After the Confession: new updatebyminnie pg 68 - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome story.

please pm me when you update
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!!!
Bheegi Di,I've never read a FF but I accidentaly read yours and OMGGG Its soooooooo goooooodddd <3

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishali_AR

Alright this is soooo exciting!! woohoooo! Bheegi di,the way u write,I can imagine he whole scene as if its happening right in front of my eyes..and evryone else great job!!

ok,so Im all excited to write someting random on the next morning at Sanjeevani..
Armaan is the first one to reach sanjeevani,early in the morning at 7 am...Since he could barely sleep last night,he decided to be at the hospital rather than tossing and turning in his bed thinking about last night !! what a night it was...he was thinking of all the promises they made to each other..Asmani was still echoing in his ears..how beautiful it sounded..he felt like he was on heaven when Riddhima flung her arms around him and he wrapped her in his arms..that moment was the happiest moment of his life..APPLE !!! He jolted up from his daydreaming..!! It was nana..!!
Nana- ''Tu itni sube sube yahan kya kar raha hai?'' Apni bulbul ko dhund raha hai..??
Armaan- Nahi apko!! 😆
Nana-- Natak mat kar..!! NATAK MAT KAR SAMJHA KYA!! (*shouts in typical nana style)
Choutees filmein aur ..Armaan interrupts-- haan haan pata hain..chautees filmein aur pentees natak ka experience hai apko..!!
Armaan looks at the clock and then at the door...
Nana- aye sunna..Teri aur bulbul ki to fultoo fataak setting ho gyi,ab mujhe teri help chahiye..dil mein ghanti bajti hai aajkal use dekhke !!😆
Armaan- Kyaaa?? ab bhi?? Dr.Keerti??
Nana-PAGAL SAMJHA KYA MEREKO? Kirti nai....lovely..
Armaan- oooh! Sister lovely??? how lovely
Nana- haan shishster hogi teri !! Sun tu mujhe bike chalana sikhade..sikhayega na?
Armaan- Sister lovely aur bike?? Unke liye apko truck chalana sikhna padega !!
Armaan keeps laughing when suddenly..he feels......yes......this is her....basket..He turns around and there she was walking towards him,wearing a purple salwar kameez,smiling at him..looking positiving radiant..Armaan couldn't take his eyes off her..'' Muskurati hai to aur bhi khubsurat lagti hai'' he thinks....!
Riddhima looking at him all glowing and blushing..''Hi Armaan !''
Armaan- Hi...umm...tum...itni der se...kal raat thik se soyi nai kya?
Riddhima knew what he wanted to ask..but decided to play around..'' umm nahi to,mein to khoob soyi..hamesha ki tarah !'' kyun?
Armaan- oh..umm ..kuchh nai..
Riddhima looks at him and smiles affectionately ''I love you Armaan''😳
He beams !!! 😃 He could give anything to hear those three words from her..but now when she says it ,he feels double the happiness,like never before..Riddhima keeps looking at him smiling..how happy she was to see him happy and smiling..This is the man she had fallen in love with......Armaan..!! she sighs..
Just then Dr.Keerti,shubhankar,anjali,JP.Jiggy arrive at the nurse station..
Dr.Kirti- Dr.Shubhankar aaj apki do surgeries scheduled hain.
Dr.Anjali ICU
Dr.JP children's ward
Dr.Armaan OPD
Dr. Riddhima general ...she looks at Riddhima..DR.RIDDHIMA !! Aapka dhyan kidhar hai?
Armaan looks at her..She was still looking at him with a smile on her face,dreamy eyes,lost in her thoughts...He knudges her with his elbow..''Basket..Dr Kirti ..!
Riddhima- Oh..umm..sorry Dr.Kirti...wo mein..
Kirti- Its ok Dr.Ridhima..general ward..mere sath!
Everyone leaves..Armaan walks upto Riddhima smiling.''Kya hua basket ?? Kal raat thik se soyi nahi ??😉😆
Riddhima runs from there blushing and smiling..😳


Loved it yar but i think these dilougs perfectly suits to KASH as armaan n riddhima. While reading this i only imagined shilpa as riddhima....
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome work, guys!, and great idea Bheegi... :) Just tell me whenever you update!

and Vaishali_AR: I'm loving your story too. :D Do, PM when you post again..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Vaish it was awesome re..
Kya yaar pura Sanjeevani ka breafing Area meir saamne kada karthiya..
Typicall nana type r..... Aww Man how i missed our Ammy Smile n Basket... Oyee hoyee.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwwwwwwwww...Luved it ...:D

Plz Continue Soon & PM me :):)

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Posted: 14 years ago
@Vaishali - Love your part too! <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww thats soooo cute!!!!!! :D :D :D nice work!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear nice start
plz add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey bheegi,,
hav been a silent reade ron this forum n ur ff's..
welcome back!!!
i loved ur ff's n i loved this piece as well.
just a request..pls turn this into a ff...atleast we would get to see AR story post marriage here as we could not see it in DMg..
also pls do continue ur fanfics which are incomplete..thnks😃

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