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PART 3

Maan did not know how long he stood there with Geet in his arms. Geet had started crying a lot. She was shaking from head to toe. Maan could feel her releasing all her pent up emotions. Maan was trying to console her. He held her softly and kept rubbing her back to cool her down. Geet did not stop for a long time. Everything had gone blank for both of them. Being together was like being back home for both of them.

Geet slowly stopped crying. She lifted her eyes and looked at Maan and smiled slightly. The pain in her smile was so evident. Maan was hurt to core. He hid his emotions and pasted a fake smile on his face and said," Geet, tune kuch kaaya?"

Geet shook her head in denial and said," Nahin Maan. Kaane ka mann nahin hein."

Maan," Nahin Geet thoda khana kaa lo. You had a long journey."

Geet," pehle yahan se jaana hein Maan"

Maan," teek hein. Tumne apne ghar walon ko bataya ki tum yahan aa rahi ho? Tumhe abhi apna ghar jaana hein kya? Pia ke ghar le chaloon?"

Geet looked at Maan with terror listening to his words," Nahin Maan nahin, aise mat karna mere saath. Koi nahi jaanta hein ki mein yahan hoon. Muche apne ghar aur apne risthedaron ke paas nahin jaana hein. "Geet suddenly gave a shocked questioning look to Maan and said," Aaapne kisi ko bataya tho nahin na??"

Maan held Geet's hand and said, " Nahin Geet koi nahin jaanta tere bare mein. Tum daro mat. Mein tumhe apna Ghar lekar jata hoon. Mere outhouse mein ab keliye tum rahna Geet. Kisi ko pata nahin chalega tumhare bhare mein. " Maan took Geet's bag and said, "chalo Geet"

Geet covered her head with dupatta,looked around and walked fast with Maan. They got into the car and Maan drove home. Neither spoke in the car. Geet rested her head near the window and was lost in her own thoughts. Tears flowed down her eyes non stop. Maan looked at Geet now and then. He wanted to hold her, comfort her, ask her what happened?? But knew this was not the moment. He always wished to meet Geet again. He never in his dreams thought he will meet her again in such a broken state. Every tear of hers was piecing his heart. The girl sitting besides him was not the same pyaari chulbuli Geet he knew.

FLASH BACK 4 YEARS AGO: Sanjeev-Pia's wedding

Maan stood rooted in his place after the girl left. No one answered him back. His personality always made even strangers to be polite to him. But this girl did not give him a damn. He was offended yet he could not help smiling thinking about her.

Sanjeev saw Maan standing alone smiling. He was shocked to see Maan there and that too smiling. He walked towards Maan with full intention of teasing him," Maan bhaiya. Wow !! aaap yahan who bhi aaj hi. Aaj tho aapki bahut saari meetings thee na?." Before Maan could answer Sanjeev continued," Bhaiya sabse bada chamatkaar yeh hein ki aap shaadi mein ek din pehle hein aaye, usse bada chamatkaar yeh hein ki aap muskura rahe ho. Both my house and marriage is blessed now. Such miracles do not happen every day bhaiyya"

Maan was getting uncomfortable listening to Sanjeev. Sanjeev was enjoying the whole situation. One doesn't get a chance to tease Maan Singh Khurana every other day. Maan," lagta hein ki shaadi ki kushi ne tumhare dimag karab kar diya hein. Mein muskura nahin raha tha. Actually Naina aana chahti thi, Dev busy tha, so I had to come." Maan felt he was being rude to Sanjeev. After all it was his marriage. So Maan again put a smile on his face and hugged Sanjeev and congratulated him. Sanjeev was happy and said," bhaiyya aap ek aur bhara muskuraye!! aaj chamatakar ke upar chamatkar ho rahan hein!!" Before Maan could say anything Sanjeev said," Ok bro sorry. Have you met Pia?" she will rip me if I don't send you to meet her."

Maan felt it was time to get away from Sanjeev. He said," I wanted to meet her. Where is her room. Why don't you take me to her??"

Sanjeev," bhaiyya meri kismet kahaan ki mein apne hone wali se milu. Before marriage when we want to meet our mangetar they don't allow us. After shaadi when we want to run from our wife they force us to spend time together. Ok sorry I know you are not interested in all this. I will ask someone to take you to her."

Sanjeev turned around to see if some one was there and he saw her and called."Geet! please come here"

Geet came there running and asked Sanjeev mischievously,"haan Jeeju.Kya baat hein. Didi ko kuch dena hein kya?"

Maan stood there glaring at her and thought," so her name is Geet. Suits her." A tiny smile crept in his lips. He brushed it off quickly. He had made enough fool of himself already.

Geet was also looking at Maan now. She gave an I don't care expression to Maan and was smiling sweetly at Sanjeev.

Sanjeev introduced each other," Geet yeh Maan Singh Khurana hein. Mere dost Dev ki bhaiya. Mere bhi bhaiya jaise hein. Khurana constructions ke MD. Maan bhaiya, yeh Geet hein, Pia ki cousin. Hoshiarpur se aaayi hein."

Maan stretched his hand to shake like it was a business meeting. Geet ignored it and folded her hand with a namaskar and smiled coldly.

Sanjeev asked geet to take Maan to Pia and Geet nodded her head.

Geet told maan," Chaliye didi ke paas le chalti hoon."

Maan walked with Geet. She was looking so beautiful, it was hard not to stare at her. He felt that he was too rude to her. He wanted to apologise to her. But being Maan Singh Khurana the other side of him did not want to apologise to this girl. By the time he could decide about apologizing, they reached Pia's room.

Pia was sitting with Naina and her other friends. She saw Maan and ran to him and hugged him. All the girls were looking at Maan. Maan hated girls staring at him. The only girl who was ignoring him was Geet. Pia was happy seeing Maan and said," Bhayya. So nice of you to come here. I thought Naina was kidding when she said you are here. Its really sweet of you. Hmmm let me introduce you to my friends. They will be so happy to meet you."

Pia introduced Maan to everyone and was about to introduce him to Geet, when Geet said," I have already met Mr. Kadoos Khurana" she bit her tongue and said," sory I mean Maan Khurana. K aur K rhyme ho gaya. Mein badam milk lekar aati hoon sab keliye."

Geet walked out quickly with her nose to the air and for the second time Maan stood rooted.

Pia was talking with Maan about wedding preparation and clothes and Maan was becoming restless. He never liked such topics. It bored him to core. Naina could sense Maan's discomfort and she said Pia that they will leave and come in the evening. Pia asked them to have badam milk and leave. Maan was about to refuse when Geet came in with a tray of 15 glasses.

She was trying very hard to balance and Maan was getting jittery watching her. She looked at Maan held her head high and walked fast to offer him. But as usual Geet lost her balance and all the 15 glasses of badam milk landed in Maan's shirt.

Geet looked at Maan shocked. Maan was very angry and he remembered what she said earlier," Waise phool heen tho giraya tha, doodh ka glass nahin na".He looked at Geet and said," tumne jaan buchkar ki na. Tumhe chalna nahin aata kya. Hamesha doosoron ke upar kuch na kuch girathi ho tum."

Geet was scared seeing her anger and said, " sorry"

Maan,"sorry! Meri meeting hein thode dher mein aur mein aise jaunga wahan?"

Geet was getting irritated.She was talking to herself,"Had hein yaar. Inse sorry bolne kha koi faida nahin. Muche koi shauk hein kya inke upar kuch na kuch girakar daant khane ka" Maan heard it and asked ,"kya?"

Geet said," Mein jeeju ka shirt laati hoon. Aap who pehen kar meeting mein jaa sakthe ho."

Maan,"muche doosron khi kapde pehne khi adat nahin he yaar."

Geet was getting irritated with her attitude and said," ye lo. Ab mein kya karoon. Mein koi jadugarni nahin hoon ki mein apni haat hilaoo aur aapke kapde teek hojaye."

Maan held his fist and said Tum!!!!!!!!!!!!

Naina got up and held Maan's hand and said ," chaliye veerji yahan se chalte hein. Aap ghar mein change karke office jaiye. Gussa mat kijiye. Dekhiye Pia dar ghai hein."

Maan looked at Pia and cooled himself. He smiled at her patted her cheek and said that he will come in the evening. He glared at Geet and walked out. Geet started talking to herself," acha kiya doodh girakar. Inke gande perfume ke smell se badam ka smell beheter hein. Kitna strong perfume tha. Uss gande perfume khe chakkar mein mera sir chakra raha tha. Isiliye tho mera paair fisal gaya"

Maan heard her and turned towards her in disbelief.

Get looked at him and realised that he listened to her ramble. Her eyes widened in shock and she ran out of the room.

PRESENT

Maan stopped his car with a jolt when he reached home. Both Geet and Maan snapped out of there thoughts. Maan looked at Geet. She looked back at him with a blank face.

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