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geetmaank

@geetmaank

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Posted: 14 years ago

#401

loved ur ff... plz add me 2 pm

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Tressa

@Tressa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#402

Hi... thanks for the superb update... DEv is disgusting.... Dev is horribly evil.... Im feeling very bad for all those girls... I hope that Maan solves the case as soon as possible & rescues the girls... & I wonder who is this master... & wat is his motive.. But now without Dev's support I think the master will also be week...

Thank goodness Maan was there to save Geet on time...

Thanks for the jaldi update... as u said u were gonna update tomo.. .

Please nex part bhi jaldi update karna...

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#403

Hey guys: I want to appolize for not updating any sooner 😭😭😭 You guys can hit me with jootis if it makes you guys feel any better 😆....Here is the next update!

Also thank you thank you thank you so much for your lovely comments!! I will reply back when I can...I really appreciate it!!!

Chapter 13

Adi: What the hell was that in there Maan? Answer me I am talking to you!
Maan: What do you want me to say! Did you hear him? He sold his own wife. He has no regrets for what he did. You saw her dead body right?
Adi: Yes Maan I know what he did was wrong but we have to think this logically now. You could've killed him in there
Maan: I want him dead.
Adi: If you kill him then we would not find out the real person behind this..is that what you want for those girls that are trapped to be dead?
Maan: No I want him to be caught
Adi: Good you are not going in front of Dev anymore. We will do the rest of the questioning. You can go home and relax
Maan: You can't do that. I am NOT going home. I want to question Dev.
Adi: NO right now you are not at a position to say anything. Go home.
Maan: NO I Am not going!
Adi: Maan if you don't go home within the next five minutes then you are out of this case and I will do this. Just go home I will call you if he says anything. Maybe take couple of days off.
Maan: I am not taking any damn days off!
Maan got up from the chair and punched the wall in anger and left the office.

Dev sat on the floor in the same position as before after they dragged Maan out. He started thinking about how everything even started.
"Hello Dev. May I sit here?"
Dev: "umm who are you?"
"That is not important. I want to help you"
Dev: How?
"I know that you are looking for a job so I thought I should help you. Be generous"
Dev: Thanx but I don't need your help.
"First listen to what I have to say. This could be life changing for you"
Dev: Fine tell me
"If you do what I say then I will pay you 1 crore for each assignment"
Dev: I crore...
"Think about it..I am only offering you this offer"
Dev: Why me?
"Well I I think you will be perfect for this job by looking at your past history"
Dev: How do you know so much about me?
"You came to give an interview at my company just by looking at you I knew that you are the person I was looking for and I usually don't make any mistakes in recognizing people. I know you want to be rich, make it big! Well here I am giving you an opportunity to be rich"
Dev: What would I have to do?
"If you decide to do this job. There are couple of rules I have that should be followed at all times. and make sure that no rules are broken"
Dev: Ok, what are the rules?
"You cannot question me at all.
job is to just follow the assignment and provide me with what I ask.
Once in you cannot back out.
You will only know what is necessary and deliver the assignment where I will ask you too.
NO ONE is to know about this"
Dev: What kind of assignments?
"You will find out soon. For each assignments I will tell you on the phone which I will provide with private number that cannot be tracked"
Dev: I need time to think
"You have five minutes to think! Make your decision..your dreams will come true."
Dev: Alright I will do it
"Good now we are partners. Tonight I am coming over to your house for dinner. You should notify your wife that you got a job. Am sure she would be delighted"
Dev: How do you know am married?
"Like I said I know everything about you. I don't make any mistakes and make sure I know my people inside and out."
Dev: Right...
"hmm alright then I will be at your house tonight" (He left just as he came)

Geet was worried about Maan ever since the incident happened with Dev at home. She tried calling his cell but he wouldn't pick up. "Babaji, I hope he is fine, please don't let him do anything dangerous." She tried keeping herself busy with the house. She cleaned up the whole mess in the house just to distract herself but no matter what her thoughts drifted back to Maan. She walked by his room and saw it open and heard the shower running. "When did he come back?"
Geet went downstairs to the kitchen and prepared him some food knowing that he must be hungry. She put the food on the tray and brought up to his room. He was trying to button his shirt when she came into his room.
Geet: Maan I brought some food for you
Maan: Am not hungry Geet
Geet: Maan please eat something.
Maan: GEET! I SAID AM NOT HUNGRY
Geet: j j ji (Scared by his anger..she began leaving the room)
Maan: Geet stop..am sorry woh I was just mad about Dev
Geet: I understand. I am leaving the food in here in case you get hungry.
Maan: Geet you don't have to leave, you can stay here
Geet: Ji (Geet saw that Maan was having difficuilty buttoning up his shirt)...Maan here let me help you
Maan: No it is fine Geet
Geet came in front of Maan and started to button his shirt. Her touch was making Maan lose his senses. She was so close to him, he could feel her breath. He wanted to hug her and never leave his sight as long as he lives. when she is in front of him he forgets his anger and his problems.
Geet: Maan I am done..here sit on the bed and eat
Maan: huh umm thanx Geet (she heard him moan in pain when he tried lifting the spoon..she noticed his injured hand)
Geet: Maan what happened to your hand
Maan: woh nothing...
Geet: It doesn't look like nothing..come here show me your hand (She held his hand in hers..he watched her as she inspected his hand up close)...let me bandage this for you...
Maan: It is not neccessary
Geet: Maan we are friends right..now listen to what I say
Maan: Yes ma'am (Smiled at her)
Geet: There your hand is all bandaged...you can't use this hand for a while now..
Maan: How will I eat then?
Geet: Mein hoon na...now be a good boy and eat
Maan: Geet how can I..my hand remember (Showing the hand to her)
Geet: Let me finish...here open your mouth (she started feeding him the food)

They both were lost in eachothers eyes...they didn't know what they were feeling..both just wanted this moment to never end.

Precap: More maaneet!

Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#404

awwwesime prt

update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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known

@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#405

fabulous pls through Dev to timbuktu & let Maaneet enjoy great update pls cont soon

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Amna

@cutiepie9512345

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#406

res
yaar u know i was wondering when u wud update!!
gosh! isnt it hard to have 3 fanfics? how do u do it!! lolz k me gunna read now

Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago

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Trisha

@Tishuu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#407

OH myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy *faints*.....................

u have to make it difficult for me init...................hw am i supposed to concentrate on my own FF when im gna be soooo gaga over urzzzzzzzzzzzzz - omgggggggg that was sooooo sweeet of her to do his buttons, feed him and all like its all 2nd nature to her hehehe abhi se biwi ki puri training complete hai