranbir... Sumhow Ranbir name makes me like the character...
But still I want Geet to move ahead as Ranbir wanted her to... :)
Update soon...
Waiting for it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 2 WILL BE UP IN 5-10 MINUTES!!!!


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Oh nice i love the idea of it...
Please continue sooon!
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Part 2


Pinky and Geet got out of the taxi and stood in front of a beautiful looking restaurant called Serenity. It was one of the best restaurants in town and everyone talked about the amazing food and time that they have there.

Pinky: Geet did you know this restaurant is actually run by Maan Singh Khurana's younger brother and his wife. She is the head chef here

Geet: hmm

She said dis-interested and walked in. It was beautifully decorated with a glass wall water fall and a fire place at every corner. The hostess walked towards them and sat them down at the best table in the house as adi had booked it for them

Geet: will adi be joining us

Geet asked as she was still looking at the restaurant that gave her a homely feeling

Pinky: ya he's just finishing up some office work and will be here, oh speak of the devil there he is

Adi ran towards them and gave Pinky and a Geet a big hug when he saw them

Adi: sorry I'm late guys had to help Maan out with some paper work, we really need to find him a secretary....you know how he gets when he doesn't get his way

Adi said making a frightened face

Dev: mimicking my bro are we now

He said laughing as he gave adi a hug

dev: lol why else do you think I never officially joined his business I know how my brother can get, he's a "Great A" Scrooge

Dev said as everyone but geet laughed

Geet: and this is the same guy you want me to work for pinky!

Geet said surprised

Dev: seriously you want to be his secretary, good luck with that

Dev said in a joking manner

NT: who is doing what now

NT said as she gave Pinky a big hug

Dev: oh nothing this innocent girl....I'm sorry I didn't catch your name

Geet: GEET

Dev: right so Geet is thinking of working as Maans bro's secretary

NT: well what's so funny about that Maan needs help and I think she would do an awesome job....I just hope you don't mind getting yelled at

She said winking at Geet

Pinky: in all seriousness Geet you really should come for the interview tomorrow you're guaranteed the job Adi is picking the person and it's a great company besides you'll only have to see him for like 8 hours a day

Geet: oh ONLY 8 hours a day with a Dusht Dhanav

Geet said sarcastically. Dev and NT looked at each other with a huge smile knowing that if there is any girl in the world that wouldn't take crap from Maan it's HER

NT: Geet forget about the interview your hired just come in and start working tomorrow

Geet: but how....don't I have to have an interview of some sorts

She asked confused

Dev: this was your interview...besides I can make some decisions about the company and I've decided you're hired

Geet: thanks...I guess

NT: no thank you

She said with a glee full smile

NT: but hey guys we should go and mingle around we'll catch you later or see you at the office tomorrow bye

With that they left them giving each other a little high five

NT: this girl is perfect for Maan, she won't take his crap and she is so sweet, and beautiful too...let's just hope he doesn't scare her off

Dev: with bro that is a good chance...but ya I like her too...bro is going to kill us if he finds out we're playing cupid

Dev said giving his wife a kiss

Back at the table Geet was still confused as to what happened

Geet: so I guess I'll be working with you guys now

Adi: good you really need to do something to get your mind off of....

Adi stopped mid sentence after realizing what he was about to say and seeing the pain in Geets eyes.

Pinky kicked adi under the table and gave him an I'm going to kill you look

Pinky: augh Geet don't worry about tomorrow it's going to go amazing

Geet: I guess but can someone tell me why everyone seems so afraid of this Maan guy

Adi: woh actually...he can be rude at times but he has a good heart just stay on his good side

Geet thought to herself what was she about to get herself into and just shook her head. But what was even weird was the she felt like NT and Dev where family. She quickly shook her head and decided that this is what is best. At least this way she wouldn't be thinking of Ranbir all day. In a way she was starting to fulfill his last wish by living again, even if that meant being some ones secretary but at least this is what Ranbir wanted she thought to herself as she fought back the tears thinking the good times they had together

NOTE: So I know this is a short one sorry....I'm not too crazy about it BUT TRUST ME the next chapter will be better!!!!

Edited by Maaneet-Fan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohh.........maaneet didnt meet in this part😭😭...........but its ok .....bc there is always next time........... like this dev-nt🤗.........they r playing cupid😆........ lets see how this will work😉........ cant wait to see maan😍

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