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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Hey Dear Loved it soooooooooooo much........
Pls Update Sooooooooooon..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
hey i luv dis FF's first season bt u hv ended it which i didnt like at all...bt now i m wating 4 d update n u hv nt updated it since long time...plz update n add me to the pm list....i luv all ur FFs n i hv readed all...n i ws vry happy whn u hv stratd dis season 2 bt yar plz i wnt update....i m fan of urs...ur ideas r wonderful n hats of to u for writting 4 FFs on maan n geet in completly different fashion....u r amazing n i m jst dying to read next update....plz add me to the pm list n plz plz plz update dear....😭😭😭😭 see ur fans r crying n how cud u make ur fans crying n waiting...plz dear update karo na yar.....😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
loved the beginning and Geet and Vicky's meeting
i wonder how Maan will react? lol
hope him and geet meet soon!
con't soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

part 2...


Geet an pinky walks out... Killing them self laughing...

Vicky: let's go to the hotel...
Guards: yes sir...
Maan: how was your shopping?
Vicky: I must say... I have enjoyed this little trip.
Maan: stop talking in this posh language! We are in are room... You don't have to talk like these.
Vicky: brother you are very rude! I met this girl today... Very silly. If you know what I mean. She is educated but speak in a rough language.
Maan: that's what you call normal people. Let's see your laptop...
Vicky hands him the box...
Maan looks at the lable... "I have told you to buy the high GB! You have brought the 500 gb!"
Vicky: yes that girl asked me to swap!
Maan: what?
Vicky: it's exactly the same!
Maan: what?
Vicky: she was very nice. She wished... Hop we never met again!"
Maan: and you seems to be very proud!
Vicky: yes I am.
Maan smacks him hard.... Not worried about the laptop but how stupid his brother is.
Maan: you just have been fooled by a girl!
Vicky: no I haven't!
Maan: yes!... He smacks him again... I can't be live you are my brother...
Vicky: ouch that hurts...
Dadi walks in...
Dadi: what happen?
Maan: your grandson just been fooled by a girl!
Dadi: Awww that is so sweet... Mari pota...
Maan: Dadi!
Dadi: ka hua beta!
Maan: he just been fooled by a girl... Teach him something.
Dadi: are! What can I do if my grandsons are stupid!
Maan: dadi! Stop being nuisance....
Dadi laughs...

Maan walks out of the hotel in anger... Taking Vicky with him...
Maan: which shopping center?
Vicky: why?
Maan: shut up! Hopefully we will see her...

After 3 hours...

Vicky: there she is.

Maam walked towards them in anger. Geet and pinky in anger...

Geet and pinky were still laughing about the swap they have done...
Maan: I think.. This is my brother laptop!
Geet was facing her back... Pinky couldn't speak as her mouth was full of food. And shocked.
Geet stood up turned round to speak... But then suddenly she lost it... All her word disappeared... She just looked at him... Blankly... He was taller so she had to look up. He was brood and really buff! Geets mouth were half open... He was soooooo handsome... His dark brown eyes were gazing at her angrily...
Vicky: you have cheated on me.
Geet lost in maan... "anytime!"
Maan: what?
Geet: yes!........ She was lost...
Pinky: geet!
Geet snaps out...
Maan: are laptop!
Geet: umm...
Maan: laptop!
Geet: do I know you?
Vicky: you know me!
Geet: awww! Look it's are sweet ulllu...
Maan: stop your rubbish nonsense!
Geet: (OMG! He is soooooooooo handsome and .... OMG... Awww I would do anything for him...)
Maan gave her a glare swapped the laptop and left....


Maans phone rings....
Pari: where are you?
Maan: we are in london!
Pari: when are you coming?
Maan: in two to three days!
Pari: Everything is messed up here!.... all the clint is waiting for you.....
Maan: i will...


Geet: OMG! OMG! OMG!
Pinky: how many time will you say OMG?
Geet: he is so dashing... So handsome... I am in love....
Pinky: you don't even know him!
Geet: yea so?
Pinky: he is pretty cool!
Geet: he is my! Keep your filthy hand off him...
Pinky: yea! yea!... he didn't even look at you....
Geet: so! No one can escape geet handa...
Pinky: and that's why you never had a BF more then a week!!!
Geet: they are faltu BF! You know just for the name...
Pinky: right!
Geet: yep...
Pinky: and how exactly you will find this laptop guy?
Geet: who said about finding him?
Pinky: you just have told me you like him!
Geet: yes!
Pinky: then?
Geet: umm! I love him! That doesn't mean I have to find him... He just looked awesomely sexy...
Pinky: you are so confusing...
Geet: well done babe... You just understood me in 17 years!
Pinky: you are 17!!!!!
Geet: exactly!
Pinky: what?

Bothe arrives home... In geets home there was only geet and her dad... Her mum died 6years back... Pinky is her next door neighbor because she doesn't have any brothers and sister she accepts her as he sister...

Geet: dad... Do you know what?
Dad: what is it?
Geet: I met this amazing good looking guy today at the mall...
Dad: what?
Geet: ha... He was dam hot!
Dad: geet... Stop thinking about boys and start concentrating on your study...
Geet: ha... That's what I am doing... Boys study...
Dad: geet...
Dad serves dinner....
Geet: but I must say he was one of a kind...
Dad: you say this to me every Monday!
Geet: that's because I me....
Dad: that's it enough!
Geet: ok! Why are you getting angry!
Dad: you are going to India next week!
Geet: what? NO! You probably planning to get me married... Soon as I step in INDIA your stupid brother and my idiots cousin probably will force me to get married to some idiots...
Dad: geet! he shouts...
Geet: I am not going to India....
Dad: it's your cousin wedding... We are there only family... You know everything na... I can't make it because of work... So I only left with you....
Geet: dad are you trying to blackmail me?
Dad: of course no beta... How could you think like this?
Geet: ok! Ok! Geet agrees... Geet will go.
Dad: anything els geet would like?
Geet: geet wondering how much spending money she gets?
Dad: much as you want!
Geet: ok! You are being odly nice!
Dad: koi shak?
Geet: yes! You never this nice...
Dad: I have been saving for this .... So don't worry...
Geet: I won't spend all the money....
Dad: start packing....

Maan: dadi I will be week late... My meeting have been delayed....
Dadi: what will I say to Pari now?
Maan: tell her anything... She will understand and could you also tell her to arrange my meeting when I am back next week...
Dadi: sure beta....

Next: 2nd meeting... In plane….


hay you all…. sox for late updates…. but u lot know how busy i am… :D

pls pls pls do lv some comments… and pls do press the LIKE BUTTON...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
Omg...............I cant imagine geet like this...lol
Love at first sight..hahah
Awesome update love it...Second meet will be interesting..waiting for it..Thanks!
Update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Finally.......... Great loved it....... But she is just 17 how could her dad think about her marriage....... Anyways lets see........ Update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Haha geet fell for maan lol. Can't wait for the next part. And loved all the conversation.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
awesome!...
geet was totally flat on maan!...love at first sight!....
can't wait for their second meeting!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
hey great update dear.................
OMG geet fall in love with maan............interesting.................. love in first sight😆..........
next meeting in flight ..............wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! make it special like "jet scene" in previous "heartbeats"......................... ya it was my fav secne...............i want some thing like that...........

update soooooooooooooooon......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
after a long time u updates.............loved it.......geet drooling over maan.........anyways waiting for their second meeting..........plzzzzzzz update soon

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