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Originally posted by: dmg_fanatic

was getting bored...read ur shot again...

If u dnt mind i wanna point out something...

I kno u r all used to getting appreciative comments....but trust me this isnt criticism....just tht i kinda missed those few beautiful lines or verses u added in the beginning in almost all ur shots....they added so much to the shot...

Dnt mind pls..

Ur writing rocks as it is..
Just ma personal view...i missed it...

Thanxss

N srry if m too bossy

Pm me with the updates..

Kavs.😊

Ps...in ne case if u dnt wnt dis comment on this thread...temme ...i will edit it :)

nah dear its okay😉

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice one
do write more


love
Riddss

thanks u riddss dear for commenting..😛

Originally posted by: kashfull

amazing one shot. i started crying

thank u dear😛

and my bad if i made u cry😆

Originally posted by: janu1610

completely in daze.Always love to read your OS.

thanks for pm.

ritu

thank u ritu dear for your beautiful comments😉

Originally posted by: -Yash-

shona_lover 🤗

loved reading u r OS yaar! 😊

thank u dear for your comments😛

Originally posted by: ManEet_KaSh

Beautiful...

thank u😛