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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwww dat was awesummm updatee
very sweet aswelll geet just cudnt believe wat had hapened and in the flight
talkn was realli gdd prem is an awesum friend bless him
awww maan cnt say no to geet
i know beach will be fun
cnt wait continue soon
xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
truly magical z simply and truly magical......
i am in love with it
update soon.....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
yes one romantic moment at the beach plz
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 26


he looks at her for a while says challen, geet makes a real upset face & sits in the car
maan drives her to a private beach at night 10pm
they park the car & she runs to the beach getting really excited
she folds up the jeans & dips her legs maan walks close to the shore & stood watching her ....
she walks towards him - mujhe aapni shirt do
maan eyes poped out...
geet - shirt do na please
maan - GEET
geet - yeh tuff looks shirt uttar ke dena
he did'nt react she went on to pull his shirt out
maan held her hands - ek min, deta hoon...her eyes where stuck to the water
she was least bothered about what was going around her
maan reluctantly gave her the shirt wondering what was she upto.
she snatched the shirt & went into the car

she changed into his shirt in a fraction a sec & next maan saw was her in
his shirt...ok!!! only his shirt which fell just above her knees. exposing her
thin and slender legs. he was dumb stuck & tried to look away. it was cold wind
hitting his body that was now covered only with his black vest. wonder why he was
feeling so hot almost sweating. she dragged him & ran into the water. they walked
untill the water was till their waist level. every time there was a big wave she
screamed & screamed out in excitment. maan did'nt have much room to react. he was
just trying to control himself from doing something stupid.
geet - aap bhi mera saat shout karo na, warna to GEET GEET karte raheta ho
maan looked away. she held him & walked deeper
maan - it is deep there
geet - daar gaya kya
maan dragged her to the place where the water was untill his neck littereally
drowning her - aab kaun daar raha hain
geet - mujhe nahi daar lagta..standing on tiptoe
maan drags her a step further she lost balance & lost her grip on his wrist
he got restless not feeling her around
maan - geet ..geet
he pushed his hair behind & swam around
she hopped on to his back & sat on him crossing her leg around his waist
while both immeresed in water untill neck level and wispered in his ears
geet - aab kaun daar raha hain
maan - GEET HANDA & dips her back ward..she does'nt buge..clings on to him
they roll over & finally he manges to stand steady...he loved the way
she made him playful...OOPS Maan singh khurana playfull. how his wild thoughts were
lost in her mischievous act & she was clinging on to him & he was trying
to dip her. they played along probably inexhaustible and finally crashed at the shore
lieing down holding hands & looking up at the sky
geet - lets play a game
maan - umm
geet - I will select a star & u have to guess which one i am selecting
maan - ok pick one
geet - nahi aap start karo
maan - ok
geet spotted some the wage & said that one
maan rested on his elbows kept looking at her...drenched in his luckly black
shirt, wraped up in mud & now lost in the stars
geet - bolo na teehk hai ki nahi
maan - umm
geet - aab meri bari
maan - umm
geet - bolo...still looking at the stars
maan - umm
geet - kya umm..batvoo
maan - umm
geet looks at him & meets his eyes that sparkled in the darkness
they kept looking at each other for few mins may be longer
his hand moved her hair behind & cleared the mud on her face
she looked at him wondering, what was he upto
maan - challen
geet - umm. I am really hungry
maan - we will have some thing on the way
they get in the car & she slips behind - deehkna mat
maan smiled and closed his eyes
geet while changing - sudhar gaya ho bachan
maan with his closed eyes - I don't want to lose my watch again
geet - what do u mean lose your watch!!
maan - u have still not returned my watch
geet - ghar jake first thing I will return ur watch
maan - arrey baba mazak kar raha tha
geet - ha ha ...very funny she comes in the front seat
u can open ur eyes now, ur shirt is gone sorry
maan - let it be
geet - lets go to this road side walas & have pav bhaji
maan - road side wala, NO WAYS
geet - please do't talk like Maan..kya hain uska naam
maan mumered if I won't talk like myself what I am supposed sound like
maan cleared his throat - how do u know how I ..I mean how he talks
geet - guess mar rahi thi...
maan mumers guess marne ke liya bhi main hi mila ise
maan - when u don't like him why do u talk about him..
geet - kya matlab
maan - I mean u always sight his examples
geet - nahi bachan...actually yeh deehko na..shows her hand with his name written ....
how do u expect me to forget him.. din main ek bar to uska naam mera samne aahi jata hain
maan mumers challo aacha hain aise na sahi to waise sahi
they stop near a pav bhaji vendor & have hot pav bhajis
geet looks at the time - yanha se airport kitna door hain
maan - not sure
geet - meri flight 45min main hain
maan - I guess we will be able to make it
geet - challo jaldi
it was night very less traffic..they reached on time
geet rushed to the time schedule & saw the flight was cancelled
geet - babaji yeh kya kiya aapne..meri flight hi cancel kara di
papaji se mujhe marvana hain kya. aab mera kya hoga
geet called prem & checked the scene with her place
prem - tu kanha hain don't tell me tune flight miss kar de
geet - actually meri flight cancel hogayi
prem - yaar tere saat hi yeh sab kyun hota hain
geet - woh meri babaji ke saat setting hain
prem - tera to bad luck hi karab hain
geet - aab main kya karoon
prem - kuch bhi kar & be home in next 3hrs...
geet - 3hrs???
prem - I told we are watching a movies & I will be droping u back
geet - mama man gayee
prem - nahi...maine manaya
armaan shouts from behind - correction..maine manaya tha
geet - thanxs lekin koi fayad nahi..I may not be able reach
next flight is in the morning
cuts the call..babaji yah kya kar rahe ho..looking up
maan - GF lagta hain tumhare babaji chate hain ki tum raat mera saat bitavoo
teasingly

precap
aab kya hoga???

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVE YOU and THANK YOU for updating :-D
Ab kya hoga is a very good question hehe
Im afraid to even guess anything because you always write the unexpected and make it fit so perfectly :-)
I hope you will update tomorrow again...haina?
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Posted: 14 years ago

brilliant update...that was such a fun filled update...

loved it
plzz continue soonn
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
musky is deset mein too magical tickles bhi hain poori raat geet aur maan.geet toh gayi😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣 Bechari Geet..pata ne he abh kya hoga? 😉 I'm really enjoying this..😃
I hope Geet and Maan officially become GF and BF..that would be just awesome! 😳

Thanks Di!
🤗
Edited by radiant_raisa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

OOOPS THAT WAS TOO GOOD......LOVED IT 😉😉..............SO WHATS NEXT..... THEY R GOING TO SPEND THE NIGHT..............OMG ....NAUGHTY .....NAUGHTY........😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVLEY UPDATE..................... ARE WE GOING TO HAVE SOME XXXX ? 😉

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