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Hi,

Enjoyed reading the FF,
the first partt of stroy was more or less like suspense movie,
they were revealed very nicely by you,
it was very convincing...........
Loved the continuation,
janam janam ka chakkar................
they were also fabulous,
Aur yeh kya Maan used his mouth to shut Geets,
that was fabulous..........
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part 25

Geet stood outside the car door thinking omg Maan sir kissed me. How dare he? But but I responded back. So its not entirely his fault. But why couldn't I control myself. Why did I respond? Babaji what happened just now. How am I going to face Maan Sir? I must apologise.

Meanwhile Maan stood outside his car door thinking the same thing. How did I lose control? How did I kiss Geet. She is probably hating me right now. God knows what she is thinking. But she responded to my kiss. Why did she? I know she has feelings for me. This kiss proves it. Her response her warm passionate response shows it. I must apologise.

They both turned to face eachother.

'Geet'

'Maan Sir' Geet and Maan both said at the same time.

'woh I'm sorry' Both said at the same time. Geet and Maan looked at eachother and stood there. Only the howling winds could be heard. It was late afternoon and the road was deserted. All around the road was a forest.

Meanwhile beyond the trees, there were a group of men standing there.

'Sir kya yehi wo ladki hai'

'jee ha, yaad rakna sambal ke kaam karna samje tum log'

'jee sir'

Geet decided to lightened the mood, knowing in her heart that Maan might be feeling guilty.

'Sir, aap ko yaha par ghar basana hai'

'Kya' Maan squinted his eyes.

'ha kabse hum yaha karey hai hotel nahi jana kya raat bar yaha rehna hai huh'

'nahi'

'toh'

'toh kya'

'toh gari tiik kariye na'

'ha ha main abhi karta hu'

'Sirrrrr' Geet said as Maan walked to the bonnet of the car and opened it. Geet followed him and stood next to him.

'aap ko gari tik karna aata hai na'

'Geet yeh tum kaise sawal karrahi ho'

'kya Sir, agar nahi ata phir boldo hum kisi se lift magwalete hai'

'Geet tum chup nahi rehsakti mujhe gari tik karna ata hai dekho tori deer main tik hojayenge'

'ok, Sir aap gari tik kariye liken main ho yahaan apke maadat karne ki liye'

'No thank you Miss Geet, mujhe tumhari maadat ki koi zarorat nahi hai'

'ha main to bool hi gayi aapko kisi ki maadat lena se aitraaz hai, dusht danav, aap ko bagwaan to nahi hai na'

'Geet tum chup chap nahi rehsakti' Geet smiled to herself knowing her Maan was back to his normal self and the kiss and guilt in his mind had lay forgotten.

'haa liken mujhe aap se baatein karna bohot acha lagta hai'

'Geet ab tum chup nahi rahi to phir main'

'phir kya huh phir kya, main apko abhi batati ho mujhe karate ata hai samje app'

'tik hai' Maan told Geet to stand back next to the passenger seat.

'Sirrrr main yahan ho tik hai, obviously is bonnet ke waja se aap mujhe dekh nahi saktey agar apko maadat chahiye bolana mujhe'

'Geet agar tum chup chap betogi to main gari tik karonga na'

'Dusht danav Akrooo' Geet mumbled.

'Waise bi Geet tumhe kya ata hai. Har bar to kuch na kuch galat karti ho. ' Geet was about to respind when a hand covered her mouth. Geet tried to struggle and bang the car door to get Maan's attention who was busy in talking and fixing the car but another guy held her hand and dragged her away. As Geet was being dragged away, she purposely broke her heel so Maan knows where to come and let her shoe slip and her other shoe slip. She tried pulling her ring off and bangles. The men didn't notice that as they dragged her. 'Jawab kyun nahi dete Geet, kabse tum boli jarahi ho keh tum mere maadat karsakti ho bolo na Geet, ab tumhara Amritsar express zaban kyun bandh hogayi, jawab nahi hai kya waise tum hamesha bolti rehte ho'. Maan said fixing the car and closing the bonnet. He then realised that Geet wasn't standing outside the car.

'Geet' He walked around the car and looked into the car.

'Geet' He screaemed. He walked half a mile down when he noticed the heel of Geet shoes and drag marks. He followed the street and found Geet other heels, shoes and her jewellery. He picked her jewellery up and followed the trace that Geet left for him.

Meanwhile Geet was flung onto a bed into a small shed type cottage 5 miles away. She tried getting up but before she could try, some men entered the room and tied her hands and feet to the bed. Geet was scared because not only did she not know where she was, but no one knew where she was and she didn't know what and who had broight her here and why.

'please mujhe jane dijiye' She said to the men who tied her up. The men looked at her and said

'Sorry but its our order'. A familiar face walked in and Geet recognised him.

'aap'

'Thank you, your payment is in the other room please take it and if its too less please let me know' He spoke to who seemed like the leader of the gang.

The rest of the men left the cottage. Geet was left alone tied and incapacitated.

'ha main, Rohit, tumhe kya laga ke tum mere bhai Rudraskh ko jail bejkar aaram se jee paongi, tumhari waja se mere bhai ko kitna kuch sehna para,. Tumhara waja se bechara ka kitna khoon behraha ta aur Rudraskh ka mental imbalance ko gaya hai aur wo abhi jail ki mental hospital main hai sab tumhari waja se. Ab main apne bhai ke badla poora karonga. Main be dekhna chata ho ke tumhe aise kya cheeze hai ke mere bhai tumari jism ki piche para ta, aur aaj tumhe bachanewala koi nahi hai aur yeh jaga ek aise jaga hai agar tum chilana bi chaho koi nahi sunsakta'

'please I'm sorry mujhe nahi pata ta ke Rudraksh ke saat aisa hoga, main yeh kabi nahi chahti ti'

'Geet tum apna joota hamdardi kisi aur ko dikana. Agar tumhe lagraha hai ke main tumhe chordonga to tum gaalat soch rahi ho'

'aage mat barna' Geet warned as he stepped towards her.

Geet was frightened and afraid wanting her saviour to come now and save her. Maan where are you. Geet struggled to get the ropes untied. But Rohit looked at her and laughed. He removed his jacket and top until his upper body was bare. Geet closed her eyes. He went on top of her and and ripped her top off and threw it on the floor. Geet felt the cold air hit her near naked upper body. (she was still in her bra).

'please mujhe chordo, I;m sorry' Geet wailed Tears coming out of her eyes. Geet closed her eyes and felt Rohit;s body on top of her. She prayed in her mind for someone to help her. Geet kept trying to pull her arm out the rope. Her hand was now brusied. Geet closed her eyes. Rohit started to aggresivouly kiss her shoulders. He bit her there. He then moved to her neck and kissed her. Tears formed out of Geet's eyes. She kept struggling. Rohit went to her cheeks and kissed her. He then looked at her lips. He went towards her lips and tried to kiss her there when Geet turned her face to the left. He grabbed her face from the cheeks and made her face him. He then proceeded and kissed her on her lips biting her and entering her mouth. Geet hated it. She bit his tongue. He withdrew and slapped her. Making her lip bleed. He then fondled her breasts. Geet closed her eyes in disgust as he kissed her body, starting from her neck down to her stomach and waist. He then opened her jeans button and rolled them down. Leaving Geet in her under garments. He kissed her legs and fondled her thighs. The then moved back up.

'hmmm now I see what Rudraskh was crazy about.'

He then proceeded to unbuckle his jeans. Geet closed her eyes knowing what was to happen next. But nothing happened. She felt the weight being lifted off her. Her hands and legs being freed. Geet kept her eyes closed. She felt herself being lifted up in a sitting position and a jacket being drapped around her and her jeans being pulled back up and her button being closed. She felt an arm around her. Geet opened her eyes and saw Maan sitting next to her and Rohit lying on the floor unconciouss beaten up. Geet started crying and hugged Maan tight. Maan hugged her back.

'Geet chinta mat karo main hoona'

'Maan main bohot daar gayi ti yaahan pe akele kisi ko nahi pata pata nahi mere kya hota'

'Geet main tumhe kabi bi kuch nahi honedonga' Maan said with certaintly. Geet looked at him and Maan looked at her.

Flashback to what happened.

Maan followed Geet traces and jewellery and saw a shed in the distance He prayed to himself hoping Geet was alright. He saw the cottage was surrounded by 5 men. He quickly incapacitated the men and entered the cottage hearing Geet crying and asking a person to leave her. He walked in and was angered by the sight. He grabbed Rohit off Geet and punched him and beat him up until he was unconciouss. He checked to see whether or not he was alive. He was. Maan knew he couldn't kill him due to the law. But seeing Geet like that his blood boiled. He saw the marks on Geet's body and her lying there with her eyes closed in her under garments. He saw Geet's face bleeding at her lip. He thanked God he got there right before Geet would lose her self respect. He went to Geet and untied her and pulled her jeans up and closed the button. He made her sit up and put his suit jacket around her as her top was ripped on the floor. He tapped her when Geet opened her eyes. He saw fear, gratefulness and love in her eyes. He allowed her to hug him. He promised himself there and then to always protect Geet no matter what happens.

PRECAP: Lost in the forest

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