~Madhoshi Maaneet thread 3~

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nan_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#501

nice update
so sweet self convo of geet she now knows that maan beleives her that she can't do anything wrong
maan ko NT per gussa toh anna hi tha
per maan ki gussa dekar meh be dargayi thi
liked when the baby said 'Nt deserves it, she almost decleared me dead yesterday👏

police too arrest maan ab kya hoga??

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rama

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Posted: 14 years ago

#502

nice update..

maan is going to jail...😲

continue soon....

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#503

MUSKI DIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE KARO!!!!!!!!!!
MUJHE FRUSTRATE MAT KARO WARNA MAIn attack kar dungi lolz
attack#1:

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ixray

@ixray

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Posted: 14 years ago

#504

hey Muskaan

whats going on ???

are you being partial to police scenes.............here Maan is going to be arrested and in Truly Magic it was Geet !!!

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pliz update soon !!!

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#505

~madhoshi~
part 46

media & police barges into the outhouse
maan was in his gym comes out in his black vest looking really annoyed
maan - nakul yeh kaise shor hain
gaurds trying to stop the media
cop shows him the papers...we have a complain against u by NT
maan clucthes his fist & eyes spitting fire
daadi & dev come in pushing pass the media
dev - bro did'nt do any thing
cop - can u tell me where were u last night between 12 & 2.30am
before maan could say a word
geet shouts from top making a droopy eyes & hair spread on her face
dressed in his shirt stretching her arms yarning - suniye meri kurti nahi mil rahi
kahan rakhi aap ne kal raat ko
daadi & dev giggles looking at her act & then try to maintain a stirn look
maan looks at her in shock
media tries to click her snaps. maan smashes their camera & tells the gaurds
to take them away... he rushes up - tum andar jao

geet makes a innocent face - ji
cop - ek min
geet looks at maan & then cops
maan - go inside now
cop - maam would u know where was Mr.Khurana between 12 - 2.30am last night
geet - bedroom main the mere saath then bits her tonge
maan gets annoyed - aise kuch nahi hain she is lying
geet - sorry sorry & turns to leave
cop - are u sure he was with u here & can u give this statement
geet looks at maan - yah i am sure woh mere saath the
cop takes her signature on the statement
cop - aap kaun hain
geet - geet
cop - mera matlab hain aap ka Mr.Khurana se kya rishta hain
baby~papa ki cute se baby ki mama hain😳
geet - main inke office main kaam karti hoom
baby~uff
cop smiled sheepishly at her & left...geet went into maans room to change..maan barged in

held her from arms - yah sab kya hain, tum kuch karne yah bolne
se pehle sochati bhi ho yah nahi
geet looked down & kept quite

maan - bolo geet kyun aise karti ho, kya zaroorat thi tumhe aise bolne ki
aur yeh kya pehan raka hain
geet - main aur kya karti, police aap ko pakad leti to
maan - jab maine kuch nahi kiya to woh mujhe kya kar sakte hain
geet - right, you just smashed her whole house in anger, kitna gussa karte ho
ek raat aap ke pass nahi rehti hoon to aise karte ho
maan held her phir kyun mujse jhooth kaha kal raat ko
geet - aur kya karti, woh sab log aap ko kitna hurt kar rahe the
mujhe nahi acha lagta... main aapke nazare yun jhuki hui nahi dehk nahi sakti
maan - kyun geet, aakhir kyun
geet - kyun ki main...main...
maan - kyun mere liye humesha aapna sab kuch lota deti ho
geet fumbles in his grip finding it difficult to express herself
maan - bolo geet
geet - ji main woh
maan - kyun yeh nafrat ke rishte ko ibadaat ki tarah sawarti ho
kyun mere itne kareeb aane ki koshish karti ho
kya rishta hain tumhara mujhse? kya chati ho mujhse
geet breaks free from his grip - kuch nahi...kuch nahi chahti aap se
samjhe aap... kuch nahi chahti aap se... naa aap ka paisa, na aap ka naam
& turns away running out to other room with her dress
daadi comes in hearing maan yelling at geet
daadi - aap sameera ka gussa geet pe kyun nikal rahe hain
maan - nahi daadi ..main jaanta hoon geet aisi nahi hain
daadi - phir kya baat hain
maan - kuch baat nahi
daadi - phir aap ghadi ghadi use pe yun naraaz kyun hote hain
maan - main usse naraaz nahi hoon..main us se naraaz ho bhi kaise sakta hoon
daadi - kya baat hain maan
maan - main khud se naraaz hoon..
daadi - aise kyun keh rahe hain aap
maan - nahi daadi
daadi - kitni masoom ladki hain..sahi galat ka kuch pata nahi
bus sache dil se sab karti hain
maan - aur maine uske saath!!!maan hits his hand on the mirror
daadi gets worried
daadi - kya baat hain maan..aap kuch chupa rahe hain humse
maan - daadi..he hugs her...
I met geet in HP 2 months ago...she was in trouble ..some people
were chashing to kill her..I saved her from them..& then
daadi patted his back..
maan - I got carried away (geet comes near the door & stood rooted)
daadi moved back in shock - aap ko illam bhi hain aap kya keh rahe hain
maan turned his back to daadi - umm
daadi - how could u?
maan - i will do anything to undo that ...main uska gunahgaar hoon daadi
maine uske masoomiyat ..(geet felt very hurt to see maan in tears she left
at once from there)
maan broke down & sat on the floor
daadi - why are u saying a no to marry her then
maan - nahi daadi
daadi - MAAN(in stirn voice)
maan - she does'nt even want to talk about that night...
she wants to move on...infact she wants to marry some guy who is totaly not me
offcourse she deserves the best..woh khud itni pyari hain to use bhi koi
utna hi pyar karne wala chahiya..I may not be able to love her the way she wants
aakhir aap hi to kehti hain..mere seena main dil nahi..
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daadi - phir yeh mangni
maan leaves the room
daadi - barson baad aap ko dil ki baate karte suna hain..
hum aise hi nahi chodhenge...

geet goes to guest room ..rests her hand on the tummy which was still flat
us raat ki baat ko lekar woo itna guilty feel kar rahe hain
agar unhe tumhare baare me pata chala to ..woo khud ko khabhi
maaf nahi kar payenge..bekaar hi hum sab ki zindhagi ullajh jaayegi
toh wo unka guilt tha..jo main pyar samajh rahi thi
unka mera itna khayal rakhna..mera saath dena..
yeh mujhe kya hogaya tha..main kya kya sochne lagi thi
waise bhi..wo mujhe kyun pasand karenge
unhe to koi high society wali hi suit kareghi..sasha maam types
I should not have met him only...the more I stay infront of
him the more he will feel guilty about every thing
roz roz mujhe dekh kar unhe hamari us raat ke yaad dilaane se acha hain
main hamesha ke liya yahan se chali jaon

precap

geet resigns😲😲

NEXT PART 47

VM credit goes to karanlover92, AVIS & Pic ...meyis

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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Tressa

@Tressa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#506

😲😲😲OMG....yeh kya ho raha hai???

😲Maan ko lagta hai.. Maan Geet k laayal nahi.. Geet ko lagta hai.. Geet Maan k laayak nahi... Im sure baby is crying😭😭😭..Baby Im with u ya😭😭... Abhi mujhe bhi laag raha hai ki main bhi kisi ke laayak nahi...🤢🤢

Aawww... Apni Geet is Great ya.. kya kya nahi kaha aur kiya Maan ko bachane ke liye.. 👏👏.. Im in love with her love for Maan... aisa pyaar aur kaha.. Beautifully written..👏

Please continue soon na...

The story has reaches a very interesting peak & Im reallly really dying to know aaga kya hoga..

Edited by Tressa - 14 years ago