AR/GM FF-You Belong With Me- Prt16 Pg32 (4/06) - Page 20

Hi..I know I said i'm updating but i'm currently stuck at a spot and i guess i need to sleep on it coz i can't seem to move on..will definitely update tom

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Recap

Riddhima: Di I have to tell you something. This is important and I hope you give me fair hearing. She then proceeded to tell Anjali everything, from the minute she met Geet in the food court to their meeting with Vikram, their dad's ultimatum and Armaan's proposal that followed.

Di, I love him and I've decided to marry him. I would love it if you were here to support me! Am I doing the right thing?

Anjali: Yes Riddhima. Tum jo kar rahi ho bilkul theek kar rahi ho. I'm going to ask apply for a leave immediately. Main kuch hi dino main Delhi aa rahi hun. Riddhima thanked her sister and bid her goodbye.

Part 16- Maan Talli Ho Gaya

Geet: I want you guys to leave everything to me!

Armaan: No way! What with work and now a wedding to plan you are going to over work your body. You need rest, heck the baby needs rest. I'm sure Anjali will be more than happy to help you out and so will me and Riddhima. Geet smiled at her friends in gratitude and they had a blast celebrating her birthday.

Armaan waited patiently for Riddhima to leave the room so that he could tell Geet all about his plan. Ever since he had botched up his proposal, he had been looking for a chance to do it differently. He whispered his plan to Geet and she smiled in approval.

Armaan paid the bill and the trio left the restaurant to head to the condo. Arriving at the condo, Geet opened the door and hopped out after bidding Armaan and Riddhima farewell. After instructing Geet to call him when she got inside, Armaan pulled away, driving to the destination of his surprise.

Riddhima: Umm Armaan, that is not the way to my house

Armaan: I know that! I'm kidnapping you today. So just sit back, relax and enjoy the ride.

Riddhima closed her eyes and settled back in her seat. Things were finally turning out ok. She and Armaan were back together and they were going to get married soon. Married! Just the thought of being married to Armaan filled her with a warm tingly feeling.

Armaan smiled down at Riddhima who seemed to be lost in thought. He slipped his hand through hers, tightening his grip reassuringly. His phone buzzed with a new text and he smiled when he read the content. His friends down at the orphanage where he spent a bulk of his time had undertaken the task of making this night the most special one for his Riddhima.

His proposal had been less than perfect and not at all how he had envisioned it to be. Riddhima had been with him through good and bad and she deserved so much better than his hasty proposal and this was his way of making it up to her. He pulled over a little further than the location of his surprise and turned to Riddhima.

Armaan: We're here!

Riddhima: And where exactly is here?

Armaan: We're at the beach! And I have a surprise for you. Now I need you to close your eyes, I'm going to blindfold you till we get there.

Riddhima: Get where? She asked as she closed her eyes while Armaan tied a cloth over her eyes.

Armaan: You'll see! He answered back mysteriously. Slipping out of his seat, he walked over to Riddhima's side and held the door open for her. He then guided her over to the little cabana that his friends had constructed for them. He unknotted the cloth and watched as Riddhima's eyes lit up with happiness.

Armaan: Surprise, he whispered softly into her ear. She turned around and rushed into his arms, overwhelmed by his show of love. Her eyes brimming with unshed tears, she gazed into his smiling eyes.

Riddhima: I love you! She said. She did a slow twirl, taking in the beauty of the place before jumping back to Armaan with a squeal.

Riddhima: Thank You! Thank You! Thank You for making this night the best one of my life.

Armaan: You're Welcome! Now come on!

Geet made her way up the stairs and winced as a sharp pain nearly made her double over in pain. She bent over, taking in deep breaths, waiting for the pain to pass. She was regretting her decision to take the stairs instead of the elevator. Arriving on her floor, she slumped down to catch her breath.

Person: Geet! She turned so fast that she got a crick in her neck. Staring at her from across the hall was the undeniable figure of Maan Singh Khurana. He made his way to her, unsteady on his feet and it was then that she realized that he was DRUNK.

Wrinkling her nose in distaste as the pungent smell of alcohol hit her, Geet reached out a steadying hand to help Maan as he stumbled on his feet. Maan's bloodshot eyes clashed with her and in the vulnerable moment, she was exposed to every emotion he was feeling at the moment; joy, pain, fear, relief and an unknown feeling that warmed her to the tip of her toes.

Maan: Geet! I wanted to talk to you, he slurred.

Geet: Sir you are drunk! Chi Chi babaji! Come let's sober you up. Saying so, she grabbed his arm and started dragging him towards her apartment. You would expect Maan to follow her quietly, but no he dug his heels in and refused to budge an inch, protesting loudly.

Maan: But I don't wanna go in, he whined.

Geet: Maan! Come on, we'll go in and talk over a cup of coffee.

Maan: NO! I'm going to stay here and we'll talk here! He said and then crossed his arms like a petulant child. He then sat down on the floor in the middle of the hallway and refused to move. Geet had had enough at this point!

Geet: Maan Singh Khurana! Get up this instant! If you think I'm going to put up with your tantrums out of the office then you are mistaken. Now get up and get in! She said sternly.

Maan: Yes ma'am, he said meekly before rising to his feet wobbly and walking into the condo. Geet followed him in, shaking her head in amusement and despair.

Walking into the hall, Maan did a 360 turn, taking everything in at the same time. So this was where Geet lived, this was where she lived with that guy. The mere thought of Armaan made him frown but his curiosity got the better of him. His usual stern and reserved nature had taken a back seat and Geet watched in surprise and delight as he toured her condo with childlike delight.

Maan made a mental note of the pictures gracing the wall. There were a few of Geet and Armaan together but a bulk of the pictures were of some other girl or her and Armaan and for the first time all day, Maan let himself hope.

Geet had just turned the coffee machine on when she heard a loud crash in the living room. She ran out the kitchen, hoping that Maan was alright and found him sitting on the edge of the sofa with a guilty look on his face.

Geet: Maan! What did you do?

Maan: Nothing! He said guiltily, hiding his hands behind his back.

Geet: Don't you lie to me mister! Now be a good boy and tell me what happened?

Maan: Nahi! Pehle promishe karo! Plo- promish karo ke mujhe danto gi nahi.

Geet: Ok baba I promise! Now what are you hiding? Maan brought his hand forward and she saw that he was holding a broken picture frame.

Maan: It was an accident! Maine jaan booj ke nahi tora! Promish. Geet smiled at his adorable behaviour. It was then that she noticed that the frame had pierced his skin and his hand was bleeding.

Geet: Maan! Who told you to pick up the broken pieces? Dekha na chot lag gaye? She scolded.

Maan: You promised ke mujhe nahi danto gi! Tumne promise break kiya! Jao main tum se baat nahi karta.

Geet: I'm sorry! Now let me see that hand. We have to clean it and put some ointment on it. She smiled at him and he smiled back. Geet went to her room to fetch the first aid box and bandaged his palm.

Maan: Now kiss it! He said pushing his palm forward.

Geet: WHAT?

Maan: When I was little, my mommy would always kiss it better so kiss it to make it better! He looked up at her expectantly. Geet sighed and placed a soft kiss on his palm.

After putting the first aid box away, Geet walked into the kitchen and poured Maan a cup of coffee. Picking up the tray she walked back into the living room only to find Maan slumped down on the sofa fast asleep. Smiling despite herself she covered him with a blanket and slipped a pillow under his neck. She stood there studying his sleeping face for a while before kissing him softly on the cheek and retiring for the night.

i tried uploading the pic of the surprise Armaan gives but the pic just wouldn't show..i'll add the link though: http://valentineswallpapers.blogspot.com/2010/06/romantic-dinner-wallpapers.html

Its the 4th pic, the one in the cabana.. I would also like to ask people to like the post on pg 30 if they want to be added to the PM list

awsome update.

part 16
am completely shocked to see this side of Maan...
OMG Maan was literally behaving like a cute lil' kid...
only if Geet had recorded this...
Armaan Riddhima scene was nice...
Maan love him in this part...
cont soon...

loved the part! too good! cont soon! hehe drunk maan! want more AR though too!

wowww awesomeee

amazing part yaar

Originally posted by: shah10

awsome update.

maan was so cute

thank you!! Yea i wanted maan to be a bit more carefree

Originally posted by: Stupidcupid1234

Loved it
Update soon

thank you..i will

Originally posted by: spvd

part 16
am completely shocked to see this side of Maan...
OMG Maan was literally behaving like a cute lil' kid...
only if Geet had recorded this...
Armaan Riddhima scene was nice...
Maan love him in this part...
cont soon...

lool..i know..maan was totally unlike himself
yea he was behaving like a cute lil spoiled brat wasn't he
will continue later this week