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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: phoenixgirl

awesm update.. no, am definitely nt disappointd abt no SR. cos tat wud hv bn really weird considerng d situations... bt i for one fact knw tat maan is gonna fall hard 4 geet.. hes already in the path..



thank you for understanding why I didn't have Maneet SR.... and yes, Maan is going to fall in love with Geet but the question is will it be a good or bad thing for Geet?????? I hope you will enjoy reading part 8....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shining_moon

hey angel

though the SR was missing......it was still really sweet
loved their first moment.......hope to see some more in next part.....the precap already gives the hint😉
but do update soon
keep writing



I was worried that you all will be very displeased at the lack of SR between maneet... but glad to know that you found their first meeting sweet... the next part will have maneet but it won't be their own quiet moment... will be eagerly waiting for your views on Part 8!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

wow....beautiful update....very poignant.....wasnt expecting a SR as the character u have defined of geet is very innocent....and i'm expecting maan to be the considerate one here....btw what happened to the broken arm????



OMG! You don't know how happy i am at your question about the arm.... Lolz.... lets me know that my readers are following the story.... 😆 and as for Maan being considerate, he will be that which might lead to him getting frustrated and annoyed by his growing attraction towards his wife! as for the broken arm...it will come up in the future update....
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Posted: 14 years ago
When you posting chica? :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Hi Angel!!! This was the perfect part in my opinion. You cant have a SR and i'm so glad you didnt go that route. They need to know, trust, and love each other first before that step. They're not even acquainted with each other yet!

btw, your update made my day! First thing in the morning and voila! there's your update! Big thank you for that :-)
Hope you put the next part up soon. I'm so curious to actually see how's Geet's first day in her new house and her first convo with Maan :-)



Pushpi, thank you for such lovely comment.... I am one who hates to jump to SR just because the characters are married.... so rest assured, in this ff you will see the slow and steady progress maneet will make, like i stated before... it will start with both taking care of each other because they believe it's their duty but it will slowly lead to like, friendship, and love.... one step at a time, i just hope i will still you all hooked to this ff.... I will update the next part on Sunday night.... will be eagerly waiting for your views on part 8.... and if you have any suggestions or any particular scene you want me to add in my ff then please do let me know....
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Posted: 14 years ago
I LOVE the way you write! ;) I m loving how maan is actually thinking about his wife Geet & Geet seems too innocent & reserved ;)
I really want her to open up & be very confident.
need maybe some vicky & geet scenes (bhabhi&devaar) in the future..or maybe dev/NT/vicky teasing maan & geet..
but I want geet to be open with everyone especially Maan because now she knows he is her husband..
I could tell Maan is very much attracted to her ;P
Please Update soon ;D I will be waiting for your updates.
& I know this will take time...
thats why you should updt more often ;)
we need LONGER updates ;P I know they are pretty long but we neeedd a lot more longer if you will updt once or twice a week ;P
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelskiss



Pushpi, thank you for such lovely comment.... I am one who hates to jump to SR just because the characters are married.... so rest assured, in this ff you will see the slow and steady progress maneet will make, like i stated before... it will start with both taking care of each other because they believe it's their duty but it will slowly lead to like, friendship, and love.... one step at a time, i just hope i will still you all hooked to this ff.... I will update the next part on Sunday night.... will be eagerly waiting for your views on part 8.... and if you have any suggestions or any particular scene you want me to add in my ff then please do let me know....

Oh I'm so delighted to read about the slow progression of their story. I wouldnt call it a love story just yet. I'm looking forward to see the progress in their relationship step by step.
Be assured, I'm definitely hooked to this ff. Hhaha you'll think I'm stalking you (if you arent thinking that already that is). 😆
Looking forward to part 8
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

When you posting chica? :-)




Tomorrow; sunday night!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: XAiShBaBy08X

It was tooo short!! lol Poor Geet, she is sooo scared.


I can't believe Maan actually might have liked Sasha a little....? Ew. Gross.

Update soon!



too short? 😲 Okay, will try to give you a longer update... I know Maan liking Sasha is very hard to imagine, I considered using Sameera for Sasha's character but it just didn't click in because Sasha's character in this ff is very similar to the show's but in this ff she is much more negative....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: avem

No maan can't like 😡Sasha🤢 plz plz update soon i m dying to know what happened next geet's so scaredplz update soon




I know how eager you are to read the next update 😆 thank you for showing such enthusiasm.... I promise i will update tomorrow and hopefully you will enjoy reading part 8!

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