New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#641

First of all, there was more of Geet's monologue in this update than the last which I liked. If we're just talking about feelings, Maan is very sure that he loves and cares for Geet. As for Geet, she's on shaky ground because these are new feelings for her and she's hesitant because she doesn't want to make any mistakes and lose her friendship with Maan. Ex: "Did you deprive me of the one thing I wanted in life for all this while, just to make sure I recognize and appreciate it when I actually get it?"

"I guess you can never stop caring for a person after you bond with them, be it any level." - this is soo true and very insightful on your part.

I also loved how Geet was thinking to name their relationship. Is pyaar ko main kya naam doon ;-)

I was very happy to see that they're atleast (for now) at the point where there is no need for questions. I really liked how you included that level with the Insurance Agent issue. Neither questioned the other and this is important because it's the beginning of a special level of trust. Since its new it might be shaky still (only the future might tell I suppose).

All in all, I'm so happy. I was waiting for you update and I just checked your page and voila! There was your update. I didnt even wait to get your PM on it hehe ;-) Too good yaar :-)

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shona

@shona2010

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#642

that was nice update.....really loved it

do continue soon..

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#643

awesome part... Geet told her family abt Dev and as usual emotional blackmail.... people wnt grow up evn if they see their own blood in sorrow...... U penned everything very well dear...

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known

@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#644

awesome update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#645

Amazing! Hmm.....Pinky made Geet realize that she hurt Maan that day......and she then asked for his help.....nice! Aww......hope Yash tells Meera about his feelings.....he too has become so chup chup.....lolz. Ah, Geet told about Dev to her family.....great! I loved Maan and Geet's convo......silly conversations hun......kinda cute! Do continue soon.

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#646

This part was really amazing and it showed that geet has accepted what she shares with maan and now ready to live a new life andthe best part was the pinky incident when she got the answer to her question by experiencing herself and also meera where she talked about yash geet saw herself doing the same so she was indirectingly saying that she does have feelings for maan and that too on the more than friendship level basically what I summed up about this part was that geet experienced or relived her thoughts on other people so that se can analyse it and get her own answer anoter thing i liked about this part was thy she was brave and told he family that her and dev are over and also how she knows whatshe wants and what her life is anyways I loved this part and continue soon 😃

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Doracake

@Doracake

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#647

OOOOOOOOOOOOOH lovely update Hasini..........its 2.30 am in the morning and I am reading ur FF............ see how much hooked I am with ur FF 😉

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#648

hey babe!! I'm sorry I'm so behind on the last 3 updates!!! But I'm gonna read them soon...busy week-end!!! And I really wanna give a nice long comment..so sorry for being so late(holding ears)!!!! But I know I'm gonna love it!!!