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Posted: 14 years ago

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Next part:-

Next day eraly morning, geet wake up and found maan ready to leave the home for work.Geet get up and said where r u going today.

Maan sit besides her and said oh I have to go for urgent meeting. I'll try to come back soon.

Geet look worried and said soon mean.

Maan:- if u want to go hp then u can go with dadi ma and vicky.in formed vicky about my meeting and he has no problem to take u with him .

Geet:- wait,I'm not concerned about this hp tour but first tell u it's there anything emergency again or

Maan:- first relax and learn one thing quickly geet, ur husband is an army officer , we have to go anytime whenever they call us for duty.our duty first

Geet slowly said I know, I accepted that fact , it's ok, I just worried , nothing u can go, all the best .

Maan held her cheen and said look at me.

Geet try to control her tears and said y r crying now?

Geet:- baas aishi , kya mein ro bhi nehi sakti.

Maan:- nehi, cause u knw geet ur tears disturb me , so now stop crying,I'll meet u at hp.take care bye, don't skip foods.

Maan kissed her foreheads and said bye.

Geet just nodded and said all the best.

Maan give her a smile and left the room.

Later geet taking shower and making a food for all and packed them well.

Vicky :- bhabi , let's go every body is here .

Geet weakly smiles and said vicky I'll join with u all with ur bro.

Vicky:-but bhabi u have to go with us , lots of meeting and works are pending. Aap dono meine se kisi ko jana chaiye,

Geet:- we will go but not now, as u know maan is busy and I'll wait for him, pls vicky try to understand the situation,

Vicky:-but bhabi, , if bro will retrun …..

Geet raised her voice and said vicky .then said again , late hp jaoge , mein dadi ko bata deti hoon. Dadi ma medicine bhi pack kar dia hain.

Vicky :- bro u r very lucky . bhabi love u more than herself.Bhabi ek min,I'm sorry.Actually I want to say something else. May be bro will return tomorrow and u'll be here alone it's not safe .

Geet:-I can understand it but vikcy,I'll not go any where with out ur brother.I'll meet u all there .

Vicky:- ok bhabi as u wish but take care of ur self and pinky came and said I can stay with u and give u company.

Geet smiles and hug pinky and said no pinky go and enjoy the trip, I'll take care of my self.

Vicky:- forget it bhabi nehi manegi. Jao car meine baitho.

Dadi ma's room:-

Geet enter the room and said dadi, aap ready ho gaye?

Dadi ma smiles and said yes beta. Aap ready nehi hue aab tak.

Geet:- dadi ma , hum aapke sath nehi ja rehe hain, aap toh jante hain na maan went for some urgent meeting and I'll stay here, I'll join u all with him, if every one going like this then he will be feel alone,

Dadi ma smiles and said it's ok beta, stay here but take care of ur self ,

Geet nodded and taking her blessing .

At 12.30 pm. Maan called geet and asked about dadi ma?

Geet:- maan, ha dadi ma thik hain, oh hp ke liye chale gaye.

Maan:- oh ok. Take care.I'll meet u all at hp.

Geet:- maan ,wait, listen to me , I'm here .dadi and vicky and other are going to hp and almost by 5 pm in evening they will reach ed there. They will stop at some where for some work may be.

Maan:- what, r u joking or what, do u know dadi ma is heart patient and cancer patient and still u send her away . hwo could u do that geet, don't u have minimum responsibility towards dadi ma, u r a doctor but it's seems nothing like that, u forgot everything about ur duty , as a human also, how could u send away dadi ma like this,don't u know she needed medicine and yesterday she was unwell and still, vicky is kid and his friends are not aware of this fact, do u realize the importance of the fact, no u r not, for u love , love and only love is one word nothing more, hello I told u something …. Answer me .

Geet who was surprised to hear all accusation from her husband just close her eyes and said I …I… but her voice chocked and nothing came out.

Maan:- forget it. It's my fault to trust u and give u the responsibility of dadi ma.hello one min where is meena .

Geet:- with dadi ma.

Maan:- thanks atleast u send her with dadi ma.

Then maan just cut the call and here geet just sat in the couch and think again and again about maan's word and his accusation. She wants to shout and she want go away from everything. No one understand her,

Here, maan want to call dadi ma and vicky but again busy with meeting after 1 hour he was free and sat in her chair and close his eyes and said all troube cause of geet, she always gave me trouble since childhood,don't know how is dadi ma, I will call dadi ma. No I'll call vicky.

At evening , maan return from office and looks exhausted , geet saw him and palced glass of water and asked do u need anything more?

Maan looks at her and said geet.

Geet turns her face and said do u want to say anything more then go ahead, I know I did big mistake and I don't reserve any apology from any one .

Maan hold her shoulder and said pls look at me geet.

Geet:- maan , pls. leave me. And change and if u wants to go then car is ready.

Maan:- first u look at me.

Geet slowly truns and but lowered her heads .Maan held her cheen and said look at me geet.

geet look at maan and maan saw geet's red eyes . He never expected this,

Maan:- geet.I'm really sorry.

Geet:- kis baat ke liye.

Maan:- u know, I was angry that time after heard about dadi ma but I forgot that u r very much responsible than me for dadi ma, actually.I just… but geet cut him and said ur food is ready , changed and eat it if u needed.

Maan:-geet. I'm sorry.I don't know ….but geet free herself and said pls maan, I don't want to argue with u any more , pls .

Maan turns her forcefully and said shhh, chup ek dam and listen .I'm sorry .I'm really sorry.I don't want to hurt u , it's just. U know na my anger, I didn't think much that time. I'm sorry. Pls.

Geet look at maan and said leave me.

Maan:- no until u'll forgive me,I'll not leave u.

Geet struggled hard to free herself but fail. Maan: - sorry.

Geet:- maan.

Maan eyes falls on geet's lips and he feels attraction towards it but try to control it.

Geet looks at maan's eyes and lost there, unknowingly geet parted her lips and invite maan.

Maan feels to taste those lips and he close the distance between their lips and slowly kiss her lips and then nibble her lower lips, geer encircled her arms around maan's neck pull him towards her. Both kiss each other like no one is there, full world froze there. Maan invade geet's lips by his toungue and enter her mouth and play with her toungue. both kisses each other like no tomorrow.After lots of time both of them broke and maan rest his forehead on her forhead and breathing hardly and said I'm sorry geetu.

Geet who is blushed and her cheeks are red .Maan carrassed her cheeks and said u looking beautiful today .

Geet shyly smiles but suddenly remember maan's word and pushed him and said u hurt me maan, u hurt me every time.

Maan held her wrist and pull her and said I'm sorry na.I know that it's only my mistake, I never give u chance to speak but I'm really sorry.. But again geet cut him and said kha lo, then she turns but maan said actually I had little desert now and goes towards his room.

Geet hwo stand there and froze to hear maan's word.

Here in the shower maan think about previous incident and flashed he kiss geet, he feels good . he thinks y I'm feeling so good, y I'm feeling peace when she came close to me. When she smile at me, y I'm feeling sad when she cries.I don't' know y , what happen to me, I don't know but I'll never leave geet from now, her smile made my day, feel like every tiredness going some where.

Later maan came out and saw geet placed some food for him.Maan:- tumhara khana.

Geet:-I eat my lunch already. Meine tumhara tiffin pack kar dia hain aur kya chaiye bolna .

Maan:- tum.

Geet leave the place.

Maan enter the kitchen and said I'm sorry geet. pls maaf kar do na, tumhe pata hain na , mere gussa.

Geet tunrs and said yes pata hain , mujhe tumhara gusse pareshani nehi hain, par tumne kabhi socha hain tumne mujhe kya kaha, mere responsibility , well maan tumhara patni aur iss ghar ke bahu se pehele mein dadi ko janti hoon and I care for her but u never understand my feeling.I know u hate me and it's ur one of plan to send me away from ur life na.

Tears continuously falls from her yes and maan notice it .Maan:-geet. listen to me first.

Geet:- no,I"ll not, jab meine bola tumne suna nehi na.

Maan again held her wrist and pinn her in the wall and said geet, meine kabhi bhi koi plan nehi kya, nahi kabhi karungi,now pls forgive me. But pls eat something, I know u skip ur food this time also. Geet look at me .

Geet:- u hate me na.

Maan:- geettt. Never utter this word, u know hate is such big word , I'll never hate u geetu,I'll never,

Geet:- u .. and crying hard there but maan take her in his arms and said I'm really sorry.I never want to hurt u , it' sjust my anger u know na.

Geet hit his chest and said then go and do yoga .

Maan:- ok,I'll . now first u will eat with me.

Geet:- no.

Maan:- geetu, don't be child ,. Let's go and eat something,

Geet:- no.

Maan:- let's go. Geet.

Geet:- no.free me.

Maan smirks and suddenly lift her by her waist and take her to the table and said now eat other wise,I'll not .

Geet look at him and then maan again said . geetu, mere na aaj sara din aise hi gaya, khana nehi pani nehi, meeting ke baad meeting.

Geet hit him again and said jhooth bolo mat,mujhe kya samjhe tumne.

Maan gives her naughty smile and said sacchi, kunal se pucho.

Geet:- mujhe kisi se puchna nehi hain and chalo mein baith ti hoon khalo.

Both start to eat their food when maan notice geet's lips which are little swell and blushed and try to eat but again his eyes falls on there.

Geet notice it and shyly smiles and said dadi ma ka phone aaya tha, bola hain kab hum uha jayenge.

Maan:- jab aap kahenge,

Geet:-hmm,

After some time, bahadur drive the car and maaneet sat in the back of their car and said raat ko hum higway ke paas jo star link hotel hain uha rahenge,

Bahadur:- je shab jee.

Geet looks tired due to strees and tension and hurt by maan's word.

Maan saw her pale face and understand it. He feels bad and curse himself for shouting at her and blaming her.

Geet looks at her and again shyly said aise kya dekh rehe ho?

Maan:- kuch nehi,. Waise mujhe pta nehi tha mere geetu, aise sarmate hain.

Geet again smiles shyly and said mujhe nehi pata tha tum aise bhi ho.

Maan:-hmm kaise.

Bahadur:- sir ,

Maan angry on bahadur and said what happen?

Bahadur:- jee , hume star link pauchte pauchte adhi raat ho jayegi.

Maan:-hone do, no problem.usse pehele accha hotel nehi hain that will be safe.

Geet placed her head on maan's shoulder and closed her eyes .

Maan smiles and think about their relationship.

Maan to himself:- mujhe iye kya ho raha hain, jitna tumse dur jane ki koshish ki utna hi tumahra paas aarehe hain, pehele jis tarah humara shaadi hua, phir mere tumhe chor ke rehene , pata nehi kya hora ha hain, par geetu tumhe pata nehi, ke jab mujhe aur lerki na propose kya mujeh bura laga par jab mujhe pata chala u love ,I don't feel bad.I like it but still I don't want any problem in ur life . but one thing is sureI need u. may be I like u more than a friend. It's not only attraction, it's something else but I like u company, I'll never leave u .I lever let u to leave me.

He looks at geet who is sleeping peacefully.

They reached at hotel and maan looks at outside it's very dark and lonely .

Maan:- geet. Wake up sona,

Geet:-hmmm and more tightly and said sone do.

Maan:- geetu, then said iye aise nehi uthegi, and take her in his arms and go towards the hotel.

He saw kunal and her wife is there.

Kunal :- wow, honey moon couple.

Maan shook his head and said just close ur mouth, room book kya,

Kunal:- yes but oh toh tere liye hain.I think tune bola tha ekela aayega, aur bhabi, hp already .

Maan:- oh mere saht janeke liye nehi gaya so naturally she is . but kunal complete his sentence and said in ur arms right.

Maan blushed and said help me to opne the door and go to room soon.

Kunal's wife priya said bhaiya ,aap hume bhagane mein itna jaldi meine kyuon ho.

Maan:- tum dono ek ho.

Kunal help him to opne the door and then wished him good night and maan close the door by his leg and placed geet on the bed and then lock the door and said iye lerki, mujhe pagal kar degi.

Maan changed his dress and said geet, get up and changed ur dress.

Geet turns and said mujhe sone do.

Maan shook his head and lay besides her.

Precap:- more maaneet moments.

Maaneet reached hp and geet doing some thing naughty with maan and he look angry.

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Posted: 14 years ago

hi all how r u al

updated next part.
loved to read all comments , ur comments inspired me lots.I'll reply ur comment soon.
yes I know it's short but it has reason cause next part will reveal many thing and it's the base of next part.
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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hai that was a nice long update, nice reading and loved the way you develop geet and msk's character. cant wait for the next episode
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Posted: 14 years ago
fantic update pls cont soon i hope Maan realize his in love with Geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update ... Can't wait to read the next part ... Please update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr888888!!
Loveee the part.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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Posted: 14 years ago
hi thst was awesome just loved it maaneet part was superb just loved it so maan is slowly relaizing update soon and tha nks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
awesome one
loved it
do continue soon

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