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Sanjeevani

@sanjulee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

the part was very nice....

geet is so innocent....

.......she fears about maan ....that he will bit her,............

and she doesn't know what is pati...

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Sanjeevani

@sanjulee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

plzz update soon...

& plz PM me....

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

wow....beautiful update....very poignant.....wasnt expecting a SR as the character u have defined of geet is very innocent....and i'm expecting maan to be the considerate one here....btw what happened to the broken arm????

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Hasina

@kellz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

geet is so cute here
so innocent running from maan

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Hi Angel!!! This was the perfect part in my opinion. You cant have a SR and i'm so glad you didnt go that route. They need to know, trust, and love each other first before that step. They're not even acquainted with each other yet!

btw, your update made my day! First thing in the morning and voila! there's your update! Big thank you for that :-)

Hope you put the next part up soon. I'm so curious to actually see how's Geet's first day in her new house and her first convo with Maan :-)

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

It was really cute!!!
Loved it!!!
Continue soon and please add me to your PM list as I did not get PM!!!

*Edited*
Just realized that you did send a PM but I had became blind!!! 😆😆
So Thanx for it!!!

Edited by -Zoya- - 14 years ago

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liv2laugh

@liv2laugh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

Lovely update. ⭐️

Hopefully Geet begins to realize that not everyone is as mean as her father and siblings. 😃

Please keep NT as a nice person. 😃

Jhan