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Part2:-

Next day, as usual maan wake up early and straight goes to his work out room. Here in the , hoshiyarpur geet also wakes up early and doing yoga.

Next two days both , geet and maan are too busy with their respective work.

But in hoshiyarpur, still geet trying to convince munshi jee that call maan or savitri devi and tell everything is fine here.

But munshi jee:- beti , aap samajh nehi rehe ho iye sir fuss property ke baat nehi hain , aur bhi baat hain.

Geet:-Pata nehi aur kya problem hain.

Mushi jee:-iye sab aap choriye , aapne room thik karne ko kaha chandu ko.

Geet:-ha , kehe dia,

Munshi jee:-kya hua beti, itne pareshan kyuon ho. Chote baba(munshi je called maan as chote baba) arehe hain isliye.

Geet:- nehi oh actually, chachu( geet addressed munshi jee as chachu) maan ko mujhse problem kya hain,oh har time itne gusse mein kyuon rehethe hain?

Munshi jee:-neti beti oh baas unhe jada gussa aajata hain ,aur kuch nehi chalo tumne kaha na tumhe preeti se milna hain jao milke aao.

Geet:-ha ,mein toh bhool gayi , dekha aapake pyaare maan baba ke chakkar mein ,humesha mein late hoti hoon.

Munshi jee smiles and said samal ke bete.

Geet:-don't worry chachu''.

Munshi jee:- aab jab iha maan ke aane ka asli bata pata lagega tab kya hoga, madam ne kehe dia sab samal ne , maan aur geet maan jayega par agar na mane toh.

Here in the Delhi, after two days, maan is ready to leave delhi and savitri devi looking worried now.

Savitri devi want to tell maan something but cannot.

Maan noticed it but think may be cause of her health.

Maan:- dadi ma, don't worry, uha meine sam kuch samal lunga, u don't worry'..

Savitri devi murmurs sab kuch small lenge iya, ,

Maan:- aapko iye geet ka bemari kyuon laga hain, aapne aapse baat karma bandh kijiye aur medicine time pe lena,

Savitri devi:-beta hum aapse ek baat puch sakte hain.

Maan sit on his knees and said dadi ma, aapko kabhi bhi , humse aap kuch bhi kabhi puch sakte hain, boliye kya baat hain.kuch pareshani hain.

Savitri devi:-oh aap humesha geet se gussa kyuon karte ho?

Maan shouts almost whaaatt?

Savitri devi :-dekha aapne , geet ka naam nehi lye aapka shout karma suru hogaya.

Maan:- aap aagar aise baat puchenge toh aisa hi hoga. Anyway geet se mujhe koi dushmani nehi hain baas we r different so, now chill, and take rest, I'm going now. Take care bye. Then maan kissed her forehead.

Savitri devi smiles and said bye, take care ur self.

After some hours, maan reached at hoshiyarpur.

Maan came staright to their haveli and see a woman cover her face and said aaiye maan jee, aapko hoshiyarpur meine swagat hain.

Maan look surprised and said who r u?

That lady:-jee kya kaha aapne , hume hindi nehi aati.

Maan thinks I heard this voice somewhere but who is she and then said jee aap kaun hain , munshi jee aur geet kaha hain?

That Lady:- jee munshi jee ko kuch kaam that oh unhe jana para aur geet jee , hume pata nehi jee, par unhone kaha aap iha ke malik hain th aapke aache swagat kya jaye.

Maan:-ok, forget it and now move,

That lady:- jee,

Maan:- aap agar kripa karke iha se hatenge toh hume andar aasakenge.

That day:-par, aapka aarti utar na toh abhi baki hain jee .

Maan:- dekhiye , hum iha bachpan se kahi baar aachuke par ,kabhi iye sab nehi hua, and aap chaliye mujhe andar aane dijiye.

That lady:-nehiiiiiiii.

Maan looks frustrated and murmur geet ka duplicate lagta hain, uff kaha phash gaya mein, iye munshi jee aur geet kaha hain pata nehi,

Tha lady giggles and said jee aapne kuch kaha.

Maan:-nehi, chaliye utariye jo utarna hain.

That lady looks shocked and said kyaaaaaaaaaa

Maan embarrassed and said matlab aarti utariye'..

That lady :-oh ha.

Maan shook his head and then that lady taking arti of maan and then said aaiye aap andar aaiye aapka iha swagat hain, aapna hi ghar samjhe.

Maan to his mind aapna hi ghar, oh God.

Maan enter the haveli and then again that lady that are rukiye na.

Maan stops and said jee kahiye..

That lady:- suniye aapna uss kaamre mein jayenge pls.uha khatra hain. Uha koi aata hain aadhi raat ko.

Maan looks irritated and said what, r u gone mad, what is this? r u playing with me or thinking that m also child.

That lady:-dekhiye aap kya bol rehe hain , hume kuch samajh mein nehi arraha hain, aapko pata iha kya hota hain raat ko.

Maan:- iha kya hota hain ?

That lady almost inaudible voice mein kaha bhoot aata hain roj aadhi raat ko.

Maan:- aap kripa karke thora jor se kehenge .

That lady:-nehi agar hum unke naam zor se le toh oh hume bhi pakar lenge. Isliye kaha na aap oh kariye.

Maan:- dekhiye iye sab choriye , koi agar aapko pakar ne aaye toh mujhe kahiye mein unn sab se baat karunga,

That lady:-kya aap unn sab se baat karenge.

Maan: - ha to hiss mein itna chaukne ke kya baat hain?

That Lady holds her head and sits in the floor and said something inaudible.

Maan frustrated and said dekhiye sab bandh kijiye aur meine jaraha hoon aapne room mein, agar geet aur munshi jee aaye toh bolna mujhe .

That lady nodded in positive.

Maan enter to his room and said iye naya musibat kaun hain? Par mujhe kyuon iske baat aur kahi iya geet toh nehi.

Here at the downstairs that lady removed her ghunghat and said good going geet puttat, keep it up. U r foolded the great Maan Singh Khurana..

Someone roared Captain Maan Singh Khurana '..

Geet turns and saw maan standing there with anger on his eyes.

Geet try to smile but maan roared again geeeettttttttt and almost running and geet also try to run both are reached outside and after some chasing geet heard some one screamed aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh.

Geet stops and turns and saw maan falls on the muddy ground and his face, with mud. his cloth are cover with mud'''

Geet saw it and laughing there.

Maan looks irritated and said geeet.

Geet hold her stomach and sat on the ground and said kya scene hain.

Maan:- geeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttttttttt.

Geet:-mujhe pata hain mere naam geet hain , don't shout it's not ur office, neither ur battle field.

Maan:- u . tumahari wajay se mein iha . uff this mud.

Geet:- if some one walking like this then what is my fault.

Maan:-geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt.

Geet close her ears and said shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, don't shout agar tum samajhte ho tum jor se shout kar sakte ho then mein bhi kar sakti hoon.Samjhe'''..

Maan:-geeeet, u'll pay for this soon.

Geet:- all the best Maan singh Khurana.

Maan glared at her then geet said uff I forgot. Captain Maan Singh Khurana.

Maan:- give me ur hand.

Geet:- no way,

Maan:- what, no way, tumahari wajay se mein iha hoon now give me ur hand.

Geet:- oh ho oh ho, iha kya hindi scene ka shooting chal raha hain hero girgaya aur gao ki lerki se help mang raha hain . cause that gao ki gori usse iha phasaya hain but mind u captain Khurana it's not my fault , it's u who runs behind me and don't see any where and jumped here.

Maan:- geet aapna irritated baatein bandh karo and give me ur hand.

Geet:-no way, sometimes, I wonder, who gave u job in Army.

Maan:-Geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. Just close ur mouth for one sec. if u not want to help me then go ahead ,

Geet:-no,

Maan:- what no.

Geet:-na, mein iha dekhna chahathi hoon , tum kaise aapne aapko iha se niklate ho.

Maan:- u r impossible.

Then somehow maan managed and came out from that muddy ground and then looks at geet naughtily and said iha koi pani ke place nehi hain,

Geet:- kyuon?

Maan:- mujhe pata hain tum kam samajhte ho par ek dam nehi samajhte ho iye mujhe aaj, abhi pata chala.

Geet:-maan , agar tum aapna puzzle bhara baatein bandh karo aur clearly mujhe samjhao kya chaiye.

Maan:-mujhe aapna hath pair dhona hain pani se toh , I want water.

Geet:-oh .toh ghar chalo uha dho lena.

Maan think for some sec and then said iss halatmein jau toh ghar ganda ho jayga

Geet thinks for some secs and then shout oh hello jee, aab mujhe samjah mein agaya, na jee, I'll not help u, meine tumhe help karu aur tum mujhe phasao'.. na jee.

Maan:-kya ulta seedha bol rehe ho'..

Geet tunrs to live but for muddy ground she slipped and falls on the muddy ground.

Now maan's turns to laugh.

Geet looks at him angrily and then thinks iye sadu toh haste hue bahut handsome, cute lagta hain.

After some moments she said oye kaise captain ho, khare khare '..

Maan:- some one told me that something sometimes ago.

Geet:- oyee.kuch toh saram kar,ek ekele lerki aise problem hain .

Maan:- hay kaun ekele lerki tum , I have full doubt aur problem meine tum nehi meine phasha tha tumahra wajay se aur oh jo uparwala hain na oh sab dekhta hain so mere kuch akrne se pehele usne tumhe ussi problem mein daal dia aab dekho doosre ke liye gaade kholne se kya hota hain.

Geet murmur uff ek baar help kya mangi meine inka toh pura book ready free ka gyan ka, chalo buy it.

Maan:-kya aapne aapse baat kar rehe ho.

Geet:- aapne aap se nehi soch rehi hoon, aap ek book kyuon nehi likhte.

Maan:- kya?

Geet:- ha free of gyan by Captain Maan singh Khurana.

Maan:-Geeettt. Tumhe majak lag raha hain sab baat.

Geet:-oh hello, ek toh baar baar geet, geet mat bolo,I know my name is Geet Handa and second sahi baat bol rehi hoon, ek help kya manga aur free ka gyan de rehe ho toh kya karu, ek toh iye saree and upar se iye mud.

Maan:- aah ahhh kya suna meine Geet Handa wants my help.

Geet:- sunne meien problem hain tumhe kya.

Maan now goes straight to mud and said what do u mean by this sentence.

Geet:-iye ki u have some problem in ur ear.

Maan:- geet. U r'..

Here, both are unware of the the some villagers are saw them and start their gossip.

After some arguments, both came out from the mud and going straight to search water''.

Precap:- maan fights with some boys who are teasing geet. Maan scold geet badly.

Geet is missing.

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