khwaish (sujal aur kashish ki) - Page 28

Originally posted by: aarpk

shruti di woh SOON kab aaye gaaa jaldi sey likhain nah abh aur wait nahiin hota 😆


Sarah

hey sarah sabr kar sabr ka phal meetha hota hai😆 😆aaj exam khatam huey hai to jaldi story bhi post karungi😉😉

Originally posted by: golu_1677

shruti ur story is wonderful waiitng for the next part pls post it soon

thx golu luv to see ur comment

Originally posted by: sun_423

shrutu tu kya likhthi hain yaar zabardast... 👏
tere likhne ka andaaz is just par excellence.. 👏
mujhe tere likhne ka style behad pasand hain.. 😛 😊
shrutu us ki diya ko maar goli..aur let sujal give kashish sahara... 😳 😃 😊
shrutu waise veena ne akhir mein kaha ki woh apni bahu ko dekhna chahthi hain tho ab veena ne kashish ko dekh liya aur waise bhi kashish hi tho veena ki bahu hain na.. kyun sahi kaha na... 😉
shrutu ek aur baat veena sujal ki shaddi karwana chahthi hain.. tho ek kaam kar sab ko patah chalne de ki sujal , kashish are married.. isse sujal veena se aur abhay se kiya hua dono wade nibha payega... 😆
& then let that diya turn villan... 😆
plz jaldi continue karna.. main intezaar kar rahi hoon.... 😉

ohhhhhhhh so sweet comment😳mar dala itna pyaara comment dekey 😛

aur rahi story ki baat to hum hai to kya gham hai agay agay dekh hota hai kya 😆

Originally posted by: rajeev1

👏 wow shruti...your story is super yaar..just read the whole stroy in one go.....hehe..subah se lagi hui hon ab ja kar pari hai puri..i had read some bits but not the entire.....its really great..last wala bit to bahut hi tragic hai 😭 ..kuch karo yaar...veena ko shock proof karo hahaha....anywayz..keep it up..will be waiting for your next part! 👏

farah jann thx for ur wonderful comment 😛thx for reading my whole story😛

yaar kabra mat khuch na khch to karogi hi 😉

and i will post next part soon 😊

shakku dadii..rone done ka parrtt... 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 yeah kyaa kiyaa yaar unclee koo upar bhej diya aur veena maayaa ko koi shock lagne nahii diyaa... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 n dis diya im gonna kill her.. 😡 😡 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 😡 😡 phele hee kamm mushkille thi jo yeh aakar phir se badda dii... 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 w8 lemme call my gang over here... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 BADDI MCP(my crime partner SAARA... 😆 😆 😆 😆 ) where r u jaldi yahan aaja aur diyaa auntyy koo upar bhej de... 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 😡 😡 😡 waise i dint say how was ur part... 😆 😆 😆 yaar as usual rockin.. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 but dis tym it was totally crying.... 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 kafi tragedyy thii... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😭 😭 😭

Originally posted by: ambarinaaltaf

shakku dadii..rone done ka parrtt... 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 yeah kyaa kiyaa yaar unclee koo upar bhej diya aur veena maayaa ko koi shock lagne nahii diyaa... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 n dis diya im gonna kill her.. 😡 😡 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 😡 😡 phele hee kamm mushkille thi jo yeh aakar phir se badda dii... 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 w8 lemme call my gang over here... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 BADDI MCP(my crime partner SAARA... 😆 😆 😆 😆 ) where r u jaldi yahan aaja aur diyaa auntyy koo upar bhej de... 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 😡 😡 😡 waise i dint say how was ur part... 😆 😆 😆 yaar as usual rockin.. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 but dis tym it was totally crying.... 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 kafi tragedyy thii... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😭 😭 😭

so cute sweeto 😳i was missing ur comment😭really luv ur comment😛

ab uncle ko jana tha isliye chaleygaye aur aunty ka bhagwan hi janey 😆

haila tu saara ke saath mili hui hai to pakaa main kidnap hui😉

haila thx for ur comment 😊

and haan tu abhi itna ro rahi hai to ps agli bar ek tissue paper ka box saath rakhna 😉

luv ya😳