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Manpreet

@Maneetkraze

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Posted: 14 years ago

#661

HOW DO YOU ALWAYS EXCEED MY EXPECTATIONS???
IT WAS BRILLIANT! THE SONG WAS PERFECT FOR GEET'S REALIZATION.

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blueopal

@blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#662

hey really great update yaar.............. day by day maaneet understands each other very well n geet too get answers for her self qns..............that's great................... looking fwd..................

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#663

Part 37

Beautiful update!😊

This song is one of my favourites. Love the qwaali touch in it! Very melodious!😊

This song altogether takes me to a different world of deep emotions.

When I finished reading this part, I remembered lines from the movie Om Shanti Om. Don't remember the exact lines but it goes something like this-'kehte hai agar kisi chiz ko dil se chaho to puri kaynaat use tumse milane ki koshish me lag jaati hai'.

Quite true in Geet's case as the whole universe ( Meera-Maan dance session, Geet registering for Kathak next to their dance session, Director asking her to emote all those emotions, Maan standing and looking at her, the song, the director's words) was conspiring to help Geet to know her feelings, understand her feelings for Maan!

Geet's realization- I could relate it to the scene in the serial when Geet realizes her love after the jhumka scene and she says the line you've mentioned-pata nahi kab woh meri zindagi aaye aur kab apne liye jagah bana li. Your update had all the emotions which were their in that scenein the serial!

My eyes were moist by the time I finished reading this part. Such is the intensity of your updates!!!

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#664

@ armaanshilpa

Beautiful analysis of Geet's state of mind, her feelings, her thoughts.

The way you gave words, meanings to every line of the song is really nice! 👏👏

Loved it😊

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-sann-

@-sann-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#665

luved it....one of the unique story i've read so far....

continue soon....

luv

Nupur

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nisha

@nisha_bh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#666

hi hasini, its a gr8 experience to go thru d part35,36 n 37....they r soooo good n so touching....both of them realizing their love 4 each other was handeled soooo beautifully,tat i was mesmerized.... n inclusion of pinky's character is also very significant....its really,a kind of babaji's answer to geet,as u hv mentioned.....its really so wonderful to see her realization about wat maan has exactly felt....n of course,her trial to make up 4 dat...

now,wat can i say about part 35 n 37????

m speechless....ore piya is one of my fav song....n d song is d most suited one here i think...d way she was acting out her feelings thru her dance,was amazing....i mean i can see it....this song helped her to feel d pain of staying far 4m him....all d emotions r put beautifully....u mentioned tat maan was mesmerized by her dancing,n i was mesmerized by ur words....dey reflected it sooooo beautifully....

really loved it hasini...dunno wat to say else....

just can say,u r really blessed wid this special talent to express emotions by ur words...

keep on doing this beautiful work...

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love_lavnya

@love_lavnya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#667

Hey Hansini,

hey really great update yaar..............

day by day maaneet understands each other very well that's great................... looking fwd.................. when they confess there love to each other I knw u think about it as u r storyline move but I m too impatiance now what to do?

love it totaly u r sach wonderful writer

love u

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#668

Wow Hasini,beautiful!!! O re Piya is one of my favorites as well. I keep on listening to it...dunno why but the song always manages to bring tears in my eyes..so much pain...so much love...

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569360

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Posted: 14 years ago

#669

hiii hasini....

as usual u floored me with ur beautiful updates...

part 36 was so fantasticc..............the observations and inference part was great.........to me it sounded lik science experiment..........but entirely endearing..................

studing maan in his habitat.............it cracked me up completely.............but throws nice insight......

part 37 is beautiful again......will be a favourite..............

indeed any art form is liberating , helps in unleashing the innermost feelings and frustrations..........

the song pick was truly genius.........

i could completely relate the wordings of song and geet's innnermost turmoil that she is undergoing...........and her breaking down in her apartment was heartwrenching.........

only u cud spin such wonderful moments.......... from a simple yet endearing and enriching tale..........

loved it thoroughlyy

love u and ur ff

keep writing

melody

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pushpi

@pushpi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#670

Hasini, you're absolutely right....this part has to be be the closest one to you. To me, this was the best update you've ever written.

Any form of art is a clear window to express emotions and thoughts. Music and Dance more so than any art clearly and without inhibition shows the inner depth and intensity of your feelings. O Re Piya is a perfect song for Geet's situation. My heart was very much literally aching just reading about her dance. Fueled with my imagination, the only thing left to do was cry! I felt more so than her dance, the song is what brought out and confronted Geet on her new feelings. The lyrics suited her to her life and she was "forced" to face her changed feelings.

…" Don't think too much….dont question and fight it". This quote is true no matter what the situation. Be it for friends, family, husband-wife relationship, etc. But knowing it is never enough and doesn't change anything, does it? We might think through both sides and around any issue and conclude something but it doesn't necessarily mean we will or can follow it. Hats off for this quote! Its part of my fav collection thanks to you :-)

By the time the update ended, I was virtually on the verge of tears for all the pain and suffering Geet has had and is enduring. "Maan:"Geet…tumhe ho kya raha hain?...ab tak mujse nazarein chura rahi thi…aura ab…" She understood what I was talking about." Def more than Maan, Geet has it much harder to face and accept this Love. "nahin ki woh kab mere dil mein aaye aur kab apne liye jage bana di….I was in between worlds wondering which way to go…My heart feels for her inner struggle.

This part was well apart from your other updates. The fact that we felt the pain and the anguish that Geet must have experienced in the dance gives HUGE credit to your writing skill. This is most def my FAV part and close to my heart as well :-)

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