FF:Kheenche Mujhe KoiDor Teri Ore ch18,19 up pg 40

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Posted: 14 years ago

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wonderful teaser do continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey very nice FF yaar 😊

Please Update Soon.

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hey this ff is awesooooome.........

do cont.soon......

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woww...this is awesome!!! Please add me to the PM list!

wow....i am speechless....waiting for the next part eagerly!!!! abhay is a darling!!!!

i saw you around in the bb forum btw :)

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Aha.. awesome character sketch n great teaser..!! Cant wait for the first epi...😍 great work dear..👏

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Hey, the teaser and the CS was very nice!
Loved it..

Please do PM me with the updates :)

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hey guys here it is ch 1 is up do comment and press the like button the pm list is add let me know if any one else wants to be add to it .😉

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Ishq bina kya marna yaaron

Ishq bina kya jeena

Gud se meetha ishq ishq

Imli se khatta ishq ishq

Gud se meetha ishq ishq

Imli se khatta ishq ishq

Misha di what are you doing tum yeh step phir se wrong kare

Pia dude I cant do this stupid dance kyun tum muhje toreture kar na chate hain haan just tell me why your killing me by making me look like a fool you know I have two left feet

Pia: misha di just calm down we are doing this cause it our big sister engagement tonight and we want to make it rocking ok don't worry we will practice again ok let me show you how it goes 1^st song is Ishq Bina(taal) which we both do then you do By The Way(Aisha) then I do Say na Say na(Bluff Master) ,Then kabir dances to Prem ki Naiyya (APKGK,) then Kabir and I dance to Billu rani(Goal), then finally us 3 end with Desi Girl(dostana) do you understand misha di ?

Misha: Kya dude agar hum sab ghanne abhi kare tho sangeet, mehndi aur shaadi mein kuch nahin hoga yeah.

Pia: don't worry misha di thanks to our lovely bollywood industry there a lot more songs to dance to so it's cool, here let me just show you the steps again then u will do great

Pia is dancing to Ishq bina kya marna yaaron

Ishq bina kya jeena

Gud se meetha ishq ishq

Imli se khatta ishq ishq

Gud se meetha ishq ishq

Imli se khatta ishq ishqKabir walks to pia

(puts his hand on her shoulders and sings Ishq bina kya marna yaara

Ishq bina kya jeena

Tumne ishq ka naam suna hai

Humne ishq kiya hai

kabir winks at pia , pia smiles)

Misha (pushes kabir hand away from pia) oye kya t um AR Rehman ho because the last time I checked you were only loser kabir so tum na please stop yeh stupid singing se meri sister ko impress nahin hoga ok.

Kabir: kya Misha please na anyways I'm not that bad what say pia?

Pia: um kabir I agree with misha di na hi tum akshay khanna ho aur mein ashwariya nain tho dont think by flirting with me I will let the fact that your late slide we have to practice Panchi di and Daanish jiju's engagement is tonight loads of work to be down.

Misha di I have to go to the store and pick up few last min things for tonight .

Kabir: pia come let me take you

Pia: No thanks kabir I have the car I'll go you both stay and practice I'll be back in a hour .

Pia leaves the store walking to the car in the middle of the rode she drops a bag bends to pick it up looks up sees a red car about hit her when out of no where a guy runs at the speed of light and pushes her away (just like in the promo she searches for him then a car almost hits her)

Pia in Abhay arms , Abhay looking at her ,Pia staring in to his deep blue mysterious eyes

Pia just about to thank him when her cell rings : hello

Misha : pia tum itna time kyun lag re ho come fast we have to practice and get raedy before people start to come jaldi aao .

Pia :haan di I'm just coming

She turns to say thanks to abhay but he's gone .

Abhay see her get in the car and leaves

Abhay thinking to himself: What just happened today I can not belive my eyes , yeh larki tho bilkul meri sukriti ki jaise hai kya yeh sach hai'' no no it cant be her it's impossible yeh kaise ho sak tha hain ' what the hell is happening dam it .

Pia back home

Misha :pia why are you so chup are you ok ?

Pia tells misha ,kabir and panchi about what just happened: where did he come from just out of no where and sved me aur his eyes itne hypnotic hai I'm telling you guys it was as if his eyes were trying to tell me something aise aankhaiyn I've never seen they were so spellbinding.

Misha : haan just like hrithik 's in Krrish right ?

Pia throws a pillow at her : just shut up I'm not joking

Misha :ok ok chill just calm down ab tum na stop thinking about your Krrish and get ready .

Mrs. Dobriyal : Misha, Pia tum dono ready nahin ho kya Kare itni late kyun ho jaldi karo , everyone is here aur haan misha papa ke new business associates bhi aaj yeh party mein hai tho I want all 3 of my beautiful daughters to look pretty and Panchi especially you since it's your day.

Pia and Misha are helping serving guest

Mr. Dobriyal : Pia Misha tum dono come here

Pia and Misha: ji papa

Mr. Dobriyal : I'd like you to meet my new business associate Mr.Raichand and his son Abhay

Pia Turns shocked to see him

Pia Misha :hi how are you?

Abhay :fine thank s

Mr. Dobriyal : tum youngsters baat karo ,Mr.Raichand would you like another drink come join me .

Pia: excuse us will just come pia grabs Misha hand di he the one I was telling you about today

Misha: what him you never mentioned he was good looking .

Pia :di chup I didn't get a chance to thank him so I will go now where did he go ?

Little while later dances start

Kabir on the microphone :ladies and gentalmen may I have your attention please 1^st of all I 'd like to thank all of you for joining us on my bro's and best friend uff Daanish and Panchi's enagement tonight we have loads of entertainment for you all first up Pia and Misha with the song Ishq bina

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Ishq bina kya marna yaara

Ishq bina kya jeena

Ishq bina kya marna yaara

Ishq bina kya jeena

Gud se meetha ishq ishq

Imli se khatta ishq ishq

Vaada ya pakka ishq ishq

Dhaaga ye kachcha ishq ishq

O...

Ishq bina kya marna yaara

Ishq bina kya jeena

Abhay turns right when the song starts says to him self: what ishq bina that was sukrti's fav song this cant be happening.

Kabir up next we have Misha

Misha :panchi this one is for u always be like this

By The Way Lyrics

Tumse kehdenge hum saari baatein
Yeehhh'..
Kaise hain apne din kaisi raatein heeyy'
Koi na koi hulchul rehti hai dil mein
Harpal' log hai kehte paaal' humko oohhoo

Here we goo!!!
By the way on the way
Humko jo mili hai zindagi
Gaati hai hasti hai pagli si hai zara
Ruthe bhi maane bhi har lamha nayi
Hai zindaggi.. moody hai ziddi hai
Kya kare kya pata

Rukhte hain kahaan hum rok isse
Chalte hain hawa ke jhoke se apni to
Aisi hai zindagi yahi apni ada hai
Kya karein koi bura jo mane kya karein
Humse to hain khafa ab sabhi
Jaane do chodo bhi

Dhadkan jo kahani
Hai khul ke ab to sunaani hai bhool
Nahi sakta hai isko hain jisne suna
Kya chese yeh jawani hai
Jo baath hai dewaani hai
Sochoge toh jaanoge yeh rastha kyu hum ne chunaa

Sunne mein ye suhaani hai jazbaat
Ki rawaani hai sunoge to janoge ye
Rastaan kyo humne chuna
By The Way On The Way
Jab dilse hui thi dosti
Humne bhi dil ne bhi tha yeh vaada karliya
Job hi ho humko to darna hi nahi hai ab kabhi jab

Hamein jo lagaa hune vahi kehdiya
Rukhte hain kahaan hum rokese
Chalte hain hawa ke jhoke se apni
To aisi hai zindagi yahi apni ada hai
Kya karein koi bura jo mane kya
Karein humse to hain khafa ab sabhi
Jaane do chodo bhi

Misha: up next is pia With

say na say na how you said it to me

sone do na do na how you did it to me

dholi dhol baja raj raj ke

ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke

ho say na) - 2

seer te duppatta lehriya

nachye pind de kudi de naal shehriya

te dhol wajda ho kudiyo dhol wajda

Gora chitta rang gala gooriya

sadi rab ne bana di jodiyan

ke dhol wajda ho mundiyo dhol wajda

(say na say na how you said it to me

sone do na do na how you did it to me

dholi dhol baja raj raj ke

ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke

ho say na) - 2

all of you thigh girls in the house

if you feeling what i am saying then shout it out

say dhol wajda oh kudiyo dhol wajda

all of you desi boys in the house

just put your hands up and join the crowd

say dhol wajda oh mundiyo dhol wajda

say na say na how you said it to me

sone do na do na how you did it to me

dholi dhol baja raj raj ke

ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke

ho say na

say na say na how you said it to me

sone do na do na how you did it to me

dholi dhol baja raj raj ke

ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke

oh oi oi

oi oi oi

oi oi

oi oi oi

(say na say na how you said it to me

sone do na do na how you did it to me

dholi dhol baja raj raj ke

ho aaisa yaar manana ai nachke

ho say na) ' 2

Pia and kabir dance to billo rani

Aaaahhahhh

Shaher mein dusri koi

Nahin tujsi hai Billo

Billo Bolle Billo Billo

Jho bhi Dekhh yehi pooche

hain yeh kiski Billo

wahh

Har aadha teri jagathi hain qayamat kho

Har Kadam par thu girathi chale bijli Billo

Aha Aha Aha

Hoe Hoe

(Ishq karke tujse deewana

Bethab hua barbaad hua

Bhool gaya aapna bhi naam

Jab naam tera isse yaad hua)2

Yeh hain jho majnu hayee

Innhe kya mein Samjho tauba

Roz hoojathe yeh hain kisse na kisse pe fida

Arre haannn

Aaj iss ke peeche hae

Kal uske peeche Tauba

Kya theekana hain inka kab hojaye kab lapatha

Inki mohabat resham ka jaal hain haiiii

Deewangi bhi inki eak chal hain

Abhay seeing them dance together: why am I getting upset seeing her dance with someone , she not even sukriti so what difference does it make.

Some one spilled some drink on the floor and pia slipped but Abhay caught her hand pulled her up and danced with her and acted as if it was part of the dance

Hoo billo rani

Hoo billo rani kahon tho abhi jaan dedon

Billo rani kahon tho abhi jaaan dedon

Abhay dancing around and going side to side of her

Lachakti bahon ke iss gulshan mein

Pholon jaise iss thaan mein

Hon pagal hie karde iysi khusboo hain

Chamakthi aankhon ke inn tharoo mein

Hooton ke inn gulzarro mein

Ohh deewana karde aisa jadoo hain

Song ends with pia in the middle of kabir and abhay

Hoo billo rani kahon tho abhi jaan dedon

Billo rani kahon tho abhi jaaan dedon

Kabir: Misha what the hell who is he to even come and but in our dance

Pia: come on kabir he helped again and tum ho ki irrated pia is about to walk away from kabir

Abhay:Pia sorry ki main tumhare dance mein interfere kara laken I didn't want you to fall and embarrass yourself in front of everyone on your sister engagement so I thought if I acted as if it was part of the dance it will be ok sorry if I ruined it for u .

Pia: Abhay please don't say sorry in fact thank you once again mein aap ko thanks bol ne wale thi laken phir tum suddenly left and I must say your are a very nice dancer I mean you didn't even know are routine and you danced just too good really you really made my sister's day even more special

Panchi: yes Abhay thanks for not letting my sister embarrass herself aur pia is right chaar chand laga liye

Abhay: whispers to kabir hope no hard feelings dude

Kabir whispers back: you might have won this round but b4 the end of tonight I will have won so back off got it.

Pia was leaving when her pink duppatta got suck to abhays watch (eye locking session)

Just then kabir is so pissed and breaks a glass in his hand

Pia sees kabir is hurt: no Kabir itna khoon hai( she yanks her dupatta from his watch and rips it and wraps in kabirs hand ) kabir just keep it like this for now Misha go get the first aid box fast.

Misha: ok fine she runs

Pia :Kabir how did the glass break

Kabir: it was craked

Misha brings the box Pia takes out her piece of duppatta and puts the cream and bandage on kabirs hand.

Kabir:Ouch!

Pia: Kabir is hurting a lot? (blowing on it so it ease's the pain)

Here take this pain killer it will help but first eat some dinner gives him a plate to eat

Kabir tries to eat but he can't cause he hurt his hand so pia takes the food and feeds him kabir looks up at abhay and gives him the look that see I won so back off .

That's it for now don't for get to comment and press the like button. Percap: Misha : kya yaa panchi tum daanish ke thoughtsmein lost ho understandable laken pia tum kyun woh abhay kayhypnotic eyes mein lost ho kya chaker hai?