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Ayesha

@-Ms.Muffin-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

lovely part dear....
and it was sooo touching...😭
arre dear plxx plxx write a happy OS once.. would love to read

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swetiepie_angel

@swetiepie_angel

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

another os by u!!

its lovely dear...😊

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KAVYA VIDYARTHI

@dmg_fanatic

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

heyya armaan,..

Love the last line....

Love hurts....like evry1 says...it does...

M in awe again....u wrote this??? Like seriously'???...pinch me pls....m lost....hehe....

Such a mills n boon kinda shot....i guess i'd better flop ma mnb's into the bin with such beautiful writings coming up frm u....

I love the way u showed shilpa's reaction seeing AR togetha....the way armaan went to her place n secured her...the way she just cudnt choose...n the way he came back....perfect attempt n wonderful outcome....

M getting crazy bout ur ff's

Thanxsss for the pm...

Keep writing...keep rocking,..

Kavs..

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karan-007

@karan-007

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

wonderful part 😃 n thank yu for the pm 😃

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

awesome os

loved ot

really touching

thanks 4 da pm

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bhoomika

@bhoomi_K

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

Hey!
Great OS..
Thanks 4 the pm!

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naureen

@Norz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

wowowo that was awesome
the pain shilpa went through when she saw AR together and the news of armaan ....it had tears inmy eyes
and the end it was shocking armaan alive
do contd this os

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

one of the most touchy os...

simply amazing,....

mid blowing n beautifully written...

do write more...

thnx for the pm.......

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

Ergh why do you always do this once I fall in love with an os you wrote and then you write another and make me fall in live with that one I must say this was the best you wrote it had so much intense emotions like pain and the live they both shared and the ending wasnt expected but atleast two true lovers met in the end and just want to say I'm in live with the way you write it's beautiful and yeh just continue to write more 😊