Miley Jab Mayank aur Nupur |Chp 2 Pg15 NEW| - Page 13

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-

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AMazing Nidz, I'm reliving MJHT through your ff and i have to say...this is way better than the actual mjht..😆

waiting for the focus on Mayank :D

continue soon

Sajjz 🤗
Thanks thanks thanks for the amazing comment!

Originally posted by: -Daania-

Lioness 🤗

Gosh, this was such a brilliant update! You took me back all the way to the second / third episode.

I really love the way you are writng down GunUr's realtionship. So sweet and adorable. 😳 And ahh, Mayank and Shilpa Aunty are as rocking as always 😉

It is so amazing how in every pargraph you incorporate each of Nupur's little details. Her appearance, dreams, thoughts! Wonderfully written.

And ahh, the classic welcome party 😆 The poor girls had to face so much.

And aww, I so loved the very last paragraph, where he actually thinks about them before falling asleep! Too sweet <3

You are a brilliant writer and there is no surprise there! Fabulously written Twin! I LOVED it <3

Continue soon =]

TIGRESS 🤗
Am so happy to read your comment, well I ALWAYS am! 😃😃😃😃😃
Thanks a ton and love yaa!

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hey Nidz
it was amazing update dear.
Nupur was so excited . she was totally filmy type just like our original Nupur.
i loved gunurs convo and their bonding
gunurs relationship was awesome as usual.

yup mayu and his mom convo was also nice
Sadu maynk sadu he reh jayega.
so mayank heard abt Dia's plan
at first i thought that may be he will come to the party to save morena sisters.
but i was wrong.
i said na sadu mayu sadu reh jayega.lol
btw ur party update remind me the party epsd of mjht
good update-nidz

but i think if u put hindi dialogue for nupur , then it could be better
its just my opinion.

Awesome and beautiful update
keep updating
and plz do continue it.
u have so many ff still pending.

FARIIII!! 🤗
Thanks a ton!! 😳

Hayye I wish I could write in Hindi, but then this Hina Mari Nidzy Ayesha will make fun of me. 😡😭 *Mari pallu matey mode*

Anyways thankss!

Originally posted by: Yamini.Arjun

Fabulous Nidz...just too good by god!

you're one awesome writer 😎

Yamzi Di 🤗 🤗
Love you loads and thanks! 😎

Originally posted by: -Mehak

amazing nidz...the last para graph just took my heart away...mayank thinking about the safety of two strangers....awwwwww...lovely...each and every thing is perfect....👏

Thanks a ton Mayank...i mean Mehak...😆
😃

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

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Nidheya! 🤗

Love you for this, I had been waiting for the update since ages and you promised an update before I was leaving. Thank you heaps for keeping the promise, I loved this to bits! 😳

You're a writer par excellence, and the story you chose to write only adds up to the charm. It could not have gotten any better, you make perfect updates all the time. I'm loving it so far, but I wonder what changes in the story would you make so as to suit your dream MN story! 🤔 Well, cause if you get to making chances, the list would be endless. Haha!


What I liked best about the update is the fact that you penned about all relevant characters with due respect to the original story, and yet you managed to keep it all about MN! Unlike me, you dont get carried away while writing. 😆 Wonderful job done, and even though I am going the inactive way from now on, I would like you to keep me updated with the story and write according to the time you can spare out.

P.S. Thank you for dedication, I am touched BUT what trip? Am going nowehere out, just off the net. 😆

-Kanks 🤗

Kanks! 🤗
Oops I got confused with that, I guess. 🤣
Anyways you do not need to thank me my friend.
I will definitely keep you updated with MJMN and my other FF's. O-F-C-O-U-R-S-E 😉
And you update Forbidden Fruit ASAP too.

Love ya!

Very nicely written Nidz.. reliving MJHT olden days

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali

just magnificent. but could you write their dialogues in hindi plz? its just english doesnt give the actual feeling behind their dialogues.

Thanks...am not good @ hindi yaae

Originally posted by: myownarea

So well written Nidz... reliving those memories and ur style..its just so perfect!! :)

Thanks a lot Divz Di 🤗

nice ff