New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet

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komlika

@komlika

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#521

hey great job with writing...........u write so well👏...........please add me to PM list................ geet is right👍🏼........... maan did take job offer thing on personal level not professional............ he wouldnt have done this if it was someone else😍.............. could i suggest something............ u should get geet new job and apartment........... just so she can understand her feelings for maan.........where she does everything that she wants to do....... she need to be independent women.........first she was dependent on dev😡......... then she felt she is dependent on maan,..........if this continue she will never gain self independence or accept her feelings as love............this is just suggestion if u think its not good toss it out......... but continue with ur concept its really good

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maaneet_pisces

@maaneet_pisces

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#522

u are amazing with the emotions.....complicated girls... :) i seriously havent read a better ff....its just so true and amazing to read :) do continue soon!!!

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#523

Reserved....Will post tonite...

Best part ever.

Love u

Rachana

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#524

Hey great update!

i guess both have their own personal pains and Geet just needs to find herself and be independent. but that does not mean that she shuold isolate Maan from herself.. they just need one passionate night ;) LOL

cont soon!

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#525

Will post soon.....I dont hate you or this part hun :-) That just ain't possible ever

Will post more later just like Rach.

-Pushpi-

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#526

Ur characterization is brilliant. Keep up the good work!

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known

@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#527

great update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#528

actually I loved it a lot......

its the real scenario n u managed it with such a gud pace

gud going .....

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#529

HEYY I just became a goldie and wanted to post my first post as a goldie (1001) post on your story :-D

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#530

Wow! I love the way you write.....it's so real.....the situations they go through....the way they think.....it's great! The confusion Geet is facing has been described so well.....and Maan's anger is also justified.....Geet wants to know what draws her to Maan.....and Maan is angry coz of obvious reasons.....lolz.....but I loved it! Oh, he made Geet stay back......cool! Ah, Geet's reply to Sasha.....great! All in all an amazing update! Do continue soon.