FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142

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maaneet93

@maaneet93

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1011

they shud go on vacation and get everything through!!! - just a suggestion, you don't have to consider it as ur story line is totally awesome!!!

can't wait for ur next update!!!!

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Nanthini

@Nanthini9

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1012

At this rate Shiv-Gauri are going to end up using most of their earnings to buy new clothing hehehe

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Tammie

@saomom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1013

I loved how she only found the relief she was looking for after he declared he would not let her go. It had nothing to do with him being in the room or not.

Brilliant piece of work my friend! Enjoyed it very much.

ps - The paragraph about the fabric and it's martyrdom had me cracking up. 😆

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diotima

@diotima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1014

I am officially hooked to this ...whoa! awesome work!

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1015

Phew!! What a relief..I knew that he'll never leave her..and am quite happy that you didn't go for a normal..cliched confrontation..

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1016

Just read the latest two updates and they're brilliant Devi,
particularly liked Shiv's final dialogue,
glad he made it clear,
that he does not want to be seperated from Gauri!
now we just have to wait for Gauri to say the same to Shiv, LOL!

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366791

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1017

Just read through this FF and Wow you are a very talented writer 😛

Look forward to reading more

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-Aicha-

@-Aicha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1018

Lol Devi, I don't think you need to send me a pm actually cuz I have this page on my phone - Oh the joy of having an iPhone :P and I stalk it every ..let's say 10 mins?! hoping that you might have updated :P hehe

Lol.

But thank you so much for this update! i loved it, and I am relieved too :D and I actually managed to get some work done..

update soon ;) - will never stop saying that would I..;)

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1019

I loved Shiv for what he said to Gauri.

I loved it..................

I m guessin...Gauri is relieved cus he is not gonna let her go....now Gauri just needs to soften up a bit......

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-Blossy-

@-Blossy-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1020

The "hours" dragged on for Gauri and Shiv but were not long enough for me!😉😆 *blush blush*And when Shiv actually recorded Gauri's 9 hr class....I think I starting loving him a bit more...

Then sending bible verses as text to each other.....who would have thought that? :)

I can just quote all of your updates to tell you what I love about your writing but that'd be spamming so I will tell you this simply. You have the most amazing talent of spinning awesome stories for girls like me!

And yeah like all of the others I loved Shiv's parting speech...

So update soon....go ahead make my day!😉😆

Edited by crazilycrazy - 14 years ago