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Posted: 14 years ago
cutiepie its a hillarious update.think the geet in serial knows karate 2,wat wud hav happened of mr msk??lolzz...w8ing eagerly 4 next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepie9512345

I HEART U GUYS!!!
Plz tell me when it gets boring!!! XD


ill heart u, if u update SOON!
and its Not getting boring 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
found ur ff nw.. its lovely. do add me in ur pm list plz
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Originally posted by: kyphfanz


ill heart u, if u update SOON!
and its Not getting boring 😉



vaari jaavan cuz me updating in umm 10 mins 😃😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi janoos!!! I was writing this part in class and I told a friend the story.

Thanks to Herry who suggested for Geet to go to a bar!!!!

Srry Herry you had to listen to me blabber on and on, and thanks for laughing!!! at me!!😆

I want feedback and comments plzzzzz guys more than just a line okay!!😃 ENJOY!!!

Chapter 22:

She sat on the bed and looked at him in confusion.

"Dadi was crying I feel so bad!" she said.

"They all were soo worried" he said sitting beside her.

He couldn't help but over the few hours he had experienced a rush of emotions.

Anger, outrage, hopefulness, contentment, frustration'.and what not. This girl had him on his feet, constantly! He wondered why he felt like life had been pulled out of him? Why did he feel choked when he couldn't find her!? Sure, he would obviously be worried but why did she affect him soo much? Why did he think about her all the time? Why did he miss her-'''.

" STOP!!!" he yelled in his mind.

" Hello!! Maan?" she said waving.

" I asked you something!?" she said pouting.

" Kya?"

" THEY were worried but YOU!?" she asked.

" Geet'.ofcourse I was worried! Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho?"

She smiled weakly then she went downstairs to get a drink.

" Geet? Kahan jaa rahi ho?"

" To get some coke or something'.I'm coming..you're probably too sleepy to care anyways'" she said the last line thinking he didn't hear.

He sat there wondering what kind of a girl Geet was. Couldn't she tell how he felt by looking in his eyes. Why did she think like that?

He decided to go for a work-out. He couldn't think straight. Did he love her?

Ask yourself these questions:

Do I stare at her''YES!!

Do I feel weird when she touches me'.YES!!!

Am I a loser asking myself these questions''YES!!!!

Her annoyingness, her touch, her cutenesss, her karate, her girliness, her teasing, her expressions, her eyes'.he loved ALL those things.

Infact he loved everything about her.

He was mad and happy!!

"I don't even know if she loves me back. She doesn't because she never gave any signal. Infact she always ignored him.

He got lost into thought.

Geet was in the kitchen she ate an aspirin then without looking at the jug she poured apple juice into the glass.

"Ewww, the apple juice tastes bad with the aspirin. YUCK!!"

She wandered off to the balcony.

She looked outside smiling at the moon.

The truth was she was scared, scared of something happening to her and Maan not accepting her. She missed him, even though he was with her. But she felt a restlessness.

"Yeh dust-danav bhi na, mujhe paagal kar de ga!"

After that she decided to go into dadi's room.

" Arre-bete aap uthi ho?"

" Dadi aap ki dadaji se kab shaadi hui?" she blurted out.

Dadi smiled.

" Aap idhar aayiyay main aap ko sab batati hoon."

Geet sat with her head in dadi's lap.

"Humne unhe pehli baar tab dekha tha jab who hamare ghar rishat le kar aaye the'humme bilkul nahi achaa laga hum shaadi ke liye tayar nahi the"

" Aap ki shaadi phir bhi unse ho gayi"

"Kismat ko hum main se koi nahi rok sakta jo hona hai wohi ho kar rehta hai!" said dadi caressing her forehead.

" Phir kya hua?"

" Phir humme unse baat karne ka moka mila, who bohat ache the, hume unki sachai bohat achi lagi"

"Wow!"

"Phir hamari shaadi hui'..humne ek doosre ko samajhne ka moka diya, lardayi, pyaar, sachai, yeh hume kareeb laye'."

Geet sat smiling.

"Har rishte ki bunyaad hoti hai, aur har cheez sirf ache ke liye hi hoti hai. Humare ridhtay ki bunyaad sach se shuru huwi"

" Dadi aap unko miss karti hain?"

" Bohat? Humare dil main jo unke liye pyaar hai wo kabhi bhi kam nahi huwa aur na hoga!" dadi kissed her forhead.

"Dadi aap jaise log bohat kam duniya mainhote hain" saying so she hugged dadi and left the room.

She was feeling dizzy but now her head started to spin.

"Geet! So jaa, waise bhi us us gadddhe he ko maar ke shayad tu thak gayi hai?"

She saw the window open and she had an idea.

Her dupatta got caught onto the plant and she didn't see it drop so she just tied the rope to the pillar beside the sofa, and with that she climbed off.

Maan who now wondered where she was went over searching the house, as he was about to pass the spot she left from, her dupatta kissed across his face. He caught it then looked over to see the window open.

"OH MY GOD!!!!!" he panicked and raced down the stairs into the car.

She was on the streets wobbling and talking to herself.

"Geet, jab Maan ko pata chale ga to oh woh ghusse se cherry red ho jaye ga'"

When she saw a bar and noise coming out of it. It was a road-side bar.

He was in the car wondering if someone had climbed up and taken her!!

"Ye lardki I can't leave her for even a second!!!"

Geet entered and in her white kameez, and green churidar, no dupatta!!

The men looked over to her'..

Guy 1: "Oye! Aaj dekh yeh kya mast cheez aayi hai'.."

Guy 2: "Magar isn't she Geet Khurana''yeh yahan pe kya kar rahi hai??"

Guy 1:"Chal naa'.mazaaa ayega!!" the more perverted guy said.

She was in the middle of the dance floor dancing wildly and laughing.

The men crowded around her dancing with her.

She decided to leave as she saw the men looking at her in such a way.

The men followed.

Meanwhile Maan heard LOUD!! Music coming from the bar.

He then saw Geet walk out all crazy, smiling to herself.

He saw a bunch of men dancing with her. His hands curled up into a fist.

He got out outraged'.

He walked over to her.

"GEET!!!!"

She was about to run away because she knew he would get mad.

"Geet? Yahan kya kar rahi ho?"

" dance!!" she started jumping.

He smirked.

"Geet why are you behaving soo strangely?"

"Because main paagal hooon hheheeheeh" she giggled.

"Wo to tum ho" he said laughing.

Her eyes widened and she started tripping and falling.

" Geet, did you drink something perhaps?"

"Apple juice with an aspirin, yucky it tasted really badd" she said making faces.

"OH NO!! yeh paagal lardki wo to dad ki''.."

"Yeh kaun hain?!!!" he asked her.

"I don't know but I wanna dance it's fun!!"

"Geet hum ghar chal rahe hain. ABHI!!"

"No, no, no, no ,no sadooo, akrooo!!" she poked his nose every time she said that.

He came over and picked her up.

" Maan leave me I'm a big girl and can do things on my own!!!" she started lightly slapping his chest.

He kept quiet, opened the car door and placed her in the seat.

She stared at him.

"Kya huwa? Ab aise kyun dekh rahi ho?"

"Maan you look soo hot!!"

He smiled and gave such a charming smile.

Geet felt her heart skip a beat.

" Aise mat dekha karooo mujheee"

"Kyun?" he asked amused at her pouting.

"Kyun ki''. mujhe weird feel hota hai" she said childishly.

"Really? Kaisa?"

"Nooooo!!"

"What?"

"Maan tumne mere sawaal ka jawaab kyun nahi diya you dust-danav!" she said laying back on the seat.

"OoH acha wo sawal, umm tum aise soch bhi kaise sakti ho I was EXREMELY WORRIED GEET!!"

"Really?"

"Meri aankhon main dekho, kya yeh jhoot bol rahi hain?" he said looking at her eyes.

She got up and stared into his eyes their noses touching.

"Geet! Door se bhi dekh sakti ho!"

"Nahi mujhe aise hi dekhna haiiiii! Haan tum sach main worried the MAAANI!!" she said pinching his cheeks.

"Geet! Not the cheeks please."

"Awww tum kitne CUTEEE Ho, aww my baby, you adorable pumpkin"

"GEET!!!"

"Kya hai?? Stop being cranky!!"

He looked at how cute she looked her annoying him actually amused him now, instead of annoying.

"Waise Geet I'm impressed! Kya maara tha tumne us gunde ko'" he said smiling.

"I know he was a bas***d, who saal-"

He covered her mouth.

" I heard when you were praising him"

She stared into his eyes.

" Maan tumhe main achhi lagti hoon kya?"

He stared at her surprised she would ask such a thing. Then his expression changed to a mischievous one.

"Haan, theek ho''.."

"KYA!! Sirf theek. Uhhuhmmmmmm" she started crying.

He wasn't prepared for this.

"Acha achi lagti ho''"

"Sirf achi" she continued to sob.

"Bohat achiii lagtii ho, Extremely achiii!!!"

"Really!!!! Vaise tum bhi itne bure nahi ho Mr.Perfect"

"What are you talking about I'm hot, smart, rich and the perfect man!! I'm MSK!!" he said proudly.

"Bas shuru ho gaye na lardkiyon ki tarah apni taarefain karne. Janab ko to kisi aur ki tareef sunni hi nahi hai''"

"I WANT SOME!!!"

"What now Geet!?"

"Gol guppe!!! YUMMY!!"

"Geet it's so unhygienic" he said making a face.

"No''"

"Tum mujhse nafrat karte hooooooo, koi mujhse pyaar nahi karta" she said crying and stomping.

"But Geet I don't hate you.."

"So, you like me''"

"No it's something more than that!!!"

Geet started staring at him with wide eyes.

"OMG!!!!! So you really really like me!?" she asked him putting her hands on her cheeks in astonishment.

He started laughing.

"Really really!! Really!" he said chuckling.

"No now I feel like eating ice-cream yummy!!!"

"Fine, ice-cream it is'" he said starting the car.

He would talk to her in detail about the recent incidents. For now he was extremely happy she was safe.

He watched her lick the ice-cream she licked her lips and she just looked soo cute like that.

"Want some?" she asked smiling widely.

"Nahi tum khao'.."

"Thoda sa naa''."she stuffed it in his mouth while some fell on his clothes.

"GEET!!!!"

She laughed uncontrollably.

"Sadoooo number 1 agar tum chup chap kha lete ache bachon ki tarhah to yeh nahi hota''" she laughed.

They got home and he took his shirt off, and picked her up to their room.

She was smiling at him lovingly all the way. Then he placed her onto the bed and sat beside her.

"Tum hamesha mujhe itna darra deti ho."

"Sorrryyyyyy, main bohat buri hoon tabhi to tum mujhe har waqt ignore karte ho" she said innocently.

Those words pierced his heart.

He took her into an embrace.

"Geet!! Main bhi bohat bura hoon mujhe tumhe aur time dena chahiye tha" he kissed her forehead.

They stared into each others eyes feeling and reaching the depth.

They both fell asleep.

PRECAP:

Geets realization???


So kaisa tha!! Plz tell me if you guys like this track or no!!

Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
AHH! I LOVEE IT! MAANN! OMGG! they both love each other. I m waitin for maan's confession & then geet. OMG OMG! their scenes were soo cute...how she went to the bar and starts dancing..hahha!
poor maan! :( always there to save her..
PLEASEUPDTSOON(:
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Posted: 14 years ago

That was just fabulous girl! Only you can think of aspirin + apple juice for a scene. Hehe....btw is it even true? I dont drink at all by choice and dont know anything about this sort of thing.

I loved how Maan realized the depth of his feelings. I cant wait to see how Geet comes across her depth of feelings.
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was amazing! i love the tali geet..soo innocent. <3
ugh cant wait wen they express their feeling in words..143 :P
update sooon !!

Sadaf
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
geet was so cute
cant wait foe their realisation and confession
they are so cute
cant wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wat a gr8 track!!im impressed!!!plz continue n w8ing 4 the next update.

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