~MilengeMilenge~ (DMG1&2, Geet) Incomplete Prt1 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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No lol I have the part typed up....can I send it to you just for a grammar check and whatnot? Or should I send to someone else? :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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haii sheena im hurt - u started a ff and didn;t tell/pm me? *hayy

dost dost na raha.......

lol it's okay😛 but yaar add me to your pm list! it sounds FAB!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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^Thanks Ashu! Sorry I forgot abt pm's! *kaan pakro-ing*😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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elllo girll! finally made it to this thread. even though im quite late 😭

but anywayss! yayy! new ff...you'd better actually continue and finish this one -___-

it sounds awesomeee...totally looking forward to AN (obviously) and RM and lmfoa can you make geet and muskaan twins 😆

cheeeers!
Naina

ps thanks for the dedicationn<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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^Thanks! *eyes widen* them as TWINS?! Naina why o why didnt I think of that!? as sure as heck they're gonna be twins now!! oh i'll have so much fun torturing maan and rahul hehehehehe *devilish grin*
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naina2127

elllo girll! finally made it to this thread. even though im quite late 😭

but anywayss! yayy! new ff...you'd better actually continue and finish this one -___-

it sounds awesomeee...totally looking forward to AN (obviously) and RM and lmfoa can you make geet and muskaan twins 😆

cheeeers!
Naina

ps thanks for the dedicationn<3


hahaha that's totally what i did too - in tum mile - it seemed like the best option since when i imagine the story in my head they look the same hahaha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

^Thanks Ashu! Sorry I forgot abt pm's! *kaan pakro-ing*😃


its okay, is baar maaf kiya! lol

can't wait for the next part :D when are u posting the next one??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu


hahaha that's totally what i did too - in tum mile - it seemed like the best option since when i imagine the story in my head they look the same hahaha



lmfaoo it's not my idea either...i mentioned muskaan in my ff way back in june and everyone was like omg it would have been great if they were twins😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sooo when is part 1 going to updated? I'm eagerly waitin :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter One-- Incomplete

"What the heck?" Abhi murmured as he felt something soft on his cheek. He opened his eyes to find a girl lying next to him. "Oh shit! What's her name?" he tried to think. The girl opened her eyes and smiled at him. "Hey baby, last night was awesome. Wanna go again?" Abhi smirked. He had to be in the office in an hour, otherwise his father would disown him. "Sorry to disappoint, but I don't make the same mistake twice." The girl gasped and got up, wore her clothes and left, not before cursing him, though.

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"Armaan, babyyy..." The girl in Armaan's arms moaned. Armaan rolled his eyes behind her back, not wanting to take her shopping. "Sarah, you know, I think you're taking this a little too far. It was just a one-night-stand, okay? You're not my girlfriend or anything!" The girl widened her eyes as realization dawned upon her that he indeed did not care about her. *SLAP* Armaan's cheeks turned red as he felt the ring of her hand. She got up, cursed him, and left.

"Damn it Armaan, pick up the damn phone!" Abhi muttered as he called Armaan for the fifth time. "Hey dude, wassup?" Armaan painfully asked. Abhi took the phone off of his ear and looked at it for a minute, then replaced it back on his ear. "Um' Armaan? You okay? You sound' in pain."

"Dude, I got slapped by Sarah." "The girl found out you were two-timing her? Wow. I woke up and found a girl next to me. All she did was curse me!" "Well duh! Wait- she didn't slap you?! Lucky! No, she didn't find out I was two timing her, she wanted to drag me shopping. I did have a valid reason." "SHOPPING? Hell, you did have a reason. Hey listen, remember dad's warning yesterday? About going to the office? Should we go?" "Heck yeh' I need the money!"

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A car pulled up to the gates of a big temple. Abhi looked at Armaan in shock. "Er' what're we doing here?" "Abhi, its called a mandir' you know, the one that you pray in?" "Yes you idiot, I know that, but why do we need to go to the mandir today?!" "Dude, we need to be on dad's good side' praying might help!"

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Edited by AbhiNikiLuver - 14 years ago

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